ENG 2100: Writing 1 with Jay Thompson

Crisleydi Paulino Week 3 Reading Response

Procrastination and distractions have been barriers to my writing in the past. I usually tend to push assignments to the side because I think I have more than enough time to get it done. However, this later affects me because then I’m rushing to get my work done on the last couple of days. This gives me anxiety to turn in a well written paper which would’ve been more thought out if I started to work on it earlier. The times that I don’t procrastinate I get very distracted by my phone or by my environment leading me right back to procrastination. With this assignment I will break down my thinking process and brainstorm all the possible topics I can write about. In addition, I will maintain my focus on the assignment and all the requirements to guide me through my narrative.

The two worlds I would say I live in would be success but laziness. This is something that constantly clashes making it difficult for me to know what is it that I really want to do. I have invested a lot of time in my makeup business and there’s always more room for me to grow. But, at times my laziness gets in the way and what I could’ve done to benefit my business and my clients continues being held back. However, I do believe that all good things take time and that rushing my process is not going to make my business blow up any faster.

Crisleydi Paulino Week 3 Reading Response

Anzaldua disagree’s with the idea that the firm lines between different languages can’t share a common reality. She was called out by her teacher for speaking Spanish in which her teacher responded with, “If you want to be American, speak ‘American.'” As an immigrant it is common for cultural assimilation to be forced upon you by others. But this is where people can share their common reality. Anzaldua states, “For a people who are neither Spanish nor live in a country in which Spanish is Chicano Spanish is not incorrect, it is a living language. The first language; for a people who live in a country in which English is the reign-ing tongue but who are not Anglo; for a people who cannot entirely identify with either standard (formal, Castillian) Spanish nor standard English, what recourse is left to them but to create their own language? A language which they can connect their identity to, one capable of communicating the realities and values true to themselves—a language with terms that are neither español ni inglés, but both.” Using both languages and making it one by using slang and different terminology brings people together as a community and it can be a form of identification.

Anzaldua’s uses personal experience in her literacy narrative. Referring back to the beginning of the text where her teacher pointed her out for speaking Spanish in a place where you’re “supposed” to speak English. When conversing with her mom, her mom agreed with the idea of her having to speak proper English so that it’ll benefit her in the long run. Anzaldua had to take classes to help her with her accent. The reason as to why I feel like she chose this narrative is so that people can relate to her experience of being “in between” or not fitting into social norms; “We needed a language with which we could communicate with ourselves, a secret language.”

The most apparent convention seen in Sedari’s essay is personal experience conveyed through  language acquisition. Sedari moves to Paris to continue his education in hopes of learning how to speak French. Himself as well as others are there for the same reason. When asked who knows the alphabet, he laughed, but realized that he didn’t know the alphabet in French as the words are said differently. By the end of the essay Sedari learns how to speak French. the convection that seems less important to Sedari were key events. Sedari didn’t not much was said as to how he learned French but we do know that he reached his end goal.

I believe that Manson does not feel the same by the end of her essay. At the beginning Manson describes her difficulties with vocabulary which affected her social life and communication. Because of this she began to stay silent in hopes of avoiding certain conversation she hated. However, by the end she improved her vocabulary and although she started to feel like this again, she made a huge improvement from where she once was.

Crisleydi Paulino, Week 3, “Eternal Sunshine”

Although music is not an object, it’s one of the few things that can describe me. “Eternal Sunshine” by Jhene Aiko is a song I hold very close to my heart. This song was featured in her album “Souled Out” where she expresses her life struggles after going through traumatic experiences in which she describes how she heals from these setbacks. “All of the good things” is emphasized through repetition to remind herself and those who are listening to focus on only the good things in life. She then proceeds to sing about nature and the beautiful things of the world as she goes back to the hook to remind us of “All of the good things.”

With this song I’m reminded to take each day for what it is, whether it’s good or bad, and learn to be thankful for it. Whenever I’m frustrated or feel  stagnant with where I am in life, I think about the positive things and how much I accomplished at such a young age. Time makes one’s way quickly and we live our life day by day without knowing when it’s going to be our last. Jhene Aiko starts off the song by saying, “Is it strange for me to say that if I were to die today, there’s not a thing that I would change, I’ve lived well.” My mistakes and successes is what shapes my life and makes me different from other individuals, and like she said if I were to die today, I’ll be more than content with the life I chose to live.