Thesis: The TPP for the NATO were not bad for the welfare of general public but it was very bad for local business and independent business owners.
In this essay I will be looking at the new article in the Economist magazine and will be doing my research further about the effects of trade policies in the american society and other international communities. The article is focused on people who are not familiar with trade policies and left wing liberals who have misconceptions about trade policies.
I think that you could definitely improve on your thesis by building on what exactly bad means. One thing you did well was specify the demographic of local and independent business owners. I think that the topic you have chosen is interesting because it is something that is not known to everyone in the everyday world. You can use many examples to back up your argument.
-Arraf
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Please look again, specifically, at the assignment sheet for Essay #2. Remember, your thesis needs to address the effectiveness of an article in reaching a specific demographic. You are not to argue the issue yourself, for this essay, but to analyze the effectiveness of a writer’s article, speech, or essay.