After breaking my poem apart like I should have the first time I found my self with some what an argument still don’t think its very strong. I can work my way around it and back up my thesis with some quotes. I honestly though I was going to kick ass with the paper, since I truly love my poet. But as of right now it has not been what I expected. My first rough draft was horrible it was more of a research paper than a poem analysis. I didn’t exactly put any emotion to my first draft.

Still working on a thesis, hardest paper I have had to do in college. I will work through and find a perfect argument to rise. As the digital part of this essay, it goes perfect with the entire idea. That is the only thing I must say I am looking forward is shooting my little movie. I like the entire point of my small video also.