After reading my own writing and performing the ethos/pathos/logos analysis, I saw how If I had not used it, my writing would’ve been very in effective. Re-readng my own wording again made me notice a lot of changes I could have made. Using these methods to write would really improve my writing  and allow me to be more detailed than I am right now. Using ethos/pathos/logos make persuasive writing far more balanced and adequate. Using the rhetorical method of analysis, I distinguished a lot of things I could have done differently to make my writing more conniving and proper. The Toulmin method is a great method to write clear and efficiently. Both of these methods can help me improve as a writer. The more clear I can write out my thoughts, the more higher quality my writing will be. These methods, were enhancing my writing as I was analyzing my own writing from last year in high school. If I were to use these methods instead of the way I wrote, I would have an exceptional piece of writing.