Deither make us think in a novel way. When I think of consumption, I think of food, but Deither says words, images, landscapes, memories, books, and hours are also meals. In writing, it is important to forgive yourself and move on, so you can improve and become the most demanding reader to yourself. One main point in revising is that, there does not need to be something wrong with your paper to revise it. It can be that you want to change the direction that you are going or you want to focus in something else so the paper can be better than you can ever imagine. This is what happened to my paper as well. I first started going to the direction that the show Shark Tank is an opportunity for young entrepreneurs to achieve the American Dream. Then I redefine my thesis statement and focus it on entertainment. I will focus more on metaphors and entertainment side. I will also make my transitioning from paragraphs to paragraphs better. The professor or classmates are only giving you suggestions, so you can use the one you think will help you, and throw the rest out the window. I like that the author gave the analogy that writing is like a song. A singer sang an amazing song. However, there is always room for improvement. A YouTuber can make a remix of it, and it becomes a great it. You should get over with the grade that you get and read the comments. I do not know if that day will come: “What makes me happy is rewriting.”