When tragedy strikes, it can tear a community apart, or it can bring it together. But reconciliation and/or restoration cannot and will not begin if the tragedy isn’t even seen for what it is. The statements and reports by officials, whether they be the commander in chief or local PD, are a claim; when not made truthfully, they create chasms of confusion and hopelessness across America. But the people that stand to benefit or be endangered the most from these statements aren’t the authorities– it’s the communities that fall into the cracks. Balko and Parker’s frustrations begin with the tragedy, but they truly culminate at the moment when a public official approaches the opportunity to unify, squanders it, and persistently and violently rocks the public into a dark place of ambiguity.
By placing the significance on what’s not said through long blanks, Parker intends to illicit anger and cynicism simultaneously. The reader can feel the anticipation the nation felt. That clawing, climbing up to the hopeful standard, word by word, until you reach for a blank and plummet back down into the reality that too many people live in. When people in power only see “visions” of these events that statistically and historically burden the black community without at least giving them the nation’s ear, they further and further shatter the US and shove it’s citizens into the cracks away from any hope of a solution.
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I liked this blog post because it was not only concise and strong, but with the metaphors and imagery it had a lot more of what I guess you can say is artistic or emotive wording that I usually don’t include in my writing. It also is very emblematic of some of the main new ways of thinking I had gained during this course; a lot of thinking about the historical suffering of marginalized communities, but also specifically about the power of language and how it reveals truths about reality whether it’s meant to or not.
This is a great post that takes me back to when we were taking about the importance of not using a word. The emphasis on a blank can be far more powerful than saying something. You metaphor of using cracks in the group to paint a picture to the reader of people falling into these schisms is incredible and relevant. This idea of people reaching for a blank is remarkably significant as I read it. It is powerful and captivating and I understand why you choose it as your All Star. .
This post is very striking and I remember reading it back when it was posted. These posts have made it clear to me about how to conduct yourself verbally. It is a very important aspect of life and storytelling. Your metaphor is very effective and this is definitely and All star blog.