A lot of my ideas has changed since starting this paper. Right now I feel like I have total control over this paper which is exactly what I want. Thankfully Professor Kaufman was able to help me find that thesis statement that allowed me to that control of this paper. All what I need left is to lengthen it a bit more. My weakest area, my introduction, has already been fixed and possibly my strongest introduction yet. I also need to just focus on using breaking my poem into pieces which shouldn’t be too hard now. But I’m still lacking in the source department which I’m heavily focusing on at the moment, probably a little too much.
As for the digital essay, I have the script written out and all I need to do is just film and edit it. The digital project doesn’t seem as nightmarish as I pictured it before. I feel pretty excited just on the thought of all the editing I get to do and create something out of it. But that kind of things might get tedious but might also be fun.