I thought this essay was easier to write because we actually had a base as to what we were going to write about. For the first essay it was really difficult to formulate a thesis not to mention having to write an essay on it. I felt that my second essay is definitely better than my first, at the very least i’m not going to have to revise it as much. Having heard the three introductions from my fellow classmates, however, made me feel that my essay is probably a lot weaker compared to theirs. Nonetheless, I am still confident that my second essay came out a lot better.
I am excited to get the first paper back as well as concerned at the same time. Probably more concerned only because it was made clear that the grading policy isn’t all too easy. I am excited, however, to get back the second paper along with comments to see if I really did better like I thought I did.
yea when we analyzed our classmate’s introductions I felt the same way you did, I’m like ‘ I have a lot of work to do’ lol..but it kinda encouraged me as well