Thesis: Although Apple thought it would be best not to aid the FBI to unlock a terrorist’s iphone; an opposite result occurred and now Apple and its customers are vulnerable to the government.
Plan: In order to properly analyze the effectiveness in reaching the demographic, I would have to introduce why the FBI asked Apple to unlock the iphone. I would also discuss why Apple decided to go against the FBI, and how these actions are being led to negative consequences for Apple’s customers. Overall, ruining Apple as a brand and its reputation.
Actual to my knowledge the statement you made is false, the battle between the government(NSA) and Apple was the mere fact that the government wanted Apple to right a program to discript its own coding which is unprecedented in the business world and in the community of consumer affairs. As it unfolds they are playing cat and mice game secretly NSA without any legal consent decoded the security coding. At end it’s all about power, the laws of nature is rightly based on protecting turf. Though economically Apple is doing well than U.S government the land that the business is based on is in the hands of the U.S government and rightfully so they can do what as they pleased Apples hands is tied and they can’t progress the battle, it’s not about branding it’s about Power….
Mohammed Baba
Mohammed Baba
Alisha,
Yes, this is an engaging topic, but please look again at the assignment sheet for Essay #2.
Your are to analyze the effectiveness of a writer in reaching a specific demographic, and that, in fact, will be your thesis (the overall effectiveness or ineffectiveness of a writer’s article, essay or speech). The bulk of your essay, then, will be analyzing specific aspects of the article’s effectiveness/ineffectiveness.
I don’t agree to the statement: “Overall, ruining Apple as a brand and its reputation.” Apple was saving its reputation by going against the government and not helping. They didn’t want the government to hack into any iPhone. They were fighting for the same cause you believe in. Overall this is a very engaging and current topic, so it will be a great essay. You should find out all the details on how the FBI got access to the iPhone. This kind of technology is very dangerous at the government’s disposal. Very interesting thesis statement.