Bitzer presents a very interesting argument. He states that the rhetorical situation is often undervalued and supports it through examples such as Kennedy’s Inaugural Address and the fishermen expedition. He capitalizes on one thing that really caught me and that is the importance of a presence of a rhetorical situation in order for discourse to be successful. He supports this main claim, I feel, through the exemplification of ethos, pathos, and logos(exigence, audience, constraint). For exigence, he states that “exigence is not rhetorical…without the assistance of discourse”. Bitzer used an example that really helped me understand what he meant; and that example was with the mentioning of the pollution subject. For audience, he uses a very good claim about how ‘scientific and poetic’ discourse does not reach out to a designated audience. He also added before that that a rhetorical audience “only consists of those who are capable of being influenced by discourse and of being mediators of change.” Lastly, for constraints, Bitzer says that there are factors that hold the audience back from making a decision of change; which is highly true.
I really felt that Bitzer made a great point in this text, “The Rhetorical Situation”. It made me ponder upon discourse, as a whole, and that without the input of a situation, the can result in no change whatsoever. On page 4, Bitzer writes, “In short, rhetoric is a mode of altering reality, not by the direct application of energy to objects, but by the creation of discourse which changes reality through the mediation of thought and action.” After reading this, Bitzer made a great claim that rhetoric does not effect an audience or “object” physically and directly, but through thought and process, results in an action in conclusion. Bitzer brought up a great point when he talked about all of the political and international events that had occurred in one week(page 10), and stated that President Johnson should have and even must have reacted according to the ‘situation’ instead of talking about his childhood in Texas or about other affairs; but accordingly. That really hit me as well.
The exigence for the Emma Watson piece would be the subject of feminism awareness and Watson’s impact and perspective on feminism. Rather than the idea and proposition that Watson had mentioned, I felt that the purpose the piece of more focused on Watson’s perspective and the entire generality of her speaking at the UN. The audience I felt is the general public and the purpose of speaking to this audience is to show the idea of Watson speaking at such an important position, the UN and the impact that she had actually made there. Lastly, the constraints would include the belief of so many men and women of the world that women are unequal or not on par with men and this belief would ‘influence one’s decision for change” (as it was said in Bitzer’s “The Rhetorical Situation”)
P.S. Great speech, ELOQUENCE
I really felt that Bitzer made a great point in this text, “The Rhetorical Situation”. It made me ponder upon discourse, as a whole, and that without the input of a situation, the can result in no change whatsoever. On page 4, Bitzer writes, “In short, rhetoric is a mode of altering reality, not by the direct application of energy to objects, but by the creation of discourse which changes reality through the mediation of thought and action.” After reading this, Bitzer made a great claim that rhetoric does not effect an audience or “object” physically and directly, but through thought and process, results in an action in conclusion. Bitzer brought up a great point when he talked about all of the political and international events that had occurred in one week(page 10), and stated that President Johnson should have and even must have reacted according to the ‘situation’ instead of talking about his childhood in Texas or about other affairs; but accordingly. That really hit me as well.
I found your analysis of Bitzer’s though on how rhetoric affects an audience to be great. I completely agree with the fact that rhetoric alters decisions through subtly, its as if the implementer of the rhetoric knows the idea he/she wants to put in your head but uses this technique to get your mind to that point without knowing how it was swayed. His quote does however raise the question that rhetoric may be a form of. for a lack of a better word, manipulation.
Very nice man. It’s obvious your response is very thorough, and I completely agree on your analysis of Emma Watson’s UN speech and the points you make on her audience and constraints.
Your response was very thought out, and I like how you made a personal claim after reading Bitzer’s article. Overall, good job!