I must first start out by saying how much I love this style of poetry, and I wish to read more poems this blunt and honest, as opposed to those with floods of metaphors and fancy language. I suppose one could say that in truth, poetry has no ‘style’. But the way in which Layli Long Soldier presents the poem feels as though she is telling a story to relatives. She makes it clear what poetic devices she uses and intends to use, and in this way breaks the “fourth wall”. Her calm nature in which she writes her poem, as well as the way she points out her italics in writing bring more attention to her statements and how they connect to her narration.
Layli has a double meaning behind the quote “Everything is in the language we use.” She is not only referring to the essence of our English language itself, but also referring to the rules she is using in her writing and most importantly, the betrayal of the Dakota Nation as a result of said language in legal contracts. Keeping in mind the quote, Layli tells where the name Minnesota comes from; mni, meaning water and sota, meaning turbid (muddy and confused). The name of the state is ironic and funny in a dark way (considering the way the Dakota were pushed off their land). Layli also keeps this quote in mind when talking about the many broken treaties that ruined the Dakota Nation and forced them off their land.
I normally don’t like poems, but this was easy to read, super informative and creative in a non-creative way. I like the author’s blunt writing, I hope to read more like this!
I totally agree with you about the quote having a double meaning as it was described in the poem perfectly. The poem was incredibly informative by voicing the stories of those silenced in history and conveys how the double meaning is used throughout history and against those of Dakota. The blunt writing style helps understand the meaning that is being conveyed which I also agree that it gets the meaning across in a way that is unique to other poetry but also not “creative.”
I agree that I am not the biggest fan of poems, however this one was unique and I enjoyed it. I also find it interesting how you pointed out how the author told us how the name Minnesota came from words such as muddy, which is ironic. The dark nature of the killings of The Dakota people as well as them being tricked by the US government fits in with the origin of the name Minnesota.