ENG 2100: Writing 1 with Jay Thompson

Student Responses

11/29 Response

I think that making writing “easier” for people to understand outside of my native country or homeland is not worth it. I would rather write in my original language and have it be easier to understand for natives of my land rather than translate it to fit the tongues of others. Writer Ngugi acknowledges this and says “that question is what set in motion my thinking about the unequal relationship of power between languages”.  In the writing world, there is a relationship between all works and language. Across the world, English takes top place for being the most prevalent language in literature. Ngugi admits this in the article, while he also argues the importance of writing in your native language.  Ngugi feels that you should be able to write in your native language without being penalized for it, which I agree with. However, another writer: Rushdie feels the opposite. He feels that you should feel pride in writing in English, since it is a part of post colonial language. He reports that “The debate about the appropriateness of English in post-British India has been raging ever since 1947; but today, I find, it is a debate which has meaning only for the older generation.” I disagree with Rushdie, because I have seen many people these days fighting against post colonial traditions, so I feel like this topic would be very interesting to them.

Gabrielle Nolan 11/29

  1. Diet has an impact on our health and is bidirectional
  2. Psychiatric disorders, depression, anxiety, etc can cause eating disorders and vice versa.
  3. The Mediterranean Diet is supposed to include consuming a low amount of meat, a high amount of nutes, fruits, and vegetables, and healthy fats.
  4. The Mediterranean Diet can lead you to live a long life, have weight loss, and low rates of cardiovascular diseases. These factors can lead to mood increase and happiness.
  5. Health factors like obesity can cause you to either binge eat or starve yourself which may increase stress, depression, and anxiety.
  6. From a psychological standpoint, over or under eating can cause issues like being self conscious about your appearance which may increase the chance of becoming depressed.
  7. Eating a diet high in fats interfere with the synthesis of serationi, the “happy” chemical in our brains

blog post 11/29 Gabrielle Nolan

I think the best way to preserve a culture’s history is to allow people to use the language that they can speak and write best. Although using native language is key to culture preservation, utilizing other tools (like the English language) can encourage people to study a culture for longer periods of time since they won’t be frustrated trying to learn a new language. Rushdie says “They use it as an Indian language, as one of the tools they have to hand.” This refers to Indian people using the English language as well. However, it is also argued that the English language shows a piece of their culture lost since they were taken over by the British. Ngugi says “unequal relationship of power between languages” referring to the post-colonial African government putting him in prison for writing in his African Language. He then fights this and continues to write in his “mother tongue”. For Ngugi perestive, he wasn’t given the option to write in his culture’s language which takes away the history. However, from Rushdie’s perspective he just wants to use both languages to help understand the culture better.

Akosua Omari-Dottoh, Reading Response 11/29

Moving From Cultural Appropriation to Cultural Appreciation by Sandrine Han.

  1.  Gives context about topic and definition of apporopriation
  2. Talks social media and it’s connection to culture, along with using social media as an example for topic
  3. Multicultural art classrooms- example and a look into these classrooms, what they teach, what they lack.
  4. What is cultural Appreciation? definiton of cultural appreciation and examples to hekp better understand the phrase
  5. What is cultural appreciation? coming back to original definition and examples
  6. What is art appropriation? focused section of a form of appropriation
  7. cultural appropriation? cultural appreciation? real life examples.
  8. As art educators, what shall we do? solutions to issue.
  9. Outside art class. what we need to learn.
  10. conclusion, draws back to idea of appropriation and what we can do better

Nick Serrao 11/29 Reading Responses

  1. As the COVID-19 vaccination is becoming more readily available, discussions arise about if it should be mandatory to get vaccinated.
  2. Herd immunity can be achieved if everyone decides to get vaccinated.
  3. Vaccines are well established and widely accepted nowadays.
  4. 58% of the general population feels like they should get vaccinated.
  5. They show both sides of the question with evidence.
  6. The data study contained opinions of 1012 adults when it came to their intentions to getting vaccinated.
  7. The study obtained info on would people get vaccinated and if not, they asked more questions to further their understanding.
  8. 74% supported mandatory vaccination and 62% intended to get vaccinated for COVID-19
  9. Higher average income and high educational status was in correlation with support towards mandatory vaccination.
  10. Young adults and females were associated with the intention to not get vaccinated for COVID-19.
  11. Non healthy individuals seem to not want to get vaccinated.
  12. Increased trust in the state
  13. if vaccination rates were more then 80% then herd immunity is possible.

Akosua Omari-Dottoh , 11/29

I believe that it ia better to preserve a cultures history by having writers work in their home languages. I don’t think it’s always necassary to make it “easier” for everyone to access a reading, and I definetly don’t think a writer should be obligated to write in a language that is easier for others to access. I think in some cases it also takes away the power of some writing especially when writing about these culural backgrounds, to write it in English. Ngugi acknowledges that,”that question is what set in motion my thinking about the unequal relationship of power between languages?” There is a unequal relationship, and that relationship usually places English as more powerful. I belive that writing in your own home language is a way to start bringing power to other languages. Ngugi argues that writers should be able to write in their home languages without being penalized, and be able to do it in pride. Ngugi sharing his experience about writing in his language compared to in English admits to this idea of a  language inbalance.  Rushdie, on the other hand, argues that English is a part of a lot of post-colonial language and that’s okay, to take pride in that. Rushdie reports that,” The debate about the appropriateness of English in post-British India has been raging ever since 1947; but today, I find, it is a debate which has meaning only for the older generation.” I find that statement totally untrue, for I myself know many people of the younger generation, especially in my family, that find this topic very meaningful. I think there is power in language and there is power and importance of writing in your own. Those that wish to understand will also be willing to translate.

Nishmitha Rodrigo Blog Post 11/29

The author, Nugugi, argues that it is important for people to write in their native language because it is a way of preserving the culture. How Rushdie has a counterargument to this, stating that it is in fact better to write in English. Although I think both of their arguments are valid and credible, I also think that it’s important for writers to write in the language they feel most comfortable with. For example, in the text Nugugi states, “before, I had written a few plays in English, and novels in English, and I had not been in prison for being critical of the post-colonial system. So why now? And that question is what set in motion my thinking about the unequal relationship of power between language?” This quotes from the text reveals the fact that it was common for people write in English, opposed to their native mother tongue language because it was one of those things that were considered normal at the time. However, I believe that the truth of the matter is that more people feel incomparably comfortable when writing in their native language. This is because writer’s have more thought flow and becomes extremely passionate about the topic of their writing when they aren’t specifically restricted to writing in one certain language. Writer’s should not be restricted when it comes to their chosen language of writing because sometimes one can be more appealing to their senses than the other one. However, the issues comes in when one language is more spoken and read than the other one because this brings in power struggle where the exposure to writing is one language is higher than the other one. This relates to Rushdie’s argument because she mentioned how kids in the India are already using and incorporating English into their lives and their writing, which essentially shows how much exposure the language of English has across the world. Regardless, at the end of the day the write should be writing in which ever language they feel the most comfortable in because its entirely a personal choice. Plus, native language is a huge part of anyone’s culture and its extremely important to preserve the culture.

James Koloniaris, Reading Response, 11/29

  1. Introduction to peanut butter and pros about it, with some concerns from athletes introduced.
  2. Describes how peanut butter is a filling food and sticks to your ribs giving you that full feeling.
  3. A study from Purdue University shows that peanut eaters statistically don’t overeat their daily caloric goal.
  4. Contrasts peanut butter-based meals in snacks with unhealthy counterparts like cheeseburgers and Ice-cream. Shows the health benefits of peanut butter compared to these foods.
  5. Describes the cost of peanut butter and how it’s very affordable compared to other protein-rich foods.
  6. Shows the amount of peanut butter needed to achieve daily protein goals, states that two tablespoons of peanut butter are 7 grams of protein.
  7. Provides tips on how to get the most protein out of a meal that includes peanut butter. An example used is a PB & j with a tall glass of milk, this is approximately 28 grams of protein.
  8. Talks about the beneficial nutrients found in peanut butter and certain advantages they give you.
  9. Talks about the fiber in peanut butter and how it can help dieters eat less without feeling hungry.
  10. Talks about the different fats found in commercial peanut butter such as Skippy, and how minimal bad fat there is compared to good fat even in a non-organic product.
  11. Tips on how to avoid the small amount of trans-fat, specifically using organic peanut butter as an alternative.
  12. Talks about combinations of peanut butter with other foods that will help you with your diet. Some foods mentioned were Thai noodles, bananas, bread, apples, oatmeal, crackers, and raisins.

Nishmitha Rodrigo Reading Response 11/29

Yugar, Theresa A., and Rosemary Radford Ruether. Sor Juana Inés De La Cruz: Feminist Reconstruction of Biography and Text. Wipf & Stock Publishers, 2014.

  1. Theresa Ann Yugar been studying the thought and writings of the seventeenth century Mexican writer, Sor Juana Inés de la Cruz, for more than twenty years. She wrote a Master’s thesis on Sor Juana’s thought in 1997 at Harvard University and a doctoral thesis at the Claremont Graduate University in 2013. (authors credibility) 
  2. Book is about Sor Juana’s life and culmination of her research 
  3. Latina feminism and it’s effect on ecofeminism in the Americas in the sense of what it means to be fully human as a woman in the context of patriarchal society. 
  4. Founding mother in the latin feminism community that led a tragic martyr in the struggle for authentic life.
  5. Mesoamerican worldview that was crushed by the Spanish conquerors but was still very much present in the family and local population in which she grew up, the haciendas of Nepantla and Panoayán outside Mexico City. 
  6. The world brought to Mexico by the Spaniards that represented their colonial expansion, their championing of the Counter Reformation of the Catholic Church against the Protestant Reformation and their gender ideology and practices which they developed in Spain and brought to their colonies in the Americas.
  7. Sor Juana struggled with being stuck between two cultures and as well as with her own vision of redemption as the reconciliation of these world views through the lenses of both cultures. 
  8. She grew up with her mother during her childhood days. Her mother was extremely strong because she was an unmarried women so her mother was already fighting the gender based stereotypes of society. 
  9. Sor Juana’s father was an absent father. 
  10. At the age of sixteen, Sor Juana became a lady-in-waiting at the vice regal court and was influenced particularly by the Vireina Doña Leonor Carreto. This influential woman was drawn to Juana’s intelligence and creativity and nurtured her development as a scholar and writer. 
  11. Sor Juana wrote poems that were read by the elite, sometimes critical of the inequalities she saw around her and the assumptions of women’s inferiority. 
  12. As she reached adulthood, she had to pick between getting married and taking her place in a male dominated society or enter the religious life of becoming a nun. She chose to become a nun because it places her in a community of women who are in charge of their own lives, resources and intuitions. And this fact was very appealing to sor juana. 
  13. From here own, she began to get the education she always carved and wrote her own books and did research. She also spread her Knowledge. 
  14. When the church found out of her doings, she got into conflict with powerful and egotistical men in the church community. They were scandalized by her independent voice. 

James Koloniaris, Blogpost 11/29

I believe that both of these scenarios are acceptable in their own ways. No matter what it is important to preserve your culture and its history but on the other hand, I do believe If all writings were understandable by one single language, in this case, English, it would supply more knowledge throughout the world. Reading these short excerpts I do see some inequality faced when one wants to write in their native language. Ngugi faces this and describes how he was punished or doing so. In the excerpt, it states, “that question is what set in motion my thinking about the unequal relationship of power between languages.” Here Ngugi acknowledges the injustices he faced further inspired him to continue writing in his native language. It shows the inequalities that are there when it comes to language and which are more “acceptable”.  On the other side of this argument, we got Rushdie who argues that all the inequalities due to language were only experienced by the older generation. In his short excerpt, it states,” It is a debate which has meaning only for the older generation.” This claim by Rushdie shows how children won’t have a problem with English due to it being a part of their everyday life. Even though this does provide advantages, people should focus on the here and now more often than the future. There should be focus on the prejudices people like Ngugi endure. This is confirmed by the way Ngugi wrote his first novel that is in the Gĩkũyũ language, on toilet paper, quite unusual. But this was done during his imprisonment in Africa for writing in the language. This goes to show the corruption there is due to language. Governments are trying to rid of people’s cultural history and it’s not right.