The revisions I am making to my essay seems to be working out very well, but I’m still confused on when to use the sources to show how it supports my thesis and how it is connected. I found it easy to cite my poem, it is mostly visual, since you can just describe what the poem looks like instead of making complex citaiton to reference your poem from the Electronic Literature Works.
The most concerning topic in my essay has to be my thesis. Also I’m uneasy with the structure because I want to show that a blank page is not just a boring and tormenting page for you to write, but a tool for you to have fun writing your opininon, ideas and your view about the world. Instead of painfully writing your essay you should enjoy writing with your own creativity and to avoid boredom itself. So I’m hoping my essay flows and links to each other that the reader can understand what I’m trying to say clearly.