It is still the choice of parents whether or not to immunize their kids, but, still it is necessary to have feelings for others too.
I will be explaining an article from “Newsday”, which is basically about the MMR and vaccinations. Specifically, it’ll talk about whether or not people should immunize their kids. It is a serious matter which Is significant in US politics. Putting light on perspectives of both side, those in favor and against, I’ll discuss some examples which will acknowledge us what let those both sides think the way they do. Further details will talk about the after effects of ignorance of such basic immunization.
I feel your thesis statement can be expanded upon by stating what “feelings” are caused by some parents’ decision to not immunize their children. As for your statement and plan on how you will structure the essay, It’s pretty solid because you plan to cover both sides of the argument. I also think your essay can benefit from inputting your own stance on the issue within the conclusion or wherever in the essay that is possible.
Hamza,
Please read, again, the assignment sheet for Essay #2, and let me know if you have questions, okay? The intent of this essay is not that you, yourself, should argue for or against something, but that you will analyze the effectiveness or ineffectiveness of a writer in reaching a specific demographic with his arguments, tone, language, etc.