After seeing the works of my peers, I learned how to develop my set of ideas further; My introduction was lacking structure and a substantial thesis to begin with. I think that I should continue to refine my thesis about chances and opportunity and to reread and analyze the work I will be using again. Other than that, I think that I need to be analyzing the texts further in terms of how it is structured and symbolic in meaning, as did Eli.
As for the continuation of this paper, I do not really see any problems that I will be having other than the amount of effort that I will be putting into my coming drafts. Hopefully over the break, I will be able to substantiate my thesis further and incorporate a complete analysis of the written works. After all, works are only as great as to how much effort is put into them.
