I think that through listening to what Anastasia had to say I came to the conclusion that I am not nearly done with this assignment, there are still several things I need to do. First off, I need to change my ad picture to my high school graduation photo the one that I had in there originally. Secondly, I am missing my citations (whether in text or paraphrases) I need to go back and add these in if I want to get my audience to see my argument in as most credible form possible. Thirdly, I need to improve my grammar, just going back and checking for things like: run-ons, comma splice etc. Lastly, I think that any research type paper could always use extra facts to support my general argument.