So far i have finished my outline/zero draft for the essay. I have also started to write my introduction, in doing so I have noticed a couple of changes I have to make already. My outline was really straightforward into where to write what. However as I started to write I noticed all the parts got intertwined. The different parts of the essay, whether it be ethos,logos and pathos, they all connect. Hence I can’t write them in separate paragraphs or in any order. I have to reorganize my outline in a way that would connect all my ideas flawlessly. For instance I started writing about the audience and I noticed I started writing about the language used and who was speaking. Therefore mixing everything together instead of separately.
