I’ve had a few realizations and changes in the past week regarding my thesis. I thought I improved my thesis enough for my rough draft but I was wrong. After having the peer review and the individual conference I finally understood how to make my thesis more specific and not cliche. The comments that I received really helped me move forward with my ideas and shape my paper. I finally changed my thesis to be an argument and not a broad and obvious statement. Instead of closely analyzing the idea of the poem, I put my ideas that relate to the poem. I had to change my entire essay again and relate it to the new thesis but I think that I FINALLY got it!
The idea of my digital essay hasn’t changed a lot. I’m going to go tomorrow to central park to do my digital project. I’m meeting some of my friends over there and I hope I can finish filming everything in one day!
