Article: Why is Cleveland Cavaliers’ Big 3 Still Not Working?
Thesis: After two full seasons, a 2-time Finals MVP, a Rookie of the Year, and a 3-Time All-Star still are struggling to be on the same court.
I plan on writing my essay about this specific article which gives a good amount of information about the Cavs best players not working well. The article gives statistical information as well as quotes from veteran players. There are also video sources in which journalists give their opinion about this topic. I believe this article is effective because of the serious of the issue. The time is ticking for them to win; if they don’t they will be separated and shipped off.
This is an interesting topic, but I feel your thesis should mention the word basketball in it since not everyone would know what a 2-time Finals MVP, a Rookie of the Year, and a 3-Time All-Star is. One might have to do research to figure out that they are basketball roles. Also what do you mean exactly by “not working well”? Maybe you could be more specific about that. Otherwise, you seem to have a lot of sources that will aid in making your essay better.
Joel,
Please look again at the assignment sheet for Essay#2, okay? You mention why the article is effective, near the end of your comment, but that needs to actually be your thesis. Remember, you are not arguing about this topic, you are analyzing the effectiveness of the writer of this article in reaching a specific demographic.