This is a revised First Amendment (to be further revised as the Wonderland is set in stone). The First Amendment no longer grants citizens the freedom of religion. People will no longer be able to practice their own religion. This creative document serves to show the change in political perspective on religion.
Good start. This document might look more convincing if you placed it beside a copy of actual Bill of Rights where the print is too small to read. You could present this mock document as zoommed in view.