– “They must detach themselves from their own pages so that they can apply both their caring and their craft to their own work. Such detachment is not easy.” (Page 27)
Detachment is impossible. There is no way for one to completely detach themselves from their work, yet it is what we ask of ourselves when we strive to improve our skills in a given field. We can’t just forget about all the time and effort we put into our work when we seek to improve our craft, and this is why detachment is so hard. I believe that detachment is never completely attainable, but that we can work to try to get as close to that point as possible. When we detach our egos from the work we create, we are able to steer our work in a direction that is closer to what we envision it to be; this is why we revise.
Writing is a form of expression in its most early state. When we have something to share, or we are passionate about something, we can use words to express that. The words that we use are an initial attempt at teaching someone something, telling a story, or evoking an emotion. Often times, the words we use in our first attempt of writing do not achieve the desired goal of transmitting an idea from the mind of the writer to the mind of the reader. For the writer, this holy grail of transmission can only be achieved through the thorough act of revision.
Revision is not glamorous; it takes lots of hard work. It requires the writer to read their own work as if it was not their own. They must become overly critical of their work. In fact, they should strive to be more critical than anyone else when it comes to their writing. If a writer is more critical of their work than everyone else, this means they are progressing in their skills of detachment and criticism. Revision is also detailed; it requires one to re-read every page, every line, even down to a single word to see what could be improved upon. The more detailed one is with their revisions, the better the end result will be.
Revision is the part of writing that is noticed the least. The initial writing is what gets all of the credit since, after all, it’s the only reason a writer could even revise their work in the first place. The actual majority of a writer’s work is involved in perfecting their initial writing. Even though 90 percent of a writer’s work is involved in revising, the 10 percent of the work – which is the initial writing – is what takes the cake. This gets down to the root of why the average reader’s expectation of writing is so inaccurate: as readers, we have been deceived into believing that the majority of a writer’s work is involved in writing because we only see the final product. The result of this is that when a reader, such as a student, must write an essay or a story, they don’t understand the full process that a true writer must go through to finish a piece of work.
Revision is the most important part of the writing process. It’s what allows someone to transmit their ideas into the mind of another person in a more effective manner. It can turn a good piece of writing into an outstanding one. By detaching yourself from your work and being your own worst critic, you can begin to improve your revision skills. But this is something that must be approached with caution. Your criticism and judgment could lead to your own demise. When a writer grows to be too critical, they can find themselves never finishing and eventually giving up on what, at one point, had given them so much inspiration and joy. “Writers must learn to be their own best enemy,” but don’t mistake your best enemy for your worst enemy. The best writer is the one who applies criticism to their work with care so that they improve their writing, but also don’t lose their love for it.