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Getting Your Blog Portfolio in Order

Dear Feature Writers:

Please make sure that ALL of your blog work is linked to your name so that I can look at your entire portfolio! And do add comments!

Thanks,

Prof. B.

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Teen Joyrides Run Awry, Leaving Behind Community in Questions

Vigil in memory of four Indo-Caribbean teens held in Smokey Oval Park, south Richmond Hill in October 2012.

Vigil in memory of four Indo-Caribbean teens held in Smokey Oval Park, south Richmond Hill in October 2012. (Photo Courtesy of Jeffrey Liu, Wheel and Torque.com)

TOGETHER Indo-Caribbean teens, parents, community leaders, car enthusiasts, elected officials, teachers, and principals stood on a brisk October evening in the Smokey Oval Park as they heard a neighborhood pandit offer a prayer in Hindi in memory of the tragic death of four teens.

At the end of the vigil, hundreds of teens holding candles dripping of wax and tears swayed to a Jamaican reggae song “Fallen Soldier” stating life on the battlefield is so real.

“That was the first time ever the community has seen such an outpouring of emotions,” said Dhanpaul Narine, a vigil organizer, community leader, and president of a Hindu temple in south Queens.

He mentioned that many family members and friends were in denial that such a tragedy could occur.

Last year on an October night, 17-year-old Joseph Beer took his new Subaru Impreza on a joyride on the 25 and a half-mile Southern State Parkway—a highway notorious for its sharp curves and unpredictable interchanges.

Beer’s parents did know where he was going but he took along four of his friends. They never returned. Later the next day, Beer was found wandering around the wreckage; a tree crushed the car. According to a Patch article, a Nassau County trooper noted that Beer was under the influence of marijuana that night and he was speeding at a rate of over 110 miles per hour.

The accident is just one of many in the Indo-Caribbean community, which have left families, friends, and relatives to mourn the death of such young men for, as local critics say, “reckless” and “stupid” behavior. In 2007 two Indo-Caribbean high school students died after speeding into a guardrail along the Van Wyck Expressway with a black Dodge Charger. And in 2011 Bishnu Dinanauth, a car enthusiast, raced another vehicle along the Southern State Parkway, that ultimately ended in his death.

A New York Times feature suggests that Indo-Caribbean immigrant parents of modest means should be more careful when giving their children an expensive, fast vehicle and many members of the community agree.

“Why is it we would give a 17 year old an expensive vehicle to go joyriding on a dangerous night in a dangerous city?” asked Narine later adding, “Children are having all this freedom and aren’t accountable to any.”

Bhopaul “B.P.” Singh, a parent and long-time owner of an auto repair shop in Ozone Park, Queens said that if parents give their teenage son or daughter a sports car, they should be able to monitor how and when they drive it. “If you give them a sports car you have to watch them,” he said noting that parents can also keep the keys of the car.

Though he also mentioned, “You have to know what kind of car you give them.” He pointed out that often parents are not aware that some cars are specifically made for performance value and racing.

Yet while giving a car to a teen may be a concern, the right group of friends is also an important factor to Singh and Narine.

Narine said it is almost like a rite of passage for young men to receive their learner’s permit at 16 years and then when they get a vehicle, the friends appear.

“Because he got wheels now everyone goes for the joyride,” he said.

“You got to know who your kids friends are,” said Singh.

But when friends are not the problem, the culture can be. To many teens and car enthusiasts, racing is often portrayed as glamorous and is a culture that they say will never end, even to those who oppose and have coped with the deadly consequences.

“There’s no stop to racing,” said Sateesh Parsotan, a twenty-six year old ‘low and slow’ car enthusiast. “You have movies like Fast and Furious, you have movies like Need for Speed, you have video games, you have things that come out every single day that causes racing to come out on top—when it comes to stance you only have me.”

He explained that after the death of Bishnu Dinanauth, his best friend, found racing his car on the Southern State, he no longer wanted to engage in the risky behavior.

“The consequences are not fun,” he said pointing out that “stance,” or lowering the coil springs of cars to ride slow with a “slammed, pretty” look is the new culture he is advocating with his network called Lowered Congress.

But he added that racing is a behavior that is not likely to be tamed anytime soon among not just Indo-Caribbeans, but a community of those who speed with beautiful cars throughout the city.

“You have no control over it, I have no control over it. Racing in itself is just something that people are just gonna do, because its just competitive and its just fun,” he said. “When they can’t do it on the track they do it on the street”

Unlike many other states like Florida, there is no racetrack in New York City designed for racing fast vehicles with a nearby emergency crew and no other vehicles on the road. Although, there are paved asphalt speedways for motorsport enthusiasts, many teens prefer longer strips of lonely highways for drag racing.

But some say that driving while under the influence of alcohol and marijuana are other factors in the issue of joyriding. “The problem is a combination of a lot of things,” said Narine who noted alcohol being an issue seen both back home and in the Indo-Caribbean immigrant enclave in south Queens.

With popular chutney songs, originating from Guyana and Trinidad, and broadcasted through the homeland and spreading to the Indo-Caribbean diaspora in the U.S., rum is often heard as an object of desire. “Ah drinka,” “Bring de Rum,” and “Where deh Puncheon deh?” are just some of the top hits within the past several years among Indo-Caribbean mainstream music.

Some Guyanese officials argue the glorifying of alcohol in music and lifestyle of Guyanese people are related.

According to a piece in TIME published in 2010, Evan Persaud, Guyana’s chairman of broadcasting advisory committee has said they are considering issuing a warning to television stations against airing chutney music videos that promote drinking after reports show Guyana drink nearly a gallon and a half of alcohol per capita.

Though despite the semblance of issues from fast cars, peer pressure, a dangerous culture, substance abuse, and bad music, schools continue to be the playing field where having a car means much more than being able to drive to the nearest grocery store or even to school.

“What does it mean to really have a nice car in high school? It means a lot. It means the world. It means you get to pick up girls and go someplace and then go back to school. You know, you’re one of those lucky kids,” said Parsotan who pointed out, “There’s a lot of kids that have to take the bus.”

He was gifted a “really fast car,” a RX 7 that he modified to make even faster at his father’s auto shop in Queens. Though he mentioned that although he did experiment with driving fast, he quickly graduated from the risky behavior.

Although many cite the issue of teens driving fast with cars gifted by their Indo-Caribbean parents, Parsotan said it is okay to give your child a sports car, as long as you teach them how to use it. After all, it’s not a bad thing to give your child what you never had in life.

“I wouldn’t call you lucky, I would call you fortunate—not wealthy but someone whose actually fortunate to have parents that worked in life,” he said.

Singh noted back home in Guyana, he was one of the very few who had the opportunity to drive a car. His father was a rice farmer and in addition to their tractor, their family also owned a car though most of his neighbors in the village used the bus, motorcycles, or simply bicycles to get from one part of the country to the next.

Though Beer was also gifted a fast car by his parents but after the death of four of his friends, he has been sentenced to 25 years to life in prison.

Was it the right sentence?

“That’s a long time, and he was a teenager,” Narine said. “I don’t know if it’s too much or too less. It’s kinda hard to say because he’s a young man.”

Beer’s Facebook page, still open for comments, reflects a number of teens who support and miss him.

“It’s been almost a year bro. Hope your doing well,” said one family member. “The justice system of America is f*cked up. Keep your head up bruh.”

 

 

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Heading Elsewhere for a Better School: Education in Washington Heights

Growing up in Washington Heights, when I was in the fourth grade I had the opportunity to take a test to get into a charter school in upper Harlem, a few miles south of my current school on 189th Street and Amsterdam Avenue. My parents were elated when they found out I eventually got accepted into the school, and then they had a similar reaction when I was accepted into the high school on City College’s campus, one of the “specialized” public high schools.

The reaction from my parents is an extension of the sentiment sometimes felt throughout Washington Heights, to have the students from the area head elsewhere for a better school than what’s available. This is mainly due to subpar graduation rates and a feeling that teachers could be doing more to help their students.

For decades, many students in Washington Heights were zoned into George Washington High School, a wide campus-style building on 192nd street and Audubon Avenue. The school was notorious for being dangerous and having low graduation rates, and closed in 1999. It then reopened with four smaller schools within it, one on each floor. Community Health Academy of The Heights, a new school with students from grades 6-12, opened in 2006 with an aim to increase the student proficiency levels in the neighborhood.

The school had promise, but ultimately it left some parents feeling underwhelmed. Awilda Fernandez, resident and mother of four, enrolled her daughter Joelle in the school from the 6th to 12th grade. She felt that the students needed “more help in math, and the basic classes they needed to take so they can get into good colleges.” According to Insideschools.org, the 2012 graduation rate for Community Health Academy was 72 percent, higher than the citywide average of 66 percent but still not as high as it should be. In comparison, the four schools that make up the George Washington High School campus have an average graduation rate of 64.5 percent, lower than the citywide average.

Diana Santos, resident and mother of two, sent her son to George Washington and her daughter to Community Health Academy.  Her decision to send her son to George Washington was mainly based on location, “I sent him there because it’s right across the street.” She was satisfied with the school, but she knew there was more at fault with her son’s effort than the school itself. He managed to graduate on time, but according to her it was “just by the crack of the doors.” Diana went to George Washington for high school when she was younger, and, at the time, the school “wasn’t safe at all.  But by the time her son went there, the school was divided into four different campuses, and that meant more security guards on each floor.”

When she decided to send her daughter Cristina to Community Health Academy of the Heights, it was because “Cristina’s teacher had recommended her to go there, saying that it was a really good charter school.” She said even though it’s called community health academy, the group was so tight knit that it was like “the kids themselves were a community” and “the first year that she was there she did really well.” Diana was especially appreciative of the fact that the teachers seemed to care about the students, and they would contact her whenever Cristina’s performance waned. She said this didn’t happen with her son at George Washington, and instead she only got the standard call every marking period indicating that he wasn’t doing well.

Diana felt that communication was the most effective aspect of Community Health Academy, between the teachers and students and parents. She said “when I was growing up, the teachers rarely gave communication with the parents” but added that “now, the teachers were calling me.  I’d get automated recordings for meetings, sometimes the teachers themselves would call me and tell me what they’re doing, and we would participate.” She said there was an “extreme difference” between the two schools.

The daughters of the respective daughters added their own insights to their experiences at the school.  Both have graduated and are currently attending college. Awilda’s daughter Joelle said that “the only thing I liked about my high school was the family feeling that we had,” and then added that “I’m sure I would’ve been better off at another school. My high school didn’t prepare me enough for college life.” She also believes that when it comes to the poor quality of NYC public schools, “it’s the students who make it harder for others to learn, so it’s probably the same kind of students” throughout the city. Diana’s daughter Cristina felt that she got a “good education” but the school “failed to provide the basic high school experience.” Despite this, she “wouldn’t have preferred to attend another school.” She said that “I think the same amount of education is given equally in all public high schools in NYC.”

Even though there is a standardized curriculum throughout the public high schools, it is standardized in the sense that the teachers mainly have the same ultimate goal – getting their students to pass the statewide Regents tests. According to a report from the New York Times, the graduation rate had been generally improving since 2005, but fell from 65.7 percent in 2011 to 64.7 percent in 2012. Even more alarming is the statistic indicating that only 38.4 percent of high school graduates are ready for college or a career. This means that even though the city is making an effort towards having the students graduate, a larger issue looms: students may graduate but they are not ready to handle college and careers after high school.

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Bullied over Parking Spots—

By: Crystal Simbudyal

Parking cone sits outside of Queens resident home.

 
Parking cone sits outside of Queens resident’s home.

 

 

As the days darken faster and the weather brings more chills, Shanel Mendonca arrives home from work in the afternoon carrying her daughter snugged asleep in her arms. A mother, who works full time and arrives home late some evenings, meets a neon orange cone along the road in front of her neighbor’s home. Sometimes it is a garbage can, holding the place for a resident to return and retrieve their parking space. Their driveway remains empty most of the time.

“It is ridiculous that people hold parking spaces. To avoid conflicts with my neighbors, I just park a few blocks up and take a walk several minutes to and from my car,” said Mendonca.

It used to be first-come, first-served, but not in this Queens Village neighborhood. It has become a trend, block after block, orange cones and garbage cans standing in the street have contributed to disturbance of relationships between neighbors because of the lack of parking available.

Shanel Mendonca, a Queens Village resident for 17 years, faces this matter on an everyday basis, as her next door neighbors hold a parking space anytime they leave their home. She is a driver in a home of several other drivers and this issue, she claims, “has become frustrating.” The family owns more than one car and if the driveway is filled up, they have to park on the street.

According to the 2013, Queens Village, New York Census Data & Community Profile, within the 7,588 households in Queens Village, “vehicle ownership trends with 16 [%] of household without vehicles, 38 [%] with one and 46 [%] with two or more vehicles.” If this trend continues, there will be less space available for people to park on the street and a rising number of frustrated neighbors if nothing is done about those marking what they think “is” their private entitled parking space.

Street parking is public. Churches can have no parking anytime.  People can make parking private in front of their home if someone is disabled;  then it will be designated as handicapped parking.

“Cops do not do anything about this. They hardly ever pass through this block anyway, and a few blocks over orange cones take over the road.” said Mendonca.

Objects are filling up the streets, not cars, some driveways even remain empty. “I think people avoid parking in their driveway because it is harder to get out in some instances. So they reserve their spot and claim it when they return home. I’m sure they know they don’t own the street,” said Mendonca.

Neighbors have noticed the inconvenience, but not much has been done to stop this trend. “This has been going on for six years, as long as I have been driving. My sister once moved a garbage can out of the street and parked. The owner of the home waited patiently for her to get out of her car. He then, told her, that’s his parking spot,” she said.

“Parking tickets are issued by street cops. Anyone who breaks the law for street parking, [such as] parking in handicapped spots, double parking, parking during no parking or standing hours, will have to pay a fee of $45 to $165– almost double in Manhattan,” said Ally, a NYPD Officer.

Kamey Tywarie, a mother, wife and resident of 13 years at a Queens Village home, noticed the trend of garbage cans being placed to hold parking spots about four years ago when businesses became more present in the neighborhood. “People just do not want to navigate in and out of their driveway,” she said.

“My husband had pulled up to park at what we thought was a parking spot but noticed someone had their parking cone in place so we couldn’t park. The owner of the home peered out their window. We had a staring contest. I was so upset,” she said.

Another time, Tywarie’s car was scratched with a nail along the sides, after she parked in front of someone’s house. It wasn’t until a year later, that one of her neighbors warned her not to park in this area anymore because her car would be keyed. “I never reported it because I didn’t have enough proof,” Tywarie said.

With the growing populations, families have more than one car; it becomes harder to park these cars in front of each other in a driveway, so people prefer to park in front of their house.

Tywarie has been tempted to the call cops but didn’t feel that it would interest them. “Unless it is a murder, a shoot-out or robbery, the officials don’t care,” she said. However, Shanel Mendonca has called 311, to report her concern about parking spots being held and very little was done in her defense.

“I live in the city, houses are practically on top of each other, and families have more than one car, some house owners, renters, even adults once kids have their own car,” Tywarie said.

It is not only residents who deal with the issue of parking wars. People who take mass transit, or who live by a major subway station like Tywarie has seen an increase in the number of people parking their vehicles and taking the subway to work and school.

“Although it may be a convenience to park in front of someone else’s home and only return to pick up their vehicle , it makes a huge inconvenience for the residents of the community. There is a home health agency building up the road from me and employees and visitors come in the morning and take up parking,” said Tywarie.

If someone takes two hours to shovel the snow in front of their home and wants to park there, they should be able to. “Part of it is being a good neighbor. Move the cone if it’s in your way. If a fight occurs after then we get involved. We can’t summons a ticket because we don’t know what the cone is for. It can range from temporary construction or a dumpster drop across the street from a house that going under construction. Besides without the cones, it wouldn’t be a safe environment if waste materials are just lying around., said Officer Ally.

Although the police will not do much about holding parking spots, residents look for a solution. “I think a solution to all this would be, if people just used their driveway we would have more parking available and if parking spots were available for businesses or apartment building residents then maybe people could just park in places provided when going to that specific home care, or pharmacy or school,” said Tywarie.

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Restaurant Row in Spanish Harlem

Laisla

In the middle of the day on Third Avenue between 104th and 105th Street, Geraldine Mariano walks slowly to the corner where La Isla, a Spanish restaurant is displaying a couple of roasted chickens spinning slowly above a warm fire for all pedestrians to see. She stops and looks across the street where another Spanish restaurant is displaying its own assortment of roasted chickens on a rotisserie surrounded by pork, fried chicken and a couple of yellow rolls full of cheese known as Bollitos. After a moment of indecision, Geraldine turns around and enters La Isla.

“This is a constant struggle for me to decide where to eat everyday. Once it was a good struggle, now it is simply annoying,” Geraldine says. Geraldine is a Filipino professional chef born and raised in the United States who loves food and has lived in Spanish Harlem for a couple of years. Despite being a professional chef, she loves to just buy Spanish food because she isn’t Spanish herself. Talking about the restaurants, she said that, “These restaurants have been in constant war with each other for quite some time, and everyday there’s a new twist that sort of makes this a soap opera.”

In a radius of two streets there are three Spanish restaurants. Each restaurant has a similar menu, which usually consist of lunch specials and combos tailored made for whatever they are serving that day. The first is La Isla on the corner of 104th Street and Third Avenue; it is a small cozy place that is known for its commitment to the customer by offering delivery service and great store hours of operations. They have four small tables, and 5 high chairs to eat over the counter. El Caribe is on 105th Street and Lexington Avenue and is known for the number of locations it has in the upper west and east side of Manhattan. It is a bit darker and unlike La Isla, you cannot see what is going on unless you are inside. The third and final one is La Lechonera located on 103rd Street and Third Avenue. La Lechonera has a little bigger menu that includes pasta and seafood and benefit from being the first restaurant viewed for commuters coming from the 6-train line. It has a lot more tables, and a bathroom for the customers. However, they do not offer delivery like the first two restaurants.

The Hispanic restaurants in Spanish Harlem have escalated what was a friendly competition, into one that is becoming an issue in the neighborhood. Escalating pressure between trying to dominate the area, has led the restaurants into a war among themselves. There is a divide among those in the area on whether the competition is good or bad for the neighborhood. The conflict among these Spanish restaurants is significant because the area is predominantly Spanish. According to the Community District Needs report for the 2012 fiscal year, Spanish Harlem houses over 18,000 residents of Hispanic origin. The issue lies on whether the restaurants should come to an end on their war, or whether letting it run its course is what’s best for the neighborhood.

All three restaurants have a nice share of clientele. The idea however, that one is a hindrance to the other is a sentiment shared by both employees and customers alike. Catherine Johnson, a part time worker at La Isla believes that, “It’s a pick your poison with these restaurants. Obviously there are positives of having so many of us so clustered up together, because the area has become popular for Spanish food. So that attracts more customers constantly.”

On the flip side though she said, “there is a constant battle over who is better that affects everybody, if one of the restaurants brings down their lunch menu to $6.50 instead of  $7.00 then that forces the other to adjust in ways that may or may not be negative.”

Geraldine said that, “there are clearly strategies that come into play between these restaurants, La Caridad began bringing down the prices on the price of their chicken for example. This in turn made La Isla expand its hours of operations to 24 hours a day.” The consensus among all these restaurants is that there will always be a target audience, not because of what they sell but because of whom they sell it to. Spanish Harlem’s population is 48 percent Hispanic.

Another worker at one of the restaurants, who declined to give her name because of her employment, said that, “no matter, what big food chains move in here, the competition will never be MacDonald’s or Burger King. It will always be the restaurant across the street because this area is predominantly Hispanic, and Hispanics want Hispanic food, not a cheeseburger.”

Many Hispanics are aware of the competition, and there is fear that it will bring down the quality of the overall food and service. Geraldine who lives off cooking explained that, “If these restaurants are bringing down the price of these lunch menus, how are they compensating for the loss in revenue? By bringing down the quality of the food, which is really sad for all of us.”

La Lechonera is the first restaurant seen by commuters coming from the 6 train line

La Lechonera is the first restaurant seen by commuters coming from the 6 train line

Another surfacing issue is that of commercial food chains. They have slowly integrated themselves into the neighborhood. The MacDonald’s was remodeled a couple of weeks ago, and a Taco Bell was placed right across from La Isla. The conflict between the Spanish restaurants has a direct effect on this trend. When speaking to Hector Guzman, manager at the local pharmacy and resident of Spanish Harlem for over 10 years, he explained that, “the friendly competition kept these large food chains from interfering with the local businesses. Because they had no real incentive to come in and try to make money in an area that favorites Spanish food heavily.” The problem he said, “is that now that this competition has led to negative effects such as the decline of the quality of food that its not worth its price, people are turning towards these food chains because they are just as bad as the Spanish restaurants and the same or even cheaper price. I personally think this war needs to come to an end.”

La Isla has been around for over 10 years, and while it has its fair share of loyal customers, the constant war with La Caridad and the other Spanish restaurant Lechonero has prevented it from expanding. The location is about half the size of a classroom, and between 1 pm and 2 pm it is impossible to manage to sit and eat because of the high volume of customers.

Another interesting effect of their conflict is the effect it has on the small local businesses that aren’t food related.  “All of these small businesses benefit from the restaurants because people from all over Harlem and even the upper east side, come to this area looking for Spanish food. This brings footsteps to the area which in turn brings customers into our stores,” Hector said.

However, he continued, “If they continue to bicker and find ways to outdo each other, the traffic will diminish and businesses will do bad.  The overall economy of the area will suffer.”

As Geraldine sits in La Isla, the waitress who serves her food smiles at her and asks: “Where were you yesterday? I was expecting you.” She merely smiles and says, “I was undecided on where to eat, I wasn’t sure which roasted chicken I wanted today.”

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Muslim Leader in Brooklyn

Andrea Elliott does an excellent job profiling the conflicts the Imam Mr. Shata has to deal with on a daily basis, and frames it within multiple larger viewpoints to give the article greater depth. She focuses at first on the Imam’s background in Egypt before coming to the United States, and his economic struggles growing up. This presents the Imam as a humble and learned man, who worked hard to get to where he is now.

There isn’t much of a one on one conflict present in the article, just numerous small conflicts that are brought to the Imam for him to resolve. The article oftentimes presents the point of view of the attendees of the mosque, and the deep emphasis on the background of the islamic religion along with the Imam’s background makes the article more of a feature story than a news story.

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A Muslim Leader in Brooklyn

In her brilliantly vivid and descriptive article, Andrea Elliot is allowed access into a world that very few have seen before. It is the personal story of an Imam, Sheik Reda Shata, and his remarkable journey across tim, space, and culture, into a world he was ill-prepared to meet.

The story begins in present day Brooklyn where Mr. Shata works, then abruptly flashes back to Mr. Shata’s beginnings in Kafr al Battikh, perfectly capturing the juxtaposition between the radically different lifestyles. The reader is led through the dramatic voyage from a politically unstable Egypt with poor living conditions to the striking new modern culture of America.

Upon reaching his new mosque in Bay Ridge, Mr. Shata’s popularity soared. Where his religious sermons were censored in Egypt, Mr. Shata now had the freedom to captivate his audience with his authentic charm, confidence, and wisdom. In attaining the position as the new Imam, he also unknowingly took the position as judge, matchmaker, marriage counselor and police, addressing every concern of the local Muslim community. The story, after being supported by a intriguing base, revolved around the type of concerns that were being faced in the new modern culture, so intensely unlike his life back home in Egypt.

The conflict in the story, when finally revealed, revolves around Imam Shata’s internal ‘reconciling of two worlds’: the traditional and rigid culture and laws of his home, and the unprecedented and glaringly controversial issues that face community in the new American culture.  In writing the story, Ms. Elliot does not provide many sources, yet ironically, it is Mr. Shata himself that provides the balance of the conflict. On one hand he welcomes the ‘American’ issues with flexibility and creativity, while at the same time strives to remain firmly attached to the religious laws that guide his everyday life.

The article would clearly be classified as feature writing, as seen from the descriptive lede and colorful anecdotes. The author fully developed the story, setting the stage and then working back in time to demonstrate the long journey taken by Mr. Shata. I Also enjoyed the various ‘gold coins’ laid down in the beginning of the article, of the controversial Big Mac and the scare at the hospital.

The story had many moving parts, yet although the Muslim community has been increasingly exposed to the hard-edged modernity of America, the constant throughout is the unwavering support and leadership of Imam Shata, a man desperately trying to balance two very different worlds.

 

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An Imam Right in the Middle of Conflict

“A Muslim Leader in Brooklyn, Reconciling 2 Worlds,” written by Andrea Elliott, tells the microcosmic story of Sheik Reda Shata, an imam originally from Egypt, now leading a mosque in Brooklyn. In reporting Shata’s life story and struggles as an American imam, Elliott sheds light on the macrocosmic issue of what it is like for Muslims all throughout the United States, and how two worlds need “reconciling.”

Elliott’s piece reveals itself to be a feature article in the very first sentence. “The imam begins his trek before dawn, his long robe billowing like a ghost…” Elliott’s rich descriptions and creative passages tell Shata’s story in a unique way. For example, she describes Shata as an “Islamic judge and nursery school principal, a matchmaker and marriage counselor, a 24-hour hot line on all things Islamic.” Descriptive passages like the opening lede and this description of Shata show this is anything but a news story.

Despite Elliott’s strong writing, a reader might think her reporting is lacking, in that Shata’s voice is the main driving force behind this piece. And since this is a conflict story, she should have more people weighing in. However, this is hardly the case. Shata is the conflict in this story. He is one of the few who can see into two worlds—the Muslim religion in America and the stricter Muslim religion originating overseas. His job involves on blending these two worlds and making things work. If an important claim is made by Shata or Elliott, Elliott appropriately backs up the claim with quotes from experts. The voices of another imam, a Muslim activist, a retired police officer, a woman from an anecdotal story, a counselor, and a psychiatrist are all included in this piece, making it very well reported.

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Conflict of Reconciling 2 Worlds

The writer of this article begins the story with a little background information on Mr. Shata. The writer then explains how Mr. Shata made his way to leading a mosque in New York post 9/11. The conflict of this story is Mr. Shata having to find a way for the members of his mosque to keep the traditions of Islam in a modernized Western society.

The writer of this article provides quotes from sources from both sides of the conflict. Mr. Shata, an Egyptian law professor at the University of California, Mr. Moussa ( Mr. Shata’s predecessor) , a Muslim activist, a retired officer, a wife seeking a divorce and a Palestinian immigrant.

This is not a news story because it is not an article about an event that recently occurred. This is a feature story because it tells the story of an imam and his struggles to merge opposite worlds and find a common ground. The writer ends the story with “Time and again, Mr. Shata’s new country has called for creativity and patience, for a careful negotiation between tradition and modernity.” With this sentence, the writer reminds the reader of the purpose of the article. This is a conflict that Mr. Shata has faced and will continue to face as the members of his mosque modernize and are influenced by Western culture.

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