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Weekly Update (October 1-3)
Dear Feature Writers:
Do read (today’s NYT) Michael Barbaro’s profile on Chirlane McCray, “Once Alienated, and Now a Force In Her Husband’s Bid for Mayor,” a feature on Chirlane McCray, whose husband, Bill de Blasio, is now the front-runner to become the next mayor of New York.
We will continue discussing drafts of your Profiles on Thursday. Be prepared to describe the arc (design) of your story: how do you move forward from your lede to the finale?
Also due: 250 words small business proposal (hand in hard copies and upload to blog) and Joseph Mitchell reading (Joe Gould’s Secret).
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Poverty Rate Up in City and Income Gap is Wide, Census Data Show
Please read this New York Times story (New York section)and add the info into your BACKGROUNDER folder.
Note the multiple quotes and diverse sources in the story.
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Lively Quotes
Do read, “Rituals of Retail’s Past, Kept Alive On Lower East Side in the Digital Era,” NYT, 9/16/13 by David Gonzalez:
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Blog Post Question for 9/19 Burden Profile NYT
Do you think that this lengthy profile of Amanda Burden is fair and/or unbiased? Does the writer (Julie Satow) reveal her own point-of-view?
What image are we left with of Burden?
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The Voting Blocs of New York City
For your neighborhood backgrounders: Do read this interactive feature:
http://www.nytimes.com/newsgraphics/2013/09/06/voting-blocs/?ref=nyregion
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Your Perceptive Comments on E.B. White’s Here Is New York
Just read through all of your fine comments on E.B. White’s Here Is New York and I suggest that you all do the same. Here is a little summary of some of the highpoints:
Kamelia: “White writes at a moment of pre-environmental activism–made her think of the tree in the film The Lorax I.”
John: “Welcomes privacy as a commuter.” Says that loneliness can result in peacefulness and become a “communal bond.”
Rebecca: “White describes the boroughs with such New York style disdain that non-New Yorkers wouldn’t want to step foot onto New York soil.”
Danielle: “People are so entangled with making dreams come true that they forget the point of living.”
Marian: “18 inches of separation and connection between New Yorkers.”
Jennifer: “Without the gift of loneliness and privacy, New Yorkers “could lose all patience within themselves and within their world, eventually becoming, dare I say it, rude.”
Ezra (a commuter): “All the commotion, bright lights, and attractions vying for our attention are merely a silent background to most as they race through the agendas of the day. Paradoxically for those longing for internal quiet, New York is perfect.”
Earl: “The way White is able to tap into the emotion of the city is what makes this piece timeless.”
Margarita: Speaks of use of technology –“how social media has replaced social interactions.”
Thomas: “Here Is New York is not simply a description. If anything, it is a foreboding.”
Nirvani: “I can find a space on a bench in Madison Square Park and put my earphones in and there I find solidarity: a slice of loneliness that White speaks of. That slice today is much thinner than before as our seasons rarely hold the relaxed air breathed in by die-hards of White’s summer.”
Roxanne: Speaking of the morning commute: “Strangers make it their priority to ignore others by covering their eyes with sunglasses, stuffing their ears with ear phones, pulling their bags close, and letting their minds wander.”
Crystal: “Building were being built taller than trees and planes were new to everyone. White had an idea and it is upsetting that it became a reality.”
Gerard: “The man from The Bronx who travels to Staten Island every weekend to help Hurricane Sandy victims with the restoration of their homes and businesses. The rushing college student who’s running late for class and stops to help a tourist correct their mistake of taking the R train into Queens from 59th street, when they actually meant to hop on the uptown 6, destined for the Met Museum. These examples of natives stepping outside of their privacy may not be what is brought up when the general boxed description of a New Yorker is the topic of conversation; but the layers of people and personality types is what makes that box simply too small to be the whole truth.”
Abel: “People go through one phase of the day to another at the speed of light.”
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Assignments: Sept. 10-12
Tuesday, September 10th: Please bring in a clip of a feature story and be prepared to discuss its ingredients: what works and what does not work.
Thursday, September 12th: Neighborhood of your choice. 250 words. Bring in hard copy and upload under category: Neighborhoods. Make this an effective pitch: Why this neighborhood –possible stories –profiles, business, community services, conflicts.
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Posting
Your names will be added as blog users later today (September 3rd).
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E.B. White’s Here is New York
Write a post for Sept. 3rd:
Analyze E. B.White’s opening line, “On any person who desires such queer prizes, New York will bestow the gift of loneliness and the gift of privacy.”
Discuss White’s prophecy (final pages of the book) about airplanes in the light of 9/11.
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Welcome Feature Writers!
Welcome to Feature Article Writing!
This workshop course in FEATURE ARTICLE WRITING will focus on neighborhoods. During the semester, each of you will become an expert on your neighborhood by researching its demographics, attending local community board meetings, and, through interviewing, building a source list of contact people who may be community leaders, politicians, teachers, newspaper reporters, business owners, and/or residents—single or married, native-born or immigrant, young or old—all of whom contribute to the vibrancy of the community. What makes the neighborhood tick? What are its chief assets? What are its biggest problems? Who is in power? Who is left out? And, most important of all, how do neighborhoods survive/thrive in a period of economic turmoil?
Good feature writing is based on a solid command of structure, insightful reporting, research, observation, a feel for style and narrative, an appreciation (and grounding) in the writing of other fine writers, and significant re-writing. We will hone our feature writing skills through a number of in-class writing and editing assignments as well as several short feature-writing assignments (500 to 800 words maximum), one longer assignment (1000 to 1,200 words) and a thorough rewrite. Your skilled reporting, original research, and lively writing will yield feature stories that no one else has written before—little known stories about people, places and issues in neighborhoods that deserve to be told.
In addition to formal written assignments, the class will publish a neighborhood BLOG, which you will post bi-weekly as a neighborhood reporter. The goal here is to share community coverage and, at the same time, give you practice writing for social media. For your first blog post, please comment on the May 18, 2012 NYT story, “Amanda Burden Wants to Remake New York. She Has 19 Months Left.” http://www.nytimes.com/2012/05/20/nyregion/amanda-burden-planning-commissioner-is-remaking-new-york-city.html
See you all on Thursday, August 29th!
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