narrative writing

Memoir Draft

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Sometimes, no matter where you are or what you’re doing, a song can come on and hold your entire brain hostage.  Images flood through you like a busted dam and all you’re able to do is remember.  For me, right now, that song is The Joker by the Steve Miller Band and all I can see is cocaine and Evangelists.

I’m sixteen.  It’s 2006.  I’m sitting cross-legged on the ground of a circular, high-ceilinged room with huge panoramic windows looking out over the ridiculously beautiful Princess Louisa Inlet of British Columbia.  I’m high as shit from the cocaine I just did in the bathroom with my good friend, Michal.  I look over at her, about six cross-legged teenagers away from me.  Then I look at all of the other people in the room.

There’s about 200 of us with very minimal wiggle room.  My heart rate spikes a bit as the reality of my inability to leave the amphitheater sets in.  Boasting a few long, horizontal steps to provide stadium-type seating, people are situated behind, above, and all around me.  The high wooden ceilings amplify the chatter and I begin to sweat and fiddle with my hands.  I stare at an empty chair and mic stand on the stage, thinking about how I’m ready for someone to start talking to us about Jesus.

The lights dim and a sound begins to pour out of the speakers on the varnished, wooden stage.

“Some people call me the space cowboy, yeah.”

The chatter lessens a bit.

“Some call me the gangster of love.

Some people call me Maurice.”

Where do I know this song from?  Ah, yes, 40-something stoners love this shit.

The song continues on and a brown-haired white boy no more than ten years older than me comes onto the stage with a solemn look on his face.  He grabs the mic from the stand and sits in the chair as a spotlight focuses on him.  He does not look up at the crowd.  He looks down at the mic in his hands.

“I’m a joker.

I’m a smoker.

I’m a midnight toker.”

Someone in the sound room is fading the music.

“I sure don’t want to hurt no one…”

The music is cut and I’m experiencing silence and tension like I never have before.  My knees are bouncing and my teeth are grinding, but I’m not worried about being found out.  I could have ADHD, no one knows my medical history here.

Suddenly, the unidentified white male looks at the crowd with an “I used to be like you” face.  Here we go.

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Him

“Hey, just calling in again to check up on you. I texted you three times before, I’m not sure if you saw them anyways call me when you’re free. Love you, bye.”

Anxiously and disappointedly, I pressed the send button and turned my phone faced down on my desk, waiting for his response. I went back to giving my cancer-stricken mother her horse-pill medicine and got ready for work.

Employed by the Jewish Community Center of Bensonhurst for five months now, I was starting to feel adjusted, however the anxious feelings crept creeping in. My boss seemed to appreciate my “hard” work and my work ethic, so it seemed like I was certain to get a promotion so I can help out with my mom’s hospital bills. However, my writing was finally gaining some attention, and I was feeling a wee bit confined as my small chance of an opportunity to chase my dreams and make them into a reality.

As I was returning phone calls to parents that left voicemails asking about the summer program, I saw that I only make ten out of twenty calls and none of the parents sounded like they were interested enough to enroll their child into the summer program. I hated this part of the job. How enduring can I be when my heart wasn’t into this job? I mean sure I’m “helping” making great summer memories—but I highly doubt that I was doing that.

My phone flashed and vibrated. God took him long enough. Can’t believe that he’s actually answering this time.

“Hey big girl I saw your messages, what are you doing?” my dad finally texted back.

I smiled and shook my head. My dad could barely remembered his birthday, so it would be a piece of cake to surprise him.

“I’m at work now, but I wanted to know what are you doing this weekend?,” I quickly texted back.

“Nothing much, why what’s up,”

I told him that I wanted to take you out to lunch and catch up, to see what you’ve been up to.

“Oh cool, lucky me! I’m not doing anything this weekend so sure we can have lunch, I’ll tell Jessica to come along.”

I held my phone in my now sweaty hands and re-read the last text that my dad sent. What a weird joke! As far as I knew my dad was single and wasn’t “looking for anything” at least that’s what he told my younger siblings and I.