Category Archives: Reflective Writing Log

A lot of my ideas has changed since starting this paper. Right now I feel like I have total control over this paper which is exactly what I want. Thankfully Professor Kaufman was able to help me find that thesis … Continue reading →

Today me and Maura had finished recording our digital essay project. Now we all have to do is edit the clips that we had worked on. Hopefully the video will come out to be okay and get our meaning across. … Continue reading →

The idea for my blog came at the last minute. I was spending most of my time worrying about how to make my thesis specific, and then while doing something completely unrelated, the idea sparked. I was able to write … Continue reading →

  I was inspired after talked with Professor Kaufman because she gave some helpful suggestions about how to figure out a strong thesis base on a poem. But, the sad thing was, she misunderstood my original thesis statement and led … Continue reading →

This final paper allowed for more freedom, but with freedom comes responsibility. There were so many chances for the paper to get too cliched or too “simple” and you had to make sure it didn’t. I had trouble thinking of … Continue reading →

The revisions I am making to my essay seems to be working out very well, but I’m still confused on when to use the sources to show how it supports my thesis and how it is connected. I found it easy … Continue reading →

I chose strings because from the start the title was simple and i knew what it was.  When i began the poem and started watching i noticed that it was different from  few i had clicked on before. For example … Continue reading →

Looking over my draft I see that I don’t have a very specific thesis. For my first paper I was able to come up with a thesis fairly quickly. For this paper it took me about an hour or two … Continue reading →

After the day I finally received my paper from my professor, I began to look the entire paper over again. I have noticed that Professor Kaufman has made a comment pointing out that I have to make my thesis way … Continue reading →

My biggest concern is the opening paragraph. I am afraid that it is not attention-grabbing and visual enough to engage the reader. In my head, I pictured a really futuristic classroom and I dont know if my opening paragraph portrays … Continue reading →