Paper 3 Update

After the peer reviews and the individual conference, I realized that I took my paper into a different direction than I wanted. Instead of focusing on the author’s biography and its effect on the poem, I decided to focus on the poem’s style instead. I revised my thesis to talk about how the cinematic narrative of the poem and its format adds to the lesson of the poem about the importance of private self awareness. I have many new ideas about the poem that I will use to revise my essay. Because part of my thesis is about the movie effect that this poem has and the cinematic ending of the poem, I will have to do research on the different types of movie endings and why the producers use those ones specifically.  I also have to think about why the poem ends the way it does and how to use it to prove my argument. I still have a lot of work to do and am looking forward to rebuilding my essay.