ENG 2100: Writing 1 with Jay Thompson

Ariel Manrique, Week 3, Writing Prompt

If I had to use an item to describe myself, I would use my graduation ring from middle school. The silver ring lined with the name of the school and the public school number with a gem in the middle that represents my birth month. Silly right? Middle school, as I am sure it was for a lot of people was a hard place to be in. It is the start and end of many things when it comes to people’s maturation periods.

The ring to me, shows how far I have come since that time, where I would argue I was at my worst. I was bullied a lot, didn’t really know why besides maybe a few things since I was a little weirdo back then, but it also reminds me of change, and how life is what you make it, and the same person I am today, is not the person I was over 5 years ago. I do not wear the ring, and I honestly don’t know where it is if you asked me,  but it is something that means a lot to me.

Ariel Manrique Week 3 Student Reading Responses

The theory of language used in the question states that people who speak different languages cannot share a common reality. Anzaldua disagrees with this theory. In her story/literacy narrative, she talks about how the language/variant of Spanish that she knows is influenced by English colonization. An example : “The pocho is an anglicized Mexican or American of Mexican origin who speaks Spanish with an accent characteristic of North Americans and who distorts and reconstructs the language according to the influence of English.”

To me, Anzaldua wrote her literacy narrative with a lot of personal connections. The way she told her story felt like a tale out of a history book, lined with facts and opinions. She also included her own personal scenarios while facing discrimination for the language she speaks. An example: “Pocho, cultural traitor, you’re speaking the oppressor’s language by speaking English, you’re ruining the Spanish language,” I have been accused by various Latinos and Latinas.”

At the beginning of Manson’s essay, she talks about how her silence is described by others as sadness. She then explains how she is not actually sad, and being sad is expressed differently, but she just has a hard time getting her thoughts out. By the end of the essay, she learns that her silence is actually a good thing, as it helped her cope with things she learned while exploring history. For example: “Silence helped me cope with the truly unspeakable. It allowed me connect to myself and to those around me.”

In Sedaris’ essay, the most prominent Literacy Narrative I found was the explanation of an event through personal experiences. The essay also goes in line with the literacy narratives used to connect others through discourses. Sedaris explains in the essay how he felt scared and threatened by his French teacher in France, which is a discourse he shared with other students. However, he did not really seem to care about connecting it to a larger meaning or message, like Manson’s for example.

Erick Nunez Week 3 Reading Responses

Anzaldua clearly disagrees with this statement after describing how there is another language she speaks called Pachuco. She describes it as a “language of rebellion, both against Standard Spanish and Standard English” (Page 72). This language consists of different slang terms and phrases from both English and Spanish, combining the two worlds together. As a result, this language eliminates the “firm line” described as a border between English and Spanish. Other examples like Pachuco is the common hybrid language Spanglish where a person would mix the two languages. 

A style of writing I have noticed by Anzaldua was her constant use of Spanish phrases every now and then to support her idea of using both languages as a bridge to a greater understanding of language. She uses Chicano Spanish terms to explain how it is different from a standard Spanish that is taught in most schools. “We leave out initial syllables, saying tar for estar, toy for estoy, hora for ahora” (Page 72). By doing this, she is able to give the reader a better understanding of how not every person of Spanish origin speaks the same type of Spanish. 

One of the conventions for a literacy narrative Liao describes is how they begin with a moment the writer experiences whether it is a cultural tradition or a particular discourse community that the narrator joined. In this case, Sedaris recounts how his first day of French class was and the diverse community he is surrounded by. However, Sedaris didn’t provide any takeaways for the reader that is clear. It almost seems like he intentionally did this for the reader to draw their own conclusion.

I believe that Manson can still relate to this quote towards the end of the essay however, only to a certain extent. While she did start to improve her vocabulary by working on herself as she states on page 86, she later added that when she lost her grandmother she became silent again. She states, “I feel something, but I don’t know what it is,” thus implying that even though she improved on her communication skills, she still couldn’t address her emotions which were a completely different problem. 

Erick Nunez Week 3 The First of Many

“Is that you?” says my little sister as she notices the vinyl record hanging from my wall. The cover art consists of me sitting down listening to a record player with the “Parental Advisory” logo added above me. This vinyl is of course my first ever EP, written and produced by yours truly. I have great pride towards this vinyl not only because it’s my first ever project, but because of all the blood, sweat, and tears put into this 5 song escapade of an EP. The production of this EP began all the way back in March of 2020. I began my music career not too long before knowing that if I was going to make an EP, it was going to be special and it needed to be planned ahead. An album was too early for me considering I had a small fanbase so I necessitated another way to build traction. After releasing my single “You” I began to fully focus on the production of “Genocide.”

I stood before my whiteboard of ideas with different titles for potential songs and different chord progressions. This was going to be hard and I knew I would need some help. After calling my friends we brainstormed ideas and started making instrumentals with acoustic guitar, synths, electric guitar, and various percussive sounds. However, I wasn’t interested in anything that I was making. Frustration took over as I was diffident towards my voice and overall sound. Finally, after many sleepless nights, last minute changes, and after replacing a whole song the day before the due date of the EP. I submitted it to be released on all platforms two weeks later. I was relieved but in the back of my mind I knew that this was only the beginning of many achievements to come. I look at my sister and reply, “Yup, that’s me, and there are many more of those to come real soon.”

Nishmitha Rodrigo, Week 3, The Mirrors

If I could have one object represent me, it would be my mirrors. It is the one thing I inevitably use every single day, regardless of if I want to or not. The first thing I see when I wake up in the morning is myself through the mirror that is right in front of my bed. When I get out of my bed from the right side, I see myself yet again through my vanity mirror but this time the only difference is the angle I see myself in. Then again through the mirror in my bathroom and so on throughout the day, whether I want to keep seeing myself over and over again or not. I don’t have an option rather than just look and chow down on the fact that this is who I am and this is what I look like. 

The mirrors show me my true image. Given that, It still confuses me and causes consternation because sometimes I feel like I see myself differently everytime I look at myself in the mirror, but of course the way I perceive myself also depends on my mood and well being in the moment. Regardless of how umbraging it is to feel as such, I know for a fact that it doesn’t lie to me. It shows me who I am as I am at the moment. It does not hide my age, my acne, nor my insecurities. It shows me the most realistic version of myself because a mirror never indulges flattery or criticism of any kind. Therefore,  how I perceive myself is up to me. It can either make me feel rapturous or indifferent, depending on whether I choose to love or hate the person I see in the mirror. Discerning a mirror as something that can represent me enables me to connect more deeply with my discourse communities because self-image is something that a lot of us struggle with due to internal or external factors.

Week 3 Reading responses Eric Noah

  1.  In the essay How to Tame a Wild Tongue by Gloria Anzaldúa, she disagrees that their are firm lines between different languages and people that speak different languages.  “Chicano Spanish is not incorrect, it is a living language”. This line demonstrates that, while various people speak different languages, the goal of language is to communicate and connect with one another. She also demonstrates that even if she speaks different languages, there may be a shared reality, because she speaks different languages and communicates in different languages.

2. Anzaldua is a persuasive writer in my opinion because she takes a stand for what she really believes in. She chose to base her literary narrative on the difficulties she has faced throughout her life in a different language. Her writing is virtually contradictory, if not outright defiant. Her entire essay is about her inability to express herself in the way she desired, despite the fact that it is written bilingually. As the reader learns about her inability to change languages, Anzaldua demonstrated in her work that she was able to rise above all of the criticism and drift towards success, inspiring inspiration.

3. Liao’s literacy narrative conventions are most visible in Sedaris’ essay, as they both learn a new language from not knowing to know, from confusion to fluency. However, Sedaris believes that the convention that Liao mentioned is that “Literacy narratives both show and tell.” and must illustrate ideas about things as a result of one’s own experiences. However, in Sedaris’ essay, It appears like she’s complaining about her French teacher’s harshness in the classroom, but she didn’t elaborate on how she improved her French comprehension. Instead, she simply asserts that she understands the teacher’s final remarks. 

4. By the end of her piece, I don’t believe Manson feels the same way she did at the beginning. The situation wasn’t totally solved, but she tried her best and was satisfied with the outcome. “Even if my thoughts were incomplete, I stated what I had to say.” There was more to it. You may count on me for the rest of your days! My words were not enough, but I did the best I could” (Manson, 88). Without being self-conscious, she accepts that she has a problem with vocabulary as well as the ability to express her thoughts.

Eric Noah, Week 3 , The Star of David

Eric Noah 

The Star of David, also known as the Magen David in Hebrew, is a 6 pointed star that you wear around your neck to symbolize modern Jewish identity. 

This star made out of gold that I never take off sits right above my heart to show and symbolize my Jewish identity. You don’t only see the Star Of David only with necklaces, it’s seen in synagogues, Jewish tombstones, and the flag of the State of Israel. The term Magen David in the Jewish language means God as the protector (shield) of David. Every day that I wear my necklace I feel certain protection from God throughout my day. I received my first Star Of David necklace from my grandmother as a bar mitzvah gift when I turned 13. It was more than just a gift because in the Torah it says when a Jewish boy turns 13 he becomes a man and is obligated to follow all the laws and commandments as Jew, and one is to practice the religion with joy and pride.  For me, The Star Of David has both a spiritual and a sentimental value in my heart since I received  it on one of the most important days of my life.  

Having the ability to practice my religion freely, and being able to wear my necklace with pride, symbolizes my true identity as a person. Star Of David has also connected me to many discourse communities. It has connected me to many new people that happen to be modern-day practicing Jews like me. Although many people may be afraid now to show their Jewish pride and identity in the outside world due to the rise of major Anti-semitism, I continue to wear my Star Of David with pride every single day of my life.  

 

Nana(Fengchan Huang)Week 3, Fountain pen

      It is neither as precious as antelope wood carving, nor as pearl and jade. It is only an ordinary fountain pen that has faded and even leaked ink, but it is the hope my most important person in my life had for me.

      This is the most important farewell gift I have ever received in my life. “It may be the last time to give you a present face to face.” I turned my head, it was Kiki, my aunt. Carefully took out a delicate box from her arms. I rushed to her excitedly and took the gift. I opened it and saw: a “broken” fountain pen. My expectations and fantasies are all breaks, and the smile on my face is obviously a little stiff. Kiki saw the change of expression on my face, but still reluctantly smiled and said, “Nana, this pen is the most important thing in my life. When I got my first job, I bought a pen and told myself that one day I would stand out and become a contributor to the world. You are my favorite child. I hope you will think of me when you see this fountain pen.” I understood my aunt’s intention, and I took the pen gingerly.
      After dinner, my aunt went to a new place and started her new life. She didn’t tell anyone where it was. Just vaguely heard my mother and aunt through phone calls. Every time my aunt would ask my mom am I doing good. But now my family haven’t received any phone call from my aunt for seven years, and we have completely lost contact, but I will still take this fountain pen with me wherever I go. Then my whole family immigrated to the U.S, I still will have the fountain pen with me from China to the United States. My aunt taught me the truth of being a good person from an early age. I can’t repay her kindness. I have to study hard and live up to her expectations of me.
      Fountain pen represents encouragement, because since ancient times, the pen has represented a symbol of culture. For example, many dynasties value literature rather than martial arts and attach more importance to literary officials. Therefore,  giving people the fountain pen is a symbol of ability, representing continuous progress and more recognition of one’s ability. It is such a “ragged” pen, attached to my aunt’s soul, and will always grow with me.

Nana (Fengchan Huang) Week 3, Reading Response

1. Anzaldua disagrees with the idea that there are firm line between different languages and that speakers of different languages do not have a common reality. ” Chicano Spanish is not incorrect, it is a living language “. This quote shows that even different people may speak different languages, the purpose of speaking a language is to communicate. It’s just a living language. She proves that there can be a common reality even if she speaks different languages, because she is the one speaks different languages.
2. I think Anzaldua’s style and feature in her literacy narrative is with a purpose, like “why she want to tell this story”.  “To get rid of our accents… Wild tongues can’t be tamed, they can only be cut out.” So after reading her story I think the purpose is she felt the language barriers is frustrating. But later she gives example of how she overcome it and be proud of her heritage and culture, also want people feel the same way, to arouse people’s compassion and sympathy. “Humildes yet proud, quietos yet wild… Stubborn, persevering, impene-trable as stone, yet possessing a malleability that renders us unbreakable, we, the mestizas and mestizos, will remain.”

3. Liao’s conventions for literacy narrative are most apparent in Sedaris’s essay as they both learn a new language from not knowing to knowing, both are confusion to fluency. But the convention that seems less important to Sedari is, Liao mentioned that “Literacy narratives both show and tell.” and need to illustrate ideas about things as a result of one’s own experiences. But in Sedaris’s essay, I can only see that she’s talking about how her French teacher is harsh for the class, and did not illustrate a lot of how she became better at understanding French. Instead, she just claims she can understand what the teacher says at the end.

4. I don’t believe she felt the same way at the end of the essay. Mansion describes silence as a tool for speak when it is unspeakable, but she doesn’t always do it because she needs to talk to friends and family. At the very end of the essay, she fell silent again, but no longer using terms like “I don’t know”, she sat down and cried, saying things were unclear, but the point was she changed the tone from “I don’t know” to “I said what I could”.

Aria Malovany Week 3 Reading Response 3

      1. For Anzaldua, not being able to mix her speaking of different languages is absurd. “Until I am free to write bilingually and to switch codes without having always to translate, while I still have to speak English or Spanish when I would rather speak Spanglish, and as long as I have to accommodate the English speakers rather than having them accommodate me, my tongue will be illegitimate,” (Anzaldua, 74). She is saying here that if she can accommodate English speakers without a returned accommodation, she should also be able to write bilingually without translation or criticism. If she has to switch languages while speaking to people, why can’t she do it in her own world and work as well?  Anzaldua doesn’t want her speaking of different languages to represent “different universes,” she wants to be able to speak freely. She believes that your culture is in your true self and soul, not your location, which causes speakers of different languages to share a common reality. “Deep in our hearts we believe that being Mexican has nothing to do with which country one lives in. Being Mexican is a state of soul—not one of mind, not one of citizenship. Neither eagle nor serpent, but both. And like the ocean, neither animal respects borders,” (Anzaldua, 76)
      2. I think Anzaldua is a very persuasive writer since she really stands up for what she truly believes in. She chose to write her literary narrative based on the hardships she went through her whole life about speaking her own language. Her writing is almost contradictory, rebellious if you would. Her entire piece is about how she wasn’t able to express herself in the way she wanted to, yet her narrative is written bilingually. As the reader reads about how she couldn’t switch between languages, Anzaldua did exactly that in her piece and proved that she was able to emerge from all the criticism and drift into success, which persuades inspiration.
      3. (a)“Successful literacy narratives use specific examples to illustrate ideas about literacy that we’ve acquired as a result of our own experiences, and explain explicitly why these ideas are important,” (Liao, 59). Sedaris definitely illustrated his narrative. He clearly described his classroom experience and the beginning of his learning French. I was able to picture his teacher and her voice. He nicely explained what it’s like to live in a foreign country and not fluently speak the native language. I experienced this when I went to Israel for my gap year. Although I’ve been learning Hebrew my whole life, I never really fully caught on and am far from fluent. I very much related to Sedaris’s illustration about that. (b)“Literacy narratives are stories in which something changes. If nothing changes, then it’s not a narrative. How did a particular moment change or help you achieve some greater awareness about culture, identity, or the world as you know it?” (Liao, 59). Liao’s convention about change doesn’t seem to be so present in Sedaris’s essay. Although at the end he is able to understand what his teacher is saying, he said himself, “Understanding doesn’t mean that you can suddenly speak the language. Far from it. It’s a small step, nothing more,” (Sedaris, 5). There is small change in that he sees himself starting to improve and some improvement for the future, but there were not such drastic changes in his progress of learning French and the process of his literacy as a whole.
      4. I don’t think Manson feels the same way as she did in the beginning by the end of her essay. Although she couldn’t completely fix the problem she was facing, she tried and was comfortable with the outcome. “I said my thoughts, even though they were incomplete. I felt more than that. I always will. But I said what I could, and that was enough,” (Manson, 88). Instead of her feeling self conscious about her vocabulary and ability to say what she’s thinking, she acknowledges her problem and settles nicely with her progress.

Vocabulary:

  1. Recourse- (n) a source of help in a difficult situation
  2. hailed – (v) call out to (someone) to attract attention
  3. Detest- (v) dislike intensely.
  4. Forged- (v) move forward gradually or steadily.
  5. leafing – (v) turn over (the pages of a book or the papers in a pile), reading them quickly or casually.