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Simultaneity (Paragraph 122)

1 Leave a comment on paragraph 1 0 “The moment the lieutenant thrust the sword into his left side and she saw the deathly pallor fall across his face, like an abruptly lowered curtain, Reiko had to struggle to prevent herself from rushing to his side. Whatever happened, she must watch. She must be a witness. That was the duty her husband had laid upon her. Opposite her, a mat’s space away, she could clearly see her husband biting his lip to stifle the pain. The pain was there, with absolute certainty, before her eyes. And Reiko had no means of rescuing him from it.”

2 Leave a comment on paragraph 2 0 During the scene of the lieutenant killing himself with the sword, there are two action elements occuring at the same time, Reiko watching and the suicide itself. This creates two potential experiences for the reader as they could be thinking and feeling the pain of the sword but also feeling as if they are in Reiko’s position watching it all happen an the witness to her husbands suicide and knowing that she must now kill herself as well in honor.

Source: https://blogs.baruch.cuny.edu/patriotism/?p=96