“What Happened The Night Trayvon Martin Died”
By: Greg Botelho
The CNN news article entitled, “What happened the night Trayvon Martin died,” written by Greg Botelho details the events that took place the night 17 year old Trayvon Martin lost his life by 28 year old George Zimmerman. Told in a sequential order, there were a few observations vital to the make-up of this article along with the case in general. Firstly, we see an act of disobedience. George Zimmerman despite being ordered not to follow Trayvon, took it upon himself to do the opposite. He consciously made the decision to take care of the situation as he saw best fit. Had he had chosen to listen; readers and observers are only left to assume that a life would have been spared. Secondly, we transition into a state of obscurity. No one is 100% certain as to who initiated the fight or argument that led to the killing of Trayvon. It is unclear whose voice is calling for help. The mere fact that there isn’t any hard core evidence or witnesses to what took place instantly poses as a major issue as the case then becomes ones sided. Lastly, we see the concept of racial profiling being questioned, “Martin’s family have said they believe Zimmerman, a white Hispanic, profiled the African-American teen.” Readers are once again left up in the air to formulate based on the evidence presented, what really took place on the night of February 26. Lastly, we sense a lack of urgency or concern for the decease as Botelho notes that Zimmerman was “Subsequently arrested and, eventually, released on bail.”
“In America, Black Children Don’t Get to Be Children”
By: Stacy Patton
You only needed to pick one. I will comment on the first. I think you have good observations about the way the article plays up the uncertainty of the events and the fact that Zimmerman acted as independent agent and against the advice of officials. I think though that your presentation of these observations and the way you reflect on them in the end keep this post from being a description so much as it is the beginning of an argument. Especially when you go to “the fact that there isn’t hard core evidence . . .” you’ve left the description behind.