Honestly, I don’t like this paper. Probably because I don’t like poetry too much I guess. While writing my first draft, I decided to email the author of my poem. To my surprise she responded. She didn’t answer my questions how I was hoping she would though, so it wasn’t supplemental to my paper. If anything it discredited my thesis.
With that being said, I am changing my thesis and pretty much my whole paper. I think my biggest issue right now is going to end up being with the digital essay, at this point. My old idea doesn’t work with my new thesis, so I need to come up with something new for that as well.
Hi McKenzie–
Check out these two pieces–both just released this week:
http://www.brooklynrail.org/2013/05/poetry/eileen-myles-and-noel-black
http://www.thevolta.org/ewc29-emyles-p1.html