Assignment#4 Thesis Statements

Thesis #1: The depiction of celebrities by social media controls and influences people perception of them.

Thesis #2: The relationship of the parent to child shows the ability of the parent to imprint and shape the child’s beliefs and ideals.

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  1. JMERLE says:

    Wenne,
    Both of these topics are interesting, and both could be quite nice explorations. Both, though, need to be more specific. In the first, think of a particular area (advertising, entertainment, etc.) and then how, specifically, the celebrity influences a specific demographic. If you can use how you yourself have been influenced (or a friend) this would eliminate the need for more secondary sources. If you choose the second, make sure you focus on a specific relationship, and a specific area of influence; otherwise, your essay could be too general.

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