I am having a hard time revising my essay. I am really unsure about the poem that I chose to write an essay on, because I don’t know how much I could develop my thesis statement. That is after considering my thesis statement is clear to the reader. My rough draft was mostly on how I connected to the city, I felt like this poem was different. It resembled more like a story than a poem, which is also one of the reasons that I decided to write about this poem. I thought this was the only poem that I could really connect to and I really liked how the author described his experience in different circumstances. After reading this poem, I found a connection between me and the reader that we both like to look around our surroundings and learn lessons from it.
I think, I will be able to better revise my essay after I get the peer reviewed essays back from my peers. Also, I think that I will be able to further review and fix my mistakes after I get my rough draft back from prof. Kaufman.
