ENG 2100: Writing 1 with Jay Thompson

Crisleydi Paulino, Week 3, “Eternal Sunshine”

Although music is not an object, it’s one of the few things that can describe me. “Eternal Sunshine” by Jhene Aiko is a song I hold very close to my heart. This song was featured in her album “Souled Out” where she expresses her life struggles after going through traumatic experiences in which she describes how she heals from these setbacks. “All of the good things” is emphasized through repetition to remind herself and those who are listening to focus on only the good things in life. She then proceeds to sing about nature and the beautiful things of the world as she goes back to the hook to remind us of “All of the good things.”

With this song I’m reminded to take each day for what it is, whether it’s good or bad, and learn to be thankful for it. Whenever I’m frustrated or feel  stagnant with where I am in life, I think about the positive things and how much I accomplished at such a young age. Time makes one’s way quickly and we live our life day by day without knowing when it’s going to be our last. Jhene Aiko starts off the song by saying, “Is it strange for me to say that if I were to die today, there’s not a thing that I would change, I’ve lived well.” My mistakes and successes is what shapes my life and makes me different from other individuals, and like she said if I were to die today, I’ll be more than content with the life I chose to live.

Nick Serrao Week 3 Writing Prompt

If i were to describe myself as an object, it would be my cross necklace. This necklace has a lot more meaning to me then it usually would to a normal person. I received this necklace when i got baptized as a baby, and it is still with me 18 years later. It is a white gold link chain necklace and it was handed down to me by my grandfather who had passed away many years ago. In the catholic religion, the cross is a powerful symbol of love and sacrifice. To me, my cross necklace is a symbol of life, luck, being watched over.

Usually people with a cross necklace wear it every day, but i do not. This does not change the meaning of it to me not one bit. I only wear this necklace things like a party, when I feel the need of luck, or when i feel like being watched over by my grandfather. There has been many instances where I felt like my grandfather was watching over me and has altered certain situations from up above. This necklace will stay with me until death, and I will then hand it down to my future oldest child.

Eryk Trela Week 3 – Silver Dumbbell

Currently if I had to represent myself through a single object it would have to be my silver dumbbell. It is one object which I force myself to use on all good, bad and/or regular days. Whenever I don’t do a couple of reps in the morning from the moment I make my bed I start to feel minimal. I began to continuously think of myself as a wuss throughout the rest of the day.  I repeat the image of myself looking at my reflection from the dumbbell and think of calling myself undermining names. The only way for me to eliminate that feeling is to actually get my pump regardless if small or big. 

The dumbbell is great motivation for me to continue working out and continue my fitness journey. In addition, at the end of each day whenever I realize that I have continued my streak I feel rapturous. I feel as if I had accomplished an important goal which will eventually lead to better health. Regardless of how much umbrage I feel whenever I wake up and see this silver dumbbell, I know that it doesn’t lie to me, I will continue growing my muscles. However, I must be benign because I don’t want to overwork my muscles, which would make me feel crummy and put my subconscious out of loop to no longer strive for that extra rep or to continue the streak.

Nishmitha Rodrigo Week 3 Reading Response

  1. Anzaldua disagrees with this statement to a great extent because she speaks a language called Pachuco, which has lingo from both the English language and the Spanish language. In the text, on page 72, it states “Pachuco (the lan-guage of the zoot suiters) is a language of rebellion, both against Standard Spanish and Standard English. It is a secret language. Adults of the culture and outsiders cannot understand it. It is made up of slang words from both English and Spanish.” This quote from the text exemplifies the fact that English and Spanish, per se, aren’t actually two entirely different universes separated by a fine line because there indeed is another, uncommon language that actually connects the two languages. This uncommon language happens to be a hybrid language consisting of lingo from both English and Spanish. 
  2. Something I noticed about Anzaldua’s writing style is that she uses her personal experiences to make her argument stronger. For example on page 73, she states “We use anglicisms, words borrowed from English: bola from ball, carpeta from carpet, máchina de lavar (instead of lavadora) from washing machine. Tex-Mex argot, created by adding a Spanish sound at the beginning or end of an English word such as cookiar for cook, watchar for watch, parkiar for park, and rapiar for rape, is the result of the pressures on Spanish speakers to adapt to English.” I think Anzaldua used the technique of personal experience to support her argument because it can be effective in convincing and compelling the reader when they know that it’s something that the author has experienced first hand. It also made her argument sound personal because she made it seem like a part of her livelihood was being discriminated against when the theory stated that English and Spanish represent different universes. 
  3. Liao’s conventions for literacy narratives that were most apparent in Sedaris’s essay was using her own experiences. On page 59, Liao states “literacy narratives use specific examples to illustrate ideas about literacy that we’ve acquired as a result of our own experiences, and explain explicitly why these ideas are important.” She strengthens this claim by proceeding to tell the reader about her experiences of learning the French language. She mentioned how her experience of learning wasn’t the most enjoyable experience, as well as for her discourse community, due to how harsh her French teacher was. However, towards the end she mentions how she is able to understand what her teacher is saying but she said herself, that doesn’t mean she’s fluent in the language. It just means progress was made. On the contrary, a convention that seems less important to Sedaris is making her point explicitly stated because it’s about making the reader understand, not just telling them about it. 
  4. By the end of her essay, I genuinely don’t think Manson felt the same as she did in the beginning of the essay. Even though all her problems didn’t just go away, she managed her way and found ways to cope. Her silence was her way of dealing with which could not be spoken of. Although at the end she became silent again, her demeanor and mindset had changed. Her “I don’t know” had changed into “I said what I could”. Little changes in her mannerism proves that she had grown from the person she was at the beginning of her essay.

Matthew Ortiz, Week 3, My Car

An object that represents me is my car. My car is black, it has silver factory rims, and it has 4 doors. My car is a very useful tool to me for the things I need. Such as providing easier and cheaper transportation, privacy, and a sometimes it can be a getaway for me. Without my car I would not be able to work the job I work. I love to just drive around the city and listen to music but I don’t do it as often anymore.

I pretty much been almost everywhere so I just feel lazy sometimes and don’t go for drives anymore. I think the best part about the car is my music system because I really love music so when I am driving it sets the mood and depending on the time of day and what song is playing, it just gives me a euphoric feeling. I also have a big passion for cars as well. Learning about my car or other cars makes me happy. I love to learn new things everyday engines , etc.

Tasnimud Tanzid Week 3, My Equation

 Learning addition for the first time, I became so amazed when my math teacher added an equation 2 and 2 equal 4 (2+2=4). 2 and 2 equal 22, 4 and 4 make 44 and these strange thoughts pushed my brain to create confusion. These types of strange thoughts sometimes made me a funny boy in the class. Probably this funny tag delivered me here today. Today, I am passionate about solving math, equations, and word problems. I can’t imagine my future without these things. 

However, growing up in a third-world country, my curiosity about learning math is always busy. Getting a bicycle at 12 years old, I jumped up and down to find the velocity, radius of wheels, distance of my ride, rather than enjoying a long ride with my friends. In middle school, I Calculated the length, width, height, area, and volume of every stair of my Redfort school. Learning and solving don’t mean I was always good at math. If I have to say my failing experience in life, math always goes ahead. Math is not just plugging and chugging as many views it but it requires creativity and thinking out of the box to solve the problems encountered in the real world.  Math has made the impossible possible and the once long and tedious, easy and quick. The genius of it is amazing as well as the fact that any person is capable of applying and discovering it. Even still, I draw graphs and try to make shapes from functions for fun, count to 10 to start my meal, and save money at the store. Mathematics is magic and this magic requires logic. To catch this logic, sometimes I tried to prove the wrong logic that 2+2= 22.

Eryk Trela Week 3 Reading Response

1-Many people believe that there is one theory of language, involving firm lines betweens languages, many speakers believe that these different languages contain completely different realms, which can not share a common reality. Yet, Anzaldua disagrees due to the fact that the Chicano Spanish which she speaks is a living language. A language which are ”For a people who are neither Spanish nor live in a country in which Spanish is the first language; for a people who live in a country in which English is the reign-ing tongue but who are not Anglo; for a people who cannot entirely identify with either standard (formal, Castilian) Spanish nor standard English”(Page 70). Meaning that the Chicano Spanish language is in constant development.

 

2- Anzaldua writes with a persuasive manner, she takes everything she says to heart and truly believes in what she writes. Anzaldua chose to write her literacy narrative on her struggles speaking Chicano Spanish. For instance, Anzaldua and her people grew up with such worrying beliefs  “Chicano Spanish have internalized the belief that we speak poor Spanish. It is illegitimate, a bastard language” (Page 73). In addition, Anzaldua writes in a very conflicting way, she speaks about how flip-flopping between languages is forbidden, then goes into great detail of how she continuously switches from language to language.

 

3-  Liao’s convention, also known as the journey from confusion to fluency, is best displayed in Sedaris’s essay. In both literacy narratives it begins with them learning new languages to eventually knowing those languages. On the contrary Liao’s literacy narrative convention of change does not appear in Sedaris’s essay. Even though at the end of the essay we are told that Sedaris is able to understand French, however we weren’t told in the essays how Sedaris developed more knowledge and a better understanding of the French language, in this case the change.

 

4- I do not believe that Manson felt the same way that she did in the beginning of the essay compared to the end. Although she didn’t completely resolve her issue, she did grow a lot from the start. Being silent was a way of tongue for Manson whenever she couldn’t put something into words. However, at the end of her essay you could see that being silent is no longer her first option. She is trying to speak, and a perfect example of that is when she states “I said my thoughts, even though they were incomplete. I felt more than that. I always will. But I said what I could, and that was enough”.

Nick Serrao Week 3 Reading Response

Anzaldua disagrees with the theory that there are firm lines between English and Spanish, how one would say that they represent different universes, and that the speakers cannot share a common reality. Anzaldua said, “Chicano Spanish sprang out of the Chicanos’ need to identify ourselves as a distinct people.” In short terms she is saying that Mexican Americans tend to speak a different form of Spanish that sets them apart from everyone else. Chicano Spanish is a version of Spanish that tends to have words distorted by English and it is often frowned upon by native Spanish speakers. According to Anzaldua, Chicano Spanish is known as rebellious and is sort of a secret language.

Anzaldua has a certain style in her literacy narrative that has a larger meaning behind it. The reader may notice that in many instances, she incorporates Spanish into her mainly English narrative. The meaning behind this is to show that there are no firm lines between languages. As she put certain Spanish phrases into her writing, she puts easy to comprehend English translations next to it, and it seems to flow very well. She chose this style of writing to show that languages are just a form of communication, and that it all means the same in your own language.

Liao’s first convention for literacy narratives, the idea of change, was most apparent in Sedaris’s essay. Liao believed that in a literacy narrative, if something dosen’t change, then it is not a narrative. In Sedaris’s narrative I was confused on what the point of it was until the near end, when he finally understood french. That was the point of change. Prior to that moment, he sometimes found himself not understanding what the teacher was saying, and it came out as gibberish in his mind. One of Liao’s conventions for literacy narratives that did not see much light was the idea of a discourse community. In Sedaris’s essay, he stayed on track the whole time and shared his message throughout the writing. He did not go off of track to talk about anything else.

I believe that by the end of Manson’s essay, she felt differently then she did from the start. At the start of her essay, she felt helpless, and had a sense of confusion when it came to expressing her thoughts. At times she was often hiding her emotions because she did not want to make people think that she was sad, but she truly didn’t know what she was. Then Manson began to compare her feelings to metaphors, this helped, but did not entirely fix her situation. She used silence to address her feelings with herself too allow things to process. Throughout her whole essay she felt like nothing was enough, but by the end she finally felt like what she said to her friend was acceptable, allowing her to understand how to convey her feelings to a point where it was, enough.

 

 

Gabrielle Nolan Week 3 Reading Response

Anzaldua disagrees with this idea because she grew up trying to speak both English and Spanish fluently without a foreign accent. She didn’t believe there were entirely “different universes”, she believed that as long as she could speak the language without any trouble, that she could fit in. Her only problem was trying to take pride in her language. It was hard because she felt as if she had to change her “tongue” for English speakers and accommodate their accent rather than vice versa. There was never the idea of uncommon realties between different languages. The quote I found was “I will have my serpent’s tongue- my woman’s voice, my sexual voice, my poet’s voice. I will overcome the tradition of silence.” This aids in explaining why she disagrees with one of the theories of language, simply because her problem wasn’t different universes, it was different accents. 

 

While reading Anzaldua’s piece, I found it very descriptive and personal. The start of the essay includes a description of the dentist getting mad about their tongue getting in the way of cleaning their roots. The introduction ends with “How do you make it [the tongue] lie down?”. Personally, I think this style of detailed memories of the writer’s past helps the readers connect more with the writer and their story. Anzaldua is telling a story of the struggle of learning English while speaking Spanish. In this, she wants the readers to feel “closer” to her by sharing stories of her childhood and how people treated her and her lack of English. 

 

Liao’s convention of “every literacy narrative has a takeaway for the reader” was prominent in this essay. At the end of the essay, the writer states “Understanding doesn’t mean that you can suddenly speak the language.” This means that even if you are capable of translating words, there is more to understanding what people are saying than just their words. The irony in the end of this essay was that no matter how mean the teacher was, the second he understood what the teacher was saying, he wanted them to talk more and more. This is ironic because the teacher was calling him a “fool”, but he wanted to hear more words from them, even if it was bad, because he was finally understanding the language. 

 

Yes and no, I believe she feels better by the end of the essay, yet still has feelings of sadness. Manson’s essay made me feel sad while reading it because of the tone set. The piece didn’t end on a high note about the writer excelling with words and becoming a great speaker, it ended with her grandmother’s death. When reading this, you can’t help but feel bad for the events she is describing. However, just before writing about her grandmother’s death, she comes to terms with her way of expressing herself. She states, “There were times when it was important for me to verbally communicate even if I couldn’t really express myself.” She was able to recognize what would ultimately help her, yet couldn’t accomplish it.

 

Gabrielle Nolan Week 3, My Ring

The object that describes myself is my claddagh ring. The ring is traditionally worn by Irish women and is a sign of love, loyalty, and friendship. My claddagh ring was actually my late grandmother’s and she gave it to me before her passing a few years ago. I wear this ring everywhere, everyday. A custom followed by many Irish citizens is that a claddagh ring is gifted to you, you don’t purchase one for yourself. So, when my grandmother gave me hers, I was beyond excited. This small piece of gold holds so much history and information. It was originally given to my grandmother from my grandfather. She believed it carried good fortune. 

Personally, the ring helped me feel connected with my grandparents even years later. If I feel anxious, scared, or sad I just spin the ring around my finger and I know they are watching over me. The ring has been with me for over four years now- pretty much my duration of highschool and now my first few weeks of college. I think back to the time when I first got this ring and notice how much I have accomplished over the years without my grandparents being around to see. For example, graduating highschool, attending college, getting my license, my first job, turning eighteen, etc. All of the major events in my life are held in this small, dainty ring on my finger.