This week I went out for a walk with an eye for architecture. This apartment complex shown in this picture is a house down from mine. It’s interesting to see how much my neighborhood differs from others such as suburbs and rural areas. Those streets have houses on houses and they all look pretty similar. It’s crazy because the block I used to live on before had a factory, warehouse, motorcycle shop with a garage, houses, and apartments just in the span of a couple meters. Blocks now are so diversified and people who buy a plot of land just create whatever they want on it without any second thought of how it would look in the grand scheme of the entire block. This apartment in particular is very new compared to everything else around it. The gate is automated and it makes the other buildings around it look like crap. The windows are tinted. I can see the backyard from my backyard and the people who live there have a nice lit up patio with cool seating and stuff. I can see them having fun and enjoying themselves drinking beer with the rest of the people who live in that building. I aspire to get a nice big house somewhere in the Australia near the ocean and just chill out there for the rest of my life and surf. Would be great.
Month: February 2018
Open Hood Essay Final
English Open Hood Essay
Zamil Ahmed
ENG 2150 – Hoodology
Professor Singleton
Humans are arguably the most resilient species around. As living beings, humans have constantly adapted to meet the needs of our constantly changing world. We have accomplished a lot and have not shown any definitive signs of slowing down in terms of moving forward. However, despite the prosperity and ambition of our species there are upcoming problems we must tackle. One of the major issues we must face is climate change. The definition of climate change, according to Google is “: a change in global or regional climate patterns, a change apparent from the mid to late 20th century onwards and attributed largely to the increased levels of atmospheric carbon dioxide produced using fossil fuels.” Climate change is steadily increasing in pace, yet world leaders continue to ignore it as a serious issue. Studies proving the effects of climate change to be real are extensive. Governments would rather disperse their funds towards other aspects of their country rather than focus on an issue that affects the whole world and threatens the entirety of humanity. There are a series of key events occurring around the world that indicate to us that the time for action is now. The more we wait, the more our world dissipates. Change for some may look like a farfetched idea, but as mentioned before, humankind is a very resilient species that can address any problem if we combine our efforts into one. When faced with great adversity, we unite. We have done it many times, before. Global warming is undoubtedly a serious issue taxing the world we call home and we must act now, despite the naysayers whom believe it to be a hoax or myth.
Climate change affects many aspects of our infrastructure that we are not aware of. The stability of our environment isn’t the only facet affected. Our economy takes a lot of hits as well from a climate that is not regulated. Examples of this include forced relocations, asset destruction, droughts, extinctions, as well as many more factors that all add to global economic costs. The Natural Resources Defense Council estimates that the U.S. Climate Disruption Budget for natural occurrences like droughts, storms and growing climate disruptions, was amounted to nearly $100 billion. That is such a large sum of money that it is humanly impossible to visualize. And that’s only the beginning. By 2030, climate change costs are projected to cost the global economy $700 billion annually, according to the Climate Vulnerability Monitor. 50 billion tons of methane released from melting Arctic ice will advance global warming by 15-35 years and in turn cost the global economy $60 trillion. Putting a halt to all the damage will come at a very expensive cost. Paving a new path towards sustainable energy can cost $53 trillion (International Energy Agency’s World Energy Investment Outlook). These numbers are tremendous and will only increase if these issues are ignored. Political figures now have an initiative for acting against climate change. Investing now will save funds further down the line. The best way to view things is in the long term, so we can establish a better future for the generations to come.
Aside from the loss of trillions of dollars from the world economy, climate change will also deplete a lot of natural resources we need to survive. The lack of resources is something that can be critical to the existence of human life. Since humans have walked this earth we have been using resources non-stop without thinking twice about the consequences. This has brought us very far throughout our history and we are advancing at the fastest pace ever seen. Technological, medical, and other advancements have made life as we know it very convenient. Yet with climate change on the horizon, a very large portion of the human population will suffer from scarcity of crucial resources needed to survive. One of these resources is water. Water as we know is required for many daily functions such as bathing, drinking, and cooking. Its importance is ranked as one of the most important factors for sustaining life. In 2013, about 1.3 billion people lived in water scarce regions, according to one study. 8% of the population will enter a state of “new or aggravated water scarcity,” solely due to climate change with a temperature increase of 3.6 degrees F by 2100. Depleted water resources due to heat and drought will account for more than $10 billion in direct losses to agriculture alone. The lack of water will place the world on a cycle of disarray and cause a great threat towards human life.
Like water, shelter is something all living creatures need to live their lives. The comfort of our homes is one of the greatest feelings there is. Many of us never conceive the thought of losing something so important in our lives. In our world today, homelessness is common even in major cities. In countries that are less developed, the amount of people who lack a home is drastically greater. Those people who are fortunate to have a home since birth often take for granted how satisfying it is to arrive back to the warmth of your home from a long day. In 2008, 36 million people were displaced by natural disasters. At least 20 million of those people were driven from their homes by disasters related to climate change like drought and rising sea level. Even more alarming, a 2014 study published in Environmental Research Letters predicted that sea level rise created by a temperature increase of 3 degrees C would force more than 600 million people to find new homes. The Internal Organization for Migration estimates that 200 million people by 2050 could be forced to leave due to environmental changes. Additionally, large wealth gaps in many modern countries, including America means that those who have less money will be affected the most. That means that climate change will affect the average middle-class citizen significantly and those with less money to their name even more so. The only people who might avoid the consequences of climate change, including loss of property, are those with significant wealth; typically, the top percentage of the upper class. We see numbers so often that we get desensitized towards large numbers.
Numbers are something we see everywhere. Our lives revolve around numbers and we are constantly seeing new ones every day. The numbers from the studies given previously are so substantial that the human brain can’t grasp the thought of so much of a certain thing sufficiently enough. We can’t wrap our heads around or envision millions, billions, or trillions of something. We can only read the number and interpret it to the best of our abilities. The truth is we will never be able to visualize such large quantities. However, we can relate to one person. We ourselves know the importance of life through our own. We see how complex it is, how many different qualities of life there are to experience and feel. All these millions of lives are just like ours and just as important. The problems arising from climate change affect people the most. That is why we should place a great deal of emphasis on acting immediately to save as many lives as possible because we can empathize with these people as human beings.
Works Cited
“22 Devastating Effects of Climate Change.” Business Insider. Accessed May 12, 2017.
<http://www.businessinsider.com/effects-of-climate-change-2014-6>
Peer Review for Michael C. and Jack
Michael C.
I think Michael is pursuing a great idea in terms of his essay. There are a number of things he can work on. I feel like he can develop his essay a lot further by organizing it and providing structure to his paragraphs. If he starts his paragraphs with a topic sentence the readers will know what each paragraph is predominantly about. This will help the structure because there will be no repetition and each paragraph will explore an individual idea. Since Michael is telling a story about a period of time in his life, he would benefit a lot from ordering everything chronologically. In terms of sentence structure, there are sentences that he can cut out and add new ones and elaborate on. I also believe he can combine a couple of his paragraphs because they explore similar topics. Michael can add more detail to his work such as how the hard work made him feel. He can delve deeper into the relationship he had with his friend. He can talk about where he sees his new job taking him. He can talk about what his family thinks of his new job. In terms of his introduction I would have liked to see him give a bit more context on what was going on in his life at the time. How the job affected everything around him. What the change in jobs meant for his schedule and affected other aspects of his life. Michael does a good job of telling us thinks such as how he felt he was benefiting from the new job. I really liked that because it shows that he is growing as a person and taking his job seriously. I feel like he could have set the tone and setting in his introductory paragraph stronger if he had just added a bit more bulk to it.
Jack
Now this is what I call an essay. The topic you chose instantly grasped my interest. I think it’s something a lot of people don’t talk enough about. Wow!!! The hook for your intro is by far the best part. I just wanted to keep reading to see what would happen so I applaud you on that. It would make sense to combine your first and second paragraph but I can see why you would split the two. You provided a great context and setting after surprising the reader with your first initial statements. There are a couple sentences that are grammatically incorrect that you can easily fix by reading over your paper. Your sentence structure can also improve. I would suggest you rewrite your sentences and phrase a couple of them differently so they flow better. Honestly I can’t get over the fact that you picked such a great topic to talk about especially since our social climate is what it is right now. I think your helping to give adults who don’t have any idea of what teen life is like an idea of how social media plays a role in our lives. I like how your showing people a modern love story in some sense. Since your essay is very loose and outgoing I wouldn’t say you have to structure it anymore but you can combine a couple of the paragraphs. At some instances, the chronological order of events is a bit confusing. I don’t think you should talk about the same topic in a different paragraph because the reason a paragraph is a separate entity is because it talks about something different. Therefore if you are going to talk about something similar in a different paragraph I suggest you bring it all into one paragraph to really centralize the ideas. Overall a really interesting topic and essay. Great use of dialogue throughout and I really like how you let the readers know what your thinking. If you add a bit more of what’s going on in your mind and how it affected your social life and everything around you I think it will give the readers and added sense of understanding.
Weekly Walk 3
This week I decided to go on a walk on the day it was snowed. Initially I went to my gym, Blink Fitness. But that closes at 8 so me and a couple of my buddies decided to head over to Retro Fitness. It’s quite a walk from my gym, a good 10 or more blocks. During that walk all we did was crack jokes and it was a great time. Until our feet started to freeze up and then we just decided to run to the gym. At Retro Fitness you can practically walk in you just sign a guest sheet. A great gym and I’ll probably switch to it next year. On my way back I came across this very cool looking plant shop. The image felt very worth taking because on the outside you can see the frozen dead snow and on the inside are all the plants full of life. I thought it was a cool little contrast.
Weekly Walk 2
This week didn’t lack in beautiful weather and I found myself outside a lot. I walked down Broadway in Astoria. Since moving to this neighborhood I never really walked down Broadway. It’s changed a lot since I was a little kid. When I was little I didn’t notice all of the bars. A lot of wine and liquor stores were around also. All this suggested to me that people come here to drink and eat because the number of restaurants there was insane. There was just one after the other and all of them were unique in their own respective way. This one in particular really stood out because of it’s design and the cool murals they implemented into their storefront. I liked how they incorporated art into their restaurant and I feel like more restaurants should try that approach. Art and food are two things I think can come together to make a very memorable moment for people. Food in my view is a form of art. It is a form of expression of taste and the presentation of food carries on into how it makes you feel overall.
“Open Hood” Essay Draft
English Open Hood Essay Draft
Zamil Ahmed
ENG 2150 – Hoodology
Professor Singleton
Humankind is a resilient species. Looking at our history there isn’t much that we haven’t accomplished. We’ve completely dominated the entire earth for the time span we’ve inhabited. Despite our prosperity as a species there are upcoming problems that we must face. One of these problems is climate change or global warming. This is an issue that is steadily increasing in pace however world leaders continue to ignore it as a serious issue. Studies to prove the effects of climate change are extensive. Governments would rather disperse their funds towards other aspects of their country rather than focus on an issue that affects the whole world and threatens the entirety of humanity. There are a series of key events occurring around the world that indicate to us that the time for action is now. The more we wait, the more our world dissipates. It will take time for everyone to take on the same campaign and mindset but is definitely possible. The world can unite when faced with a great adversity. Summing it up, global warming is a serious issue that is currently taxing the world we inhabit and we must take action now despite the naysayers who believe it to be a hoax or myth.
The definition of climate change according to Google is “: a change in global or regional climate patterns, in particular a change apparent from the mid to late 20th century onwards and attributed largely to the increased levels of atmospheric carbon dioxide produced by the use of fossil fuels.” Climate change affects many aspects of our infrastructure that we are not aware of. The stability of our environment isn’t the only facet effected. Our economy takes a lot of hits as well from climate that is not regulated. Asset destruction, forced relocations, droughts, extinctions, and many more factors all add to global economic costs. Natural Resources Defense Council estimates that the U.S. Climate Disruption Budget, stuff related to drought, storm, and growing climate disruptions, was nearly $100 billion. And that’s just the start. By 2030, climate change costs are projected to cost the global economy $700 billion annually, according to the Climate Vulnerability Monitor. 50 billion tons of methane released from melting Arctic ice will advance global warming by 15-35 years and in turn cost the global economy$60 trillion. Putting a halt to all the damage will come at a very expensive cost. Paving a new path towards sustainable energy can cost $53 trillion. (International Energy Agency’s World Energy Investment Outlook). These numbers are tremendous and will only increase if these issues are ignored. Political figures now have an initiative for wanting to tackle climate change. The investment will save funds further down the line. It is best to view things in the long run so we can establish a better future for the generations to come.
The lack of resources is something that can be critical to the existence of human life. Ever since humans have walked this earth we have been using resources nonstop without thinking twice about the consequences. This has brought us very far throughout our history and we at advancing at the fastest pace ever seen with no signs of slowing down. Technological, medical, and other advancements have made life as we know it very convenient. Yet with climate change on the horizon, a very large portion of the human population will suffer from scarcity of crucial resources needed to survive. One of these is water. Water is a essential element for any living beings. It’s importance is arguably ranked as one of the most important factors for sustaining life. In 2013, about 1.3 billion people lived in water scarce regions, according to one study. 8% of the population will enter a state of “new or aggravated water scarcity,” solely due to climate change with a temperature increase of 3.6 degrees F by 2100. Depleted water resources due to heat and drought will account for more than $10 billion in direct losses to agriculture alone. These numbers are too big to ignore. The lack of water will place the world in a cycle of disarray and cause a great threat towards human life. Without water life as we know it will spiral towards chaos.
Similar to water, shelter is something all living creatures need in order to live their life. The comfort of our homes is one of the greatest feelings and many of us have never conceived ever losing something so convenient. In our world today, homelessness is common even in major cities. In countries that are less developed, the amount of people who lack a home is drastically greater. Those people who are fortunate often take for granted how satisfying it is to arrive back to the warmth of your home from a long day. In 2008, 36 million people were displaced by natural disasters. At least 20 million of those people were driven from their homes by disasters related to climate change like drought and rising sea level. Even more alarming, a 2014 study published in Environmental Research Letters predicted that sea level rise created by a temperature increase of 3 degrees C would force more than 600 million people to find new homes. The Internal Organization for Migration estimates that 200 million people by 2050 could be forced to leave due to environmental changes. We see numbers so often that we get desensitized towards large numbers. These numbers are so substantial that the human brain can’t possibly grasp the thought of so many people sufficiently. We can’t seem to wrap our heads around it or envision something of such a large scale. We can only read the number and interpret it to the best of our abilities. The truth is we will never be able to. However we can definitely relate to one person. We ourselves know the importance of life through our own. We see how complex it is, how many different qualities of life there are to experience and feel. All these millions of lives are just like ours and just as important. That is why we should place a great deal of emphasis on taking action immediately to save as many lives as possible because we can empathize with these people as human beings.
*Bonus* Close Reading “ O Captain! My Captain!” (Abraham Lincoln)
Close Reading 1: “Crossing Brooklyn Ferry” by Walt Whitman + Questions
Weekly Walk 1
On Monday while I was arriving back home from school around 1 pm I noticed something strange in the middle of the street. I’d most likely describe it as an anomaly because something like this made no sense whatsoever. In the middle of the street was a single chicken feet. I almost stepped on it, then leaned in to get a better look, and started walking past it until I thought why don’t I take a picture to share with the rest of the world. For those of you that may be wondering I don’t live in a village or a landfill or something. My neighborhood is pretty decent and since the area is being gentrified day by day the place is getting cleaner and cleaner. For those of you may be wondering I’m referring to Steinway Street in Astoria, Queens. Anyways this little incident that took place really bothered me because there was no trace of the rest of the chicken anywhere nearby to be found. Why would there be a chicken foot on the street. That’s so random! It made no sense whatsoever, it was literally a dirty uncooked chicken foot. A single foot. Not even a pair of feet. I’m sorry if I grossed some of you out, I know the picture is really disgusting but the reality is that I came across this mystery on my walk. It made me think about how often insignificant things like this happen everyday. I also began to ponder if this exact scenario every happened to someone else. What must this chicken have gone through to lead to this moment? Where are the rest of his or her remnants? Are they spread across the whole city? What really happened here? This is almost like a mini crime scene. If this were a human hand instead of a chicken’s foot how much more shocking would this interaction have been? How much more importance would’ve been placed on a human hand? How would I have reacted to that? Would I call the cops to make a police report? Would I take a picture or be scared off and just continue on with my day like nothing happened? These are the stream of thoughts that went through my over processed brain. I hope everyone read through this whole paragraph because I think it’s pretty interesting for the first walk of the semester. Don’t you think so? Lets see how long you can stare at that picture before barfing. Comment how long you lasted.