After sitting down to read my paper after all the peer reviews and individual conferences last week, I realized just how much I needed to work on. Peer reviews gave me feedback on how I should include more information that i could find on researching about the author, and how the introduction and the length of the paper needed to be worked on. While the individual conference helped me in narrowing the paper down to a specific topic instead of the broad spectrum that I chosen before.
I am still facing some difficulties doing the paper, which are mostly to do with the arguments presented in the paper. I think i might want to choose a different subtopic under the same theme, rather than the one i am doing right now. I think that’s because I am being repetitive and ambiguous in the paper. If after a few more attempts it does not go the way i want, then i would proceed to changing the topic.