In this poem, John Keats wants to be like this steadfast bright star, but at the same time he does not want to be like it. This idea of steadfast describes his life in ways where he does not like to interrupted but, at the same time, he does not want to be lonely and isolated. Then, there are scenes where the bright star encounters as it watches over the land and ocean. This description of this scenery indicates the lonely images the bright star experiences as it is being hung up in the air and how Keats does not want to be like the star in this way. Therefore, there are good qualities for being this bright star as well as bad qualities.
As we move on with the poem, it shows that Keats is resting on his girlfriend’s chest. Although he is resting on her chest, it shows that he likes the idea of steadfast and the desire for love (as mentioned earlier in this poem, he does not want to have the feeling of loneliness). As he lies on her chest, he mentions “awake forever in a sweet unrest”. This indicates that the desire for love keeps him up awake forever and allows him to have different sensations running through him and if he goes to sleep he would lose all these opportunities.
In the end, “And so live ever-or else swoon to death” tells us if Keats is not able to have these moments of steadfast, he would end up being that bright star that watches over this planet and eventually dies from loneliness. This poem shows the desire and desperation for love is so strong that if he loses it then he will lose everything, even his own life.
This poem also uses the word “still” repetitively as seen in the second half of the poem. He first introduced this word at line 9, “still steadfast, still unchangeable”. It could be clearly seen that the word “still” is using the definition of “same”, or not changing. But at line 13, it gets a little bit more confusing when he uses this word. Which definition pairs with the word “still”? I believe the first “still” is used as the definition of “same”. To look closely into the usage of this word; after the description of the sensation of feeling on line 11 (“to feel forever its soft fall and swell”), it quickly changes to something that has no relation with senses. Therefore, to get back on track with the sensation he was describing, he would start off line 13 with the definition of “still” as “same” to remind readers that the sensations never changed. As for the second “still”, it would seen more clear and appropriate to use it as the definition of “not moving” in order to have that sensation of hearing her breathe.