dig a little deeper

Dig a little deeper with your artists statements!  Each component that everyone has written about could be expanded.  What is the every day?  What is vibrancy?  What is a close up?  What are hands doing in a POV shot?  We can find a lot of meaning in very simple things.  If your video seems more interesting than your statement (and for the most part I think that is the case), how can you change that?  We’ll talk about artists statements in crit along with the videos and collectively see how we can re-write them.