ENG 2100: Writing 1 with Jay Thompson

Blog Writing, Atai Isaev

5, 16, 30

There’s this Carvel in my neighborhood. It’s an ice-cream place I go to once in a while. The store itself is the size of an average apartment, but their parking lot is pretty big (probably about 4 times as big as the store itself; do they NEED a parking lot this big?) I still do not know if it’s pronounced CARvel or carVEL. I heard people say both, so I’m quite confused. They serve soft ice-cream, ice-cream shakes, ice-cream cakes, and stuff of that sort (wonder how often they change their menu). Outside they have poster advertising deals they have (do these deals attract a lot of customers? are they effective?). They have one for every day of the week. So for example, 50% for a Sundae on Sunday. 

Their walls are decorated with ice-cream themed wall-paintings (wonder when they were painted?). They also have one of those very run-down claw machines with plushy toys inside of it. There’s also an ice-cream shaped trash can. Most workers there are very relaxed 20-25-ish year olds (one of these guys once invited me to work there). The demographic of the customers is mostly typical local Russian people (no Asian Americans;( ). The store has a very long, rich history starting in 1929 from some dude in New York borrowing money from his grilfriend to buy an ice-cream truck. A public affairs major might wonder how Carvel might take leadership in our Sheepshead Bay community helping us withstand ever-increasing global-warming heat summers (?).

 

Asian & Asian American Studies

History

Public Affairs

I got bad RNG with the numbers so it was a little awkward writing. Otherwise, pretty nice experience.

Atai Isaev, Analysis Excerpt

The whole scene is a reference to Adam and Eve, the first male and female. However in a sense this situation is quite the opposite — instead of Heaven, this is Hell, and instead of beginning, this is the end.

Although I didn’t think of it at first, the pieces of wood sticking from the ground at 0:00-0:08 represent graves of all the main characters that died as the result of The Third Impact. We can assume that Shinji built them. Little cross and a can of beer are a reference to Misato, one of the characters of the show who was quite close to Shinji. This represents how much she meant to him and how much he misses her. Also the cross as well as Angels T-posing in the background are a reference to Christianity and Christ being crucified (this show is full of Christianity references, even in the name itself; some fans joke that they had to read the Bible to understand this show’s lore). Also they keep showing the full moon. Why? I think it’s trying to pull our attention to say that the events of this scene take place quite a long time after the events in the scene before, hence in the scene before it was a new moon, but now the moon is full; which is one fact I didn’t notice until doing this log and analysis.

Atai Isaev Reading Responses

  1. Our method might prevent developing the “wrong” claim. Doing exhaustive documentation and analyzing every single detail first allows us to see the entire picture before formulating our claim. As opposed to Hengel’s method where you might have to go back and change your claim halfway through. One con of our way might be the fact that there is a chance of overloading yourself with information making it hard to pick a claim. Hengel’s way is more straightforward. 

2. Carly Rae Jepsen. He sees weed, Carly Rae Jepsen doing the same two dance moves, concertgoers around him extremely close to each other pushing, a couple violently kissing in front of him. He makes of it that E MO TION is an amazing album, and Carly Rae Jepsen is the goat. It matters because love. And magic of music.
Future. He sees Future’s breakup, Future’s albums, and his mother gone. He makes connection in between Future’s and his own loss. It matters because love and sadness are a part of everyone’s life.

Atai Isaev Reading Responses

  1. Maybe Coates feels that it is unfortunate “First Class” didn’t include the harsh reality of US history, but nonetheless likes the movie. He clearly enjoyed the movie, as he describes it as “narratively lean, beautifully acted and, at all the right moments, visually stunning.” And so because Coates enjoyed the movie so much, he is willing to close his eyes on its downfalls: “‘First Class’ is not blind to societal evils, so much as it works to hold evil at an ocean’s length.” Or perhaps he feels that the whole fact that something is missing adds something to the movie. It’s like how in music, moments of silence can be just as impactful as moments when musical notes are being played.
  2. Parkin creates a big strand of describing No Man’s Sky with words like vast, endless, big, grandiose, full of discoveries, etc. He also repeats the word “explore” a bunch of times. This emphasizes exactly what part he likes about the game. He uses these repetitions and strands to put a spotlight to where he wants you to look. The bit about philosophy is an anomaly. It was sort of sudden and felt out of place. Parkin probably added it to add a little bit of spice to his text.

Atai Isaev Blog Post

As soon as you walk into my room, there will be a wardrobe directly to the left. Part of it is going to be blocked by the door through which you enter. If you get the door out of the way to access the wardrobe you will notice a tall box squished in the corner in between the wardrobe itself and the doorframe. The tall rectangular prism cardboard box will be open on the top. When you peek inside, you will see a guitar neck sticking out. Congratulations! You have found my guitar that I haven’t played in years! 

It’s a standard acoustic guitar that I got for a dirt cheap price years ago. The texture is very smooth. The body of the guitar is pear-shaped. Pretty big and bulky. The action (distance between the frets and the strings) is surprisingly low. The head of the guitar is of odd, fancy shape and it has “Jasmine” written in fancy gold font. If you shake it you could probably hear the pick that has fallen into the abyss years ago and hasn’t been rescued to this day.

 

I noticed how little interesting stuff there is in my house. Also how difficult it is to describe objects.

Atai Isaev Week 6 Reading Responses

  1.  “While putting for-ward the argument that one needs to be white to be truly successful, he adds, in an aside, that this might not work for blacks because if ‘a ninja paints a flower it becomes a slavery flower…’”
    This line struck me. It very much caught me off-guard. Regardless of whether it’s true or not this line packs a punch. It also feels to be like the essence of the entire text. It paints the point about “dehumanization every brown or black person lives simply because of skin color.”
  2.  “I know this is not proper tennis etiquette, but this is the first time I’ve ever played here that the crowd has been behind me like that. Today I felt American, you know, for the first time at the US Open. So I’ve waited my whole career to have this moment and here it is.”

This is clearly pathos. The author is building up the character of Serena to make us want to cheer for her as if she was a main character of a movie or something.
“As offensive as her outburst is, it is difficult not to applaud her for reacting immediately to being thrown against a sharp white background. “
This quote shows the use of logos. It is appealing the act of putting emotions aside and try to look at the full picture.

3. I remember in 8th grade I communicated with a classmate without using words. At the time I wasn’t confident in my English and all of my friends from previous years were assigned to a different class. I don’t know why he didn’t communicate to me verbally. During class, when we would get bored we would draw pictures on a piece of paper to each other and giggle. Thinking back at it, it was a very surreal experience. At the time Harambe was a big internet meme and I remember us giggled at it a whole bunch. It’s crazy how friendly you can become with someone even without using words.

Atai Isaev Week 6

I live in Sheepshead Bay. Within a 10 minute walk from my house there is Manhattan Beach. The beach itself is rather small being only about 100-200 meters across. There is a playground as well as lots of tables and benches for picnics. It’s pretty popular amongst the locals.

The biggest mystery is why the beach on the south edge of Brooklyn is called Manhattan Beach. There is a wealthy neighborhood full of lavish mansions whose owners never go to the beach itself. Most of the people who actually go to the beach are the Sheepshead Bay race. The existence of the beach nearby forcefully makes us aware of it. On a summer day the beach has a gravitational force to attract all the Russian folk to go and do BBQ there. I think the reason the beach is so popular because local people have a lot of stress going on in their daily lives so they use the beach is a place to relieve it.

 

I added the last sentence in consideration of people’s “behind the scenes” just like it was done it “Citizen.” It is necessary to consider not only the surface-level stuff, but also stuff that can be unapparent to the eye. Perhaps, in writing it is sometimes good to make guesses like that.

Responses 5 Isaev Atai Reading Week

  1. Ethos “Ladies and gentlemen, I like books.” …. I appeal that I’m a fan of reading to make myself seem more credible
    Pathos “And even before I could read I remember pretending to be able to read them by telling the story just from looking at the pictures in the children’s book.” I attempt to tell a personal episode from my childhood to create a personal connection with the reader.
    Logos “Literature is a good way to introduce oneself to a foreign language because literature tends to use uncommon words from many different realms of language frequently. Reading books gives the highest return on your time in terms of vocabulary.” Here I use FACTS and LOGIC (to absolutely destroy the left wing)
  2. Summary: Airport scene in the opening of Koimonogatari. Over the phone, Senjougahara and Kaiki agree to meet in a cafe at an airport. Senjougahara states that this will be their first time meeting (which is a lie, they met plenty of times before). Then, she tells Kaiki that she will be wearing glasses in order to make it easier for him to find her. From a distance, Kaiki spots Senjougahara sitting and drinking orange juice in a cafe wearing Groucho glasses. Kaiki took her silly outfit as a challenge, so he bought an Aloha shirt (which is a reference to another character in the story named Oshino). When he sat across the table wearing that Aloha shirt, Senjougahara bursts out laughing, spilling orange juice all over Kaiki’s face. Inside his thoughts Kaiki goes “Hehehe, I won!”. Then Kaiki orders hot coffee and orange juice from a waitress. “It’s been a while, Senshougahara”, “It’s been a while, Suzuki
    Analysis: The airport scene in the opening of Koimonogatari is a satire on people’s lies. Throughout the story, characters tell meaningless lies to each other that end in comedic results. Like in this scene, to meet each other, Senjougahara and Kaiki take a plane all the way to Okinawa (even though they live in the same town), just because they wanted to put up faces of being busy people. Senjougahara wearing Groucho glasses symbolizes that she wants to mask her feelings because she is in a desperate situation. She does that because her pride is too high and she does not want Kaiki to find out, but from the context of the story, he sees right through her facade. Unknowingly, Kaiki ends up buying an Aloha shirt from the exact same mannequin that Senjougahara took her glasses from. This symbolizes that their affinity with each other is good and they didn’t have to mount lies on top of lies to come to an agreement. This scene is making a statement that telling lies to protect one’s pride is really silly. 
  3. Writing analysis is way harder than writing a summary. Writing a summary is more fun than writing an analysis. I find it hard to put effort into looking for meaning. Writing analysis is kind of similar to driving while being very sleepy: you have to constantly fight yourself from writing a summary, and when you unknowingly start veering off into summary territory, you have to quickly snap back.

Scene from LN

My next episode will be set in 5th grade. In my Russian literature class we were assigned to read the first 20-ish pages of an excerpt of a famous novel. It was a famous novel called Dubrovsky by Aleksandr Pushkin. It’s very vague in my memory now, but essentially it is a story set in the 1800s about a young nobleman named Dubrovsky whose land was confiscated by some powerful aristocrat. Up until then I really did not like reading, but for whatever reason, when I started reading Dubrovsky as a part of my homework I couldn’t stop, so I read the entire thing which took me like all day. (As a side note, I remember the story suddenly just cut off in the end, and at the time I thought it was just because it was only an excerpt of a novel printed in our textbook, but — I just Googled it and it turns out the novel was unfinished in the first place. The reason being, as every Russian person knows, Pushkin lost in a gun duel against Dante over some chick somewhere)

I was really astounded with myself for being immersed in reading for so long and actually enjoying it. In class, we were doing work around Dubrovsky for the rest of the semester, but I finished reading the whole thing on the first day. As a kid, I remember playing video games a whole lot and playing outside with neighbors’ kids, and reading books was a very distant concept for me. It was the kind of entertainment I haven’t yet experienced. I remember being fascinated with Russian history that Dubrovsky was set in. I also remember struggling with many outdated terms and words used in the story. And I vaguely remember flexing the newly acquired vocabulary in front of my parents and peers.

Week 4 Reading Responses, Atai Isaev

  1. “As you can imagine, especially in a prison where there was heavy emphasis on rehabilitation, an inmate was smiled upon if he demonstrated an unusually intense interest in books. There was a sizable number of well-read inmates, especially the popular debaters. Some were said by many to be practically walking encyclopedias.” I was quite surprised to hear prisoners be so passionate about reading and education. I liked how it went against the stereotype of prisoners lifting weights all day.
    Being a part of this kind of discourse community has probably led to Malcolm X developing his thirst for knowledge. 
  2. I suppose I would want to imitate Malcolm X’s style of writing. Since I’m planning to write on the same topic as him, I’d figured there’d be a lot to learn from his writing. I want to emulate his style of portraying his relationship with reading, the amount of details and story-flow. I also want to imitate his manner of writing. I like how he doesn’t sound too casual or too formal.