Monthly Archives: September 2014
Your Neighborhood Profile Pitches
Dear Feature Writers, Thought I would give you a little advice on the contents of your neighborhood profile pitches, due on Tuesday (both in hard copy and uploaded to our class blog [password protected].
1. A short bio of the person to be profiled, age, background, career etc.
2. A description of the person’s relation to the neighborhood.
3. What you hope to ask them/find out from them ? A couple of your main questions. Try to be specific here.
4. Who else you would interview to ask questions about them?
RB
Amanda Burden Response
The lede of this article introduces Amanda M. Burden immediately by a description of her sophisticated physical appearance in contrast to her “drab” physical surroundings. The lede reflects the format of the article. The article goes back and forth between Burden’s supporters and opposers.
Within this profile there’s a conflict story. The story addresses Burden’s important role in rezoning the majority of Manhattan in a short period of time, which was coming to an end. It covers Burden getting personal with the local communities and the “small projects” within them. It also covers Burden’s initiatives on skyscrapers and creating a gentrified New York through rezoning and building restrictions.
The writer’s interviewees are leaders of organizations and local communities. They are accredited sources because of their positions and connections to the actions of Amanda Burden.
The president of the Municipal Art Society of New York praised Burden for her efforts. The art society president called Burden’s work a “renaissance,” reflecting on the beautification of the city created. Following that quote, the writer adds a statement of criticism from the executive director of the Greenwich Village Society for Historic Preservation. The director’s concern was about the dramatic change in cost to live due to the city’s rezoning. These two sources weigh in on the conflict from different perspectives.
After establishing the issue and how some may feel, the writer goes on to describe Burden’s background and upbringing. Burden seemed to have always been a “somebody.” Even that background contrasted to her story of leaving that life to become an urban planner.
As the article continues to go into the experiences others have had with her, it follows the back and forth format. Community board chairmen applauded Burden for exploring their communities at a street level and trying to help the smaller projects. Some oppose Burden’s new development plans for neighborhoods. One of the writer’s sources, Julia Vitullo-Martin, felt that the new developments neglected the “greatness” of New York and its skyscrapers by adding height restrictions on buildings. The writer, again, is juxtaposing different viewpoints.
The writer also adds Burden’s comments throughout the article that defends Burden’s actions. An example of this is when she comments about how the High Line generated jobs and value for developers. The writer also gives Burden the last quotes of the story. The very last being about New York’s neighborhoods:
“I’m hopeful that what we have done is ensure in the next 15, 20 years, as the city grows, the identity of these neighborhoods will remain intact.”
This quote tries to appeal to those in favor of Burden’s efforts and those who want zones and building restrictions to stay the same.
Community Board
The neighborhood of Williamsburg is represented by Brooklyn Community Board 1.
Protected: Five Questions
Questions regarding Ridgewood, NY
1. How would I go about finding a potential demographic change in the area?
2. Would it be a good idea to compare the Neighborhood of Ridgewood to its neighbor of Glendale with which it is often confused with?
3. For the purposes of a conflict story, is it in my best interest to include the strong opinions of those on social media?
4. For the purpose of the overall project, would it be in my be at interest to conduct research on the bordering neighborhoods?
5. Would it be possible to obtain potential statistics of the movement of people of Bushwick into Ridgewood as well as Entrepreneurs purchasing buildings in Ridgewood who are from the Brooklyn area?
5 Questions on Williamsburg, Brooklyn
1. Where can I find the information to compare demographics from the 1990s and now?
2. Where can I find historical information on buildings or bridges?
3. Where can I find information on the boundaries of a neighborhood?
4. Is the census a good reference point or source to site in an article?
5. How do I find average rent in an area in the 1990s and now?
5 Questions on Bensonhurst
#1. How can I find the population demographic by nationality in Bensonhurst?
#2. Is it possible to find an archive of crimes in the area and their type? And is it possible to find details about the parties involved?
#3. Aside from the community board, where would I be able to find a summary of the community’s focus and concerns?
#4. Where do you find the community’s median income by year?
#5. Is it possible to find a compilation of businesses in the area and how long they’ve been there?
Assignments for Profiles Class, Tuesday, Sept. 16
Dear Feature Writers:
For Tuesday, September 16th, your writing assignment is to upload your Neighborhood Faces Query (250 words) on our blog site (password protected). Category is: Profiles.
Also for Tuesday, please read two profiles:
Amanda Burden (link is on your syllabus) Bring hard copy to class. Also read Robert Shelton (Sugar Factory) given out on 9/11. Bring to class.
Select one of these two profiles and upload a critique of one of them, analyzing writing style, reporting sources, etc. Category: Profiles
RB
5 Questions on Washington Heights
1.Where do I get access to specific statistics for my neighborhood?
2. I want to find diverse community stories, (to get a sense of the everyday concerns affecting local people) that is currently taking place or has taken place recently. How and where do I findas many of those?
3. How has the crime rate trend changed over the last few years?
4. Where can I direct my research to gain more on the gentrification there?
5. How are the small businesses doing and what are some of their latest trends?