Antons essay was a fresh interesting take on walking in flushing. While most only shower praise he voices his gripes with the neighborhood and what can be done to fix it very well. The essay however does need to be elaborated on more and I think some additions to the actual content of the essay would stand to benefit it. Some suggestion of topic that I think anton should add would to be talk about the crowded nature of flushing maybe even relate it back to the tenement buildings of the great depression. Another interesting topic that I personally know about that I think would improve Antons essay would be the effects of brake dust on humans in large crowded cities. It would slot perfectly in during the section about canal street and all the noise pollution caused by traffic in such a population dense area. He could also very easily find his fourth source for this topic as there is a-lot of literature and studies on the topic with growing environmental concern of the public.