- Plastic will outweigh fish by 2050 if it keeps increasing at such a fast rate in the ocean. “experts estimate that up to 10% of plastic debris produced will enter the sea and that plastics will outweigh fish in the ocean.”
- Plastic is having a very negative impact on marine life. “In addition to entanglement, physical impacts include blockages in the digestive tract when plastic is consumed by marine animals, which can lead to false satiation.”
- Plastic is slowly creeping into our food chain even though it contains toxic chemicals like pathogens or parasites. “For example, some microplastics have been shown to contain additives that are known reproductive toxins, carcinogens, and mutagens”
- countries are getting together to try to reduce the marine plastic numbers. “Between the years 2000 and 2019, at least 28 international policies were established to reduce plastic pollution”
- There have been multiple bans made in many different countries like, single use bag bans and cosmetic microbeads. “At the national level, governments worldwide are increasingly adopting policies to target single-use plastic bags and other macroplastics, primarily through the adoption of regulatory bans”
- Although all the efforts against plastic is being made there are still more difficulties being faced, the countries don’t come to terms with each other. “These governance challenges are further complicated by the durability and dispersal of plastics, the scientific uncertainty in the amount of pollution making its way into the oceans, and the difficulty in determining who is responsible for that pollution”
- Some of the strategies are not strong enough to go against the plastic crisis. “Current international rules, state policies, nonstate rules, and consumer behaviors are not strong or comprehensive enough to protect the environment at a global level.”
- There are many ways that plastic could end up in the ocean. “For example, plastic can be lost to the surrounding environment and transported to the oceans via waterways, winds, and tides due to littering and improper waste management in open or uncontrolled landfills.”
- Students and staff were asked to offer solutions for plastic pollution. “Because most information regarding plastic pollution prevention and collection technologies is located in internet resources, we focused on this literature, including news media, press releases, and other non-peer reviewed literature.”
- They conducted a couple experiments that focused on research on technology that already exists to prevent the leakage of plastic pollution into waterways or collect existing plastic pollution in the oceans. “We excluded technologies that did not fall into these two categories – such as plastic-to-fuel, bioremediation, or new materials to replace plastic – due to our focus on prevention and collection technology.”
- They were very organized when conducting the experiments. “When inventions were not branded, but were labeled with descriptive names, we grouped together inventions that appeared identical.”
- They try their best to identify when the technology is from and when it was made, that way they know exactly where all of this micro and macro plastic is being collected from.
- Not only did they find this information on Google, they also went to a professional and asked for their feedback and knowledge. “In addition to these searches, we consulted with experts to add additional technologies to the database that we did not identify through our review of internet sources, scholarly literature, or patents.”
- They came to a conclusion that most of the technology they researched focused on collecting macro plastics.
- Although these technologies are actually trying to help the oceans, they are not enough. Companies need to get together and create a bigger project. “The Inventory allows us to reflect on challenges in scale, the plastic lifecycle stage targeted, the ubiquity of microplastics, costs associated with technology implementation, and deployment location for these technologies.”
- “PumpGuard” uses mesh nets to remove debris from wastewater and stormwater systems and removes 97% of debris present”
- “The Ocean Cleanup Project has been refining its design since 2012 and has recently developed “System 002,” which improves upon the previous design.”
- “The only invention that specifically targets the prevention of fishing gear pollution is the “Stow It Don’t Throw It” – an invention aimed at changing fishers’ behavior at a small scale by collecting fishing lines used by recreational fishers before they enter the marine environment as waste.”
- There are multiple small technologies that help capture plastics. ““Cora Ball” is a ball that is placed in a laundry machine and captures microfibers that are generated when washing synthetic clothing items. The “Lint LUV-R” is a filter that is installed outside of the washing machine that captures synthetic microfibers in wastewater discharge.”
- 4.4 Section: Funding needs to be required to create successful technologies. “Although examining the financial feasibility and costs was beyond the scope of this study, such a massive global problem cannot adequately be addressed without viable, consistent sources of funding.” “Options for potential funding sources to further the implementation and deployment of these technologies may include fees and taxes on plastic products or research and development investments by industry.” “Of the top 20 countries with the greatest amounts of mismanaged waste, 12 countries are classified as low or lower-middle income and may be less likely to have the resources for public investments to deploy these technologies on a large scale.”
- 4.5 Section: The use of technologies should be even more imporatant in areas that dispense the most plastic into the oceans. “Plastic pollution distribution is not uniform. Different countries have disproportionate inputs into the ocean and once plastic enters the ocean, it is transported by waves and currents to various depths and ocean ecosystems.” “The widespread dispersal of marine plastic pollution, especially microplastics, creates challenges for collection technologies, which often target the surface of the ocean.”
- 4.6 Section: “New microplastic prevention technologies may also work in concert with policy efforts to establish inventories detailing microplastic release into the environment and efforts to decrease the use of harmful chemicals in microplastics, especially microfibers from synthetic clothing items.” “In combination with efforts to reduce the source of plastic waste and subsequent microplastic generation, policymakers could create incentives for expanding and implementing these technologies in areas that are hotspots of marine plastic pollution.” “Technological developments cannot be separated from policy, which likewise cannot be separated from individual and industry efforts.”
Student Responses
Aria Malovany Discussion Question 11/29
“That thinking made me say no — from now onwards, I’ll be writing in my mother tongue …” Ngugi argues that people should be able to write in their native language regardless of the relationships of power between languages. I agree with this as one shouldn’t have to conform to societal preferences when writing. One should be able to write freely about whatever they want, however they want, in whichever language they prefer. It is better to preserve a culture’s history by encouraging writers to work in their home languages. Rushdie states that Indian children are able to use English easily because of “the English language’s enormous flexibility and size.” But in Indian children using English to their advantage, it lessens the value that speaking in their home language has. The mass use of the English language emphasizes its significance in the world, but I don’t think any cultures should have to rely on English or feel that they must speak English when they can stick with their home language. The only other language I can write in is Hebrew and I do not ever feel discouraged to write in it. Writing in Hebrew actually gives me a sense of confidence because since I’m not required to write in it anymore, it’s a good feeing to know I still have those skills outside of my prior Jewish schooling.
Aria Malovany Peer-Reviewed Outline
Anschutz, Doeschka. .., and Rutger C. M.E. Engels. “The Effects of Playing with Thin Dolls on Body Image and Food Intake in Young Girls.” Sex Roles, vol. 63, no. 9-10, Springer US, 2010, pp. 621–30, https://doi.org/10.1007/s11199-010-9871-6.
- Abstract
Paragraph 1- This is a study on 6-10 year old dutch girls to test if their playing with thin dolls has an affect on their body image and food intake. After 10 minutes of them either playing with a thin doll, an average sized doll, or a lego, they did a taste test and took a questionnaire about their body image.
- Introducion
Paragraph 2- little is known about the effects thin dolls have on young girls which is why this study is being done. Researchers already know that body image issues have arised from young girls watching television.
Paragraph 3- Many studies done in Western societies show issues with body image in young girls. Media teaches the young that bigger people don’t have friends and ugly people are considered bad whereas thin and nice looking people are considered good.
Paragraph 4- Thin dolls like Barbie set an unrealistic standard for young girls and convince them that Barbie’s body is normal and what their bodies should look like.
Paragraph 5- A study was done in girls ages 5-8 in the UK on the effect Barbie has one their body image. Studies show that girls under 7.5 use Barbie as a norm as their body image is still developing. There were no effects found in girls above the age of 7.5 playing with Barbies on their body image.
Paragraph 6- This study was made to replicate and extend the one done in the UK. In the Uk study, pictures of the dolls were used. In the study on dutch girls, they were to use actual dolls. This study also involved a food intake part to test if girls’ body dissatisfaction has an effect on their eating.
Paragraph 7- Girls either played with a thin doll, an average sized doll, or a lego for 10 minutes and then were given a taste test as a measure of actual food intake.
Hypothesis 1- girls who play with thin dolls will have lower body esteem compared to those who played with the average size doll or the lego. Younger girls would report a lower body esteem than older girls. Average size doll and lego won’t negatively impact body esteem.
Hypothesis 2- girls who play with the thin dolls will report an actual-ideal body size discrepancy compared to tier girls who played with the average sized doll or the lego. Younger girls would report a larger body actual-ideal body size discrepancy than older girls.
Hypothesis 3- Girls who play with the thin dolls would eat less than the girls that play with the average sized dolls or the lego. The younger girls would eat less than the older girls after playing with the thin dolls.
- Method
Paragraph 8- 117 girls were involved in this study. The mean age of the sample was 8.04
Paragraph 9- The girls either played with a Barbie doll which represented a UD size 2, an Emme doll which represented a US size 16, and another doll that is comparable to the height of the Emme doll and very slim like Barbie.
Paragraph 10- The girls were given 9 female body silhouette drawings ranging from very thing to very large to compare the dolls bodies to the silhouettes. They were also given a Visual Analogue Scale to see the extent of thinness the girls considered the dolls.
Paragraph 11- a response format was used with pictures of smiley’s where the girls had three response options; no, in between, and yes. They were scored with a 0, 1 or 2, respectively. Facial pictures were used to illustrate the response options.
Paragraph 11- the girls were asked to indicate which of the 9 drawings of female bodies looked the most similar to their current bodies and their ideal body shape.
Paragraph 12- during the taste test, the girls could freely eat from three bowls of chocolate covered peanuts, Their food intake was measured with a professional scale.
Paragraph 13- BMI was calculated based on height and weight
Paragraph 14- Girls were asked how hungry they were before beginning the test.
Paragraph 15- Girls were presented with a Visual Analogue Scale to measure if they liked the test food.
Paragraph 16- The girls were asked whether or not they owned a Barbie at home
Paragraph 17- The girls were asked how often they play with Barbie’s.
Paragraph 18- The girls were asked if they enjoyed being a part of the experiment.
- Procedure
Paragraph 19- Parents were fully informed about why this study was being done and asked whether their child could participate in the study or not.
Paragraph 20- girls playing with Barbies were asked to dress Barbie for a party so that they would be exposed to her naked body. After 10 minutes, the girls were given a questionnaire concerning body esteem Afterwards, the girls were presented with three bowls of chocolate covered peanuts with a different color in each bowl. They were asked to evaluate the chocolate covered peanuts to see which color tasted the best.
- Preliminary analysis
Paragraph 21- No real differences were found between the Barbie doll and the tyler doll so those conditions were combined. No effects were found in the playing of Barbies/Tyler dolls on body esteem
Paragraph 22- Girls were split by if they were over 7.5 or under.
- Results
Paragraph 23- No differences were found between Barbie and the Tyler doll on the figure rating scale and the VAS slimness, so the conditions were combined into a single thin doll condition for analysis.
Paragraph 24- The body esteem of the girls did not differ between the three conditions. No main effect was found in age group either. Therefore, hypothesis 1 was not supported.
Paragraph 25- Playing with thin dolls vs average size dolls did not alter the actual-ideal body size discrepancy. There was no effect found in age group either. Therefore, hypothesis 2 was not supported.
Paragraph 26- Girls ate less after exposure to thin dolls than after exposure to average sized doll. There was no effect in age group. Hypothesis 3 was somewhat supported in that girls ate less after playing with thin dolls, but there was no effect in age difference.
Paragraph 27- No interaction effects were found in body esteem and owning a Barbie. No interaction effects were found in body esteem and time spent playing with Barbie. No interaction effects were found in body esteem and how much the girls like being a part of the experiment.
- Discussion
Paragraph 28- the most important thing found was that girls who played with thin dolls ate less in their food-test.
Paragraph 29- There was no effect found in peking with Barbie on young girls body esteem and dissatisfaction. Since the girls had physical control of the dolls rather than looking at the image, it led to no direct causation on their body esteem because they were in control.
Paragraph 30- Perhaps the girls were inspired by Barbie to achieve her thinness by not eating in the taste-test. Maybe the girls who played with the Emme doll felt more free to eat as its size provides a norm regarding food intake.
Paragraph 31- The Emme doll may have had a relief effect and freed the girls from any dietary restraints.
Paragraph 32- A suggestion for another study might be to use girls who have never been exposed to these thin dolls before and do the same tests on them also involving food intake.
Paragraph 33- Future studies could also use a different measure of body esteem to see how consistent the present findings with regard to body esteem are.
Paragraph 34- This study was meant to look at the effects of thin dolls on body esteem but at the end of the day, the only information derived is that the girls who played with the thinner dolls ate less.
Key phrases: Barbie doll, Emme doll, thin dolls, body esteem, bod image, food intake
Atai Isaev, Reading Responses, Week 15
1 There are a lot of bilinguals out there. “It is generally believed that more than half of the world’s population is bilingual”
2 The context for examining how bilingualism affects cognitive ability is functional
neuroplasticity, the study of how experience modifies brain structure and brain function
3 People used to think bilingualism has negative effect on children
4 Bilinguals have smaller vocabulary
5 Bilinguals have better executive control “ Executive control is the set of
cognitive skills based on limited cognitive resources for such functions as inhibition,
switching attention, and working memory”
6 *This paper will examine why 5 is true”
7 “ fluent bilinguals show some measure of activation of both languages and some interaction between them at all times, even in contexts that are entirely driven by only one of the languages“
8 There were studies done about how humans see the world through language
9 It takes brainpower to switch and pick between languages
10 There are studies done about what our brain does when recognizing language
11 Cognitive and linguistic outcomes are related
12 Studies that prove that bilinguals are better at multitasking
13 12 doesn’t only apply to children, but to adults as well
14 Bilinguals have better attention control
15 Benefits of bilingualism may vary depending on age
16 “It appears that bilingual advantages for young adults tend to emerge on tasks or conditions that are difficult”
17 “language switching was accompanied by activation in the dorsolateral prefrontal cortex (DLPFC), an area known to be part of the general executive control system”
18 Some technical stuff about brain areas
19 In other words, using these cognitive control networks for bilingual language
processing may reconfigure them for other purposes, providing part of the explanation for
the behavioral differences between monolinguals and bilinguals found in nonverbal conflict
tasks. Specifically, the evidence suggests that cognitive control networks may be more
broadly based in bilinguals as a result of their dual function.”
20 Studies that support 19
21 “bilingualism alters functional neural network at the response-selection level (congruent and incongruent trials), but not at the motor execution level (response inhibition no-go trials), a pattern consistent with previous results for both adults and children”
22 “Although bilingualism is a language experience, managing attention to two languages
imposes demands on the cognitive system that require brain regions not typically used for
language processing.”
23 “This evidence suggests that bilingualism is
associated with better maintenance of white matter structures in the course of normal aging”
24 Bilingualism causes better attention control
25 “bilingual advantage in the deployment of attention, enabling them to resist
‘capture’ by irrelevant information; such differences in attentional control may be the
consequence of superior conflict monitoring”
26 “In a sense, the bilingual must constantly
maintain the set of ‘respond in one language, suppress the other language’ whenever the
possibility of two languages exists”
27 “learning to keep two languages separate
leads to an improvement in selecting goal-relevant information from goal-irrelevant
information”
28 “Instead,
the ongoing experience of monitoring two languages, in conjunction with the need to
monitor context, speaker, and other environmental cues while inhibiting attention to the
currently unused but active language modifies how the mind and brain engage in ordinary
conversation for bilinguals”
29 BIlingualism might help prevent dementia
30 There was a study that found that bilinguals on average experience dementia later in life. “bilinguals experienced onset symptoms and were diagnosed approximately 3 – 4 years later than the monolinguals”
31 29 and 30 MIGHT be not 100% proven yet
Wedad Mourtada, Week 15 Reading Response
outline Burnette, C. Blair, et al. “‘I Don’t Need People to Tell Me I’m Pretty on Social Media:’ A Qualitative Study of Social Media and Body Image in Early Adolescent Girls.”
- Introduction
- Paragraph 1: Adults aren’t the only ones who experience body image issues. “Body dissatisfaction” (114) is associated with eating and mental disorders.
- Paragraph 2: Mass media is the reason why society has set the beauty standard to be a thin body; people make it seem like it’s the ideal body type.
- Paragraph 3: Social media evolves quicker than mass media which is why it’s effects on body dissatisfaction are unclear. Teenage girls are more drawn to photo-sharing apps such as snapchat and Instagram.
- Paragraph 4: Sixty seven studies found a connection between photo sharing apps and body and eating disorders. Young girls are exposed to “thinspiration” and “fitspiration” posts which makes them believe that the ideal body type is thin (115).
- Paragraph 5: Young girls are more vulnerable to photo-sharing apps and they are more likely to compare themselves to others.
- Paragraph 6: The research was done at an all girls school and studies found that this makes the results a bit “inconsistent” because the evidence also relies on the environment these girls are in (115).
- Paragraph 7: They created a “mixed method”research because there’s a lack of research on the connection between young girls and social media and the connection between social media and comparison amongst teenage girls.
- Paragraph 8: The data collection was based on focus groups because they figured it’d make the students more comfortable as they’d have similar experiences. “Ultimately, we sought to gather preliminary data that can inform targeted prevention and intervention efforts, such as media literacy, that address the unique contributions of social media” (116).
2. Method
- This section explains exactly how they conducted the research. It consists of six sections; participants, research team, social media use, procedure, quantitative analysis and qualitative analysis.
- Participants: They interviewed 7th and 8th grade girls and their parents and the school encouraged this.
- Research team: Authors, four doctoral students, two undergraduate students.
- Social media use :Students were asked what social media apps they use and how much time they spend on each app.
- Procedure:Parents had the opportunity to opt out their children from the research but no one opted out and this research was approved by the Office of Human Subjects Protection at Virginia Commonwealth University.
- Quantitative analysis: Conducted using SPSS 23.0, They calculated the statistics, means, standard deviations, and frequencies. They didn’t have a hypothesis because it was a small sample.
- Qualitative analysis: They conducted an audit trail and took notes throughout the procedure. They also used a thematic analysis in the data.
3. Results
This section consists of Qualitative results, quantitative results, selfies, parental monitoring, social media norms, social media applications subtheme, social media etiquette subtheme, Egotistical/validation subthemen, selfies and appearance concerns subtheme, social comparison, peers, celebrities subthemes, and social media strategy. Students’ social media consumption was based on parents’ restrictions. “In five out of the six groups, participants voiced that their parents were less concerned with their behavior online than they were about the behaviors of others”(119).
4. Discussion/ Conclusion
Photo based apps and activities were heavily linked to body dissatisfaction.
- Limitations: The researchers faced some limitations due to the people they were interviewing and some bias.
- Conclusion: Mass media is linked to body dissatisfaction, but it’s crucial to examine the effects of social media on young girls to understand its harmful effects. Thus research shows that parents, the school,and environment impact the effects of social media on young children.
Phrases/ Quotations I’ll be using in my essay
- “Sometimes if I have acne, I like to cover my acne up with it and it makes me feel more secure about myself even though I Know here no one will judge me, but I know out there in the world other people are so judgy” (121).
- “A total of 38 girls, 19 from each grade, participated in the focus groups, and 36 students completed surveys, 19 in the 7thgrade and 17 in the 8th grade. The age of the sample ranged from 12 to 14 years with a mean age of 13.14” (116).
- “Across the transcripts, there were 20 mentions of dissatisfaction with an aspect of one’s appearance. The participants most often mentioned appearance concerns within the context of social comparisons and, in particular, social media”(121).
- “Interestingly, this sample endorsed all of these behaviors to some degree. However, they also demonstrated attitudes and strategies that appeared to
- mitigate social media’s potential harmful influence and are consistent with dimensions of positive body image” (122)
- thinspiration” and “fitspiration” (115) “Body dissatisfaction” (114)
Wedad Mourtada, Week 15 Blog Post
Rushdie and Ngugi discussion question
It’s better to preserve a culture’s history by encouraging writers to write in their home languages. Writers should write in a language that delivers their messages clearly and accurately. This is most definitely the language they identify with, the language that feels most natural to them. This also means that they can write in English if it feels natural to them. Rushdie expresses how the English language is flexible, allowing Indian children to use it to their advantage. He argues that “assisted by the English languages’ enormous flexibility, and size, they are carving out large territories for themselves within its frontiers.” However, writing in the English language takes away from the importance of the mother tongue; it’s why people often forget about their culture. Some may argue that it is better to write in English because more people can understand it. However, that doesn’t make sense because as writers compose a piece, they have an intended audience in mind; they want their writing to reach a target audience. So, when a writer writes in their home language, they want their audience to be people who understand the language because that’s how they’ll understand the message the author is trying to convey. Take Ngũgĩ, for example. He did everything in his power to write a novel in his home language, Gĩkũyũ. Ngũgĩ states, “I wrote it on the only paper available to me, which was toilet paper.” He’s so passionate about writing in his mother tongue that he wrote it on toilet paper because it was the only thing available to him in jail. Ngũgĩ wanted to send a clear message about injustice, and there was no way to do that if he wrote it in English because then he’d give in to the unjust system. In addition, Ngũgĩ believes that not being able to write in his home language gives one language power over the other. He explains that he composed a few pieces in English but wasn’t criticized for it but when he wrote his home language he was imprisoned. Writers should freely write in their home language to show appreciation for their culture. I only know how to write in Arabic and English, and I’m not discouraged from writing in Arabic.
Atai Isaev, Blog Writing, Week 15
My honest opinion is it really does not matter at all which language you write in. But for the sake of the argument, I will say it’s better to write in English. As Ngugi remarks, there are some places around the world where if you use a language other than English, you might get prosecuted in some way. “How come that a post-colonial African government has put me in prison for writing in an African language?” In some cases, it seems like whether you use English or not is similar to wearing a mask: whether you chose to wear a mask or not is a political statement and people will bash you about that. In that sense, if using English is a safe choice, then why wouldn’t you go with that? As Rushdie observes, English is growing into the culture of post-colonized countries: “What seems to me to be happening is that those peoples who were once colonized by the language are now rapidly remaking it, domesticating it, becoming more and more relaxed about the way they use it—assisted by the English language’s enormous flexibility and size, they are carving out large territories for themselves within its frontiers.” He also states that the whole English v. local language debate is pretty outdated nowadays, and only the older folk seem to be bothered by it. Forcing people to write in their home languages to “preserve culture” is pretty silly in itself. First of all, who are we to tell them what to do? Second of all, there is no intrinsic value in culture, it’s just people’s ego driving them to take pride in their culture.
I personally do not feel discouraged to write in any language because it’s really not a big deal what language you write in.
11/17 Response
- Why is European food considered healthier than American food? Sub-question(s): What causes American food to be unhealthy? Do certain eating habits cause Europeans to be considered “healthier”? Are there certain ingredients that are different in each country’s food?
- Gallo’s argument is controversial. This is because what he says is that surveillance unifies people. He thinks this because surveillance is kind of like brainwashing, in the sense that people are told what to do and what not to do. There are some positives to surveillance but there are also some negatives. One of these negatives is that in order to conduct surveillance, you must invade a person’s personal space. There is a simple saying for this issue, if it helps, it is good, if it doesn’t, it is bad.
- Gallo uses a part of Frank Rudy Cooper’s article as evidence for his claim. The article in question is about how the government spies on people and how everyone in society is spied on. The article also demonstrates the ways people react when they find out they are getting spied on. This then divides society into two sections, those who follow the social norms, and those who do not. After reading the article, I have come to the conclusion that this article was used to support Gallo’s argument for surveillance. This article explained how people were spied on through surveillance technologies, which is what Gallo was trying to prove through his argument. There is also the ways people react to being spied on. In public people don’t seem to care, while in private people have a big problem with it. This supports Gallo’s argument in a different way then Gallo was trying to argue.
Ibrahim Rauf, 11/17, Reading Response
- Do smartphones cause more harm than good? 1. Smartphones cause brain damage. 2.Smartphones can cause eye strain from overuse. 3. The materials used to make smartphones are highly toxic. 4. Smartphones increase anxiety and stress.
- Gallo argues that public awareness influences society’s behavior. he explained how prisoners change their behavior because of being watched by others because they understand there is a detrimental effect if something goes wrong. a court case was attempting to determine the relationship between the two. Since a lot of people believed that there was a violation of people’s privacy According to this, young black men are more likely to be prosecuted for crimes than white men.
- Crary, D. Interracial marriages surge across U.S. USA Today.
11/17 Jordan Hernandez
- Why don’t schools teach investments and why it’s important. Why is Learning Personal finance important? Why is Learning this at a younger age important? Is it good to learn about investments?
2. Gallo when writing this he talks about both sides and how it can either be beneficial or harmful. Public surveillance can help people such as swimming coaches keep clean and be watched. He also talks about how there was a strong belief back in the nineteenth century about privacy, but due to this there was domestic violence on women in households. A lot of people have different beliefs top this topic. It is very controversial. The outcome to a topic like this can affect someones life. This topic depends how you view it personally and what you belief about surveillance.
3. Gallo uses a source and quotes it. The source he uses is ” The Circle” by David Eggers. The reason why Gallo uses this source is because he wants to show how Mercer (a character) gets out of surveillance. Gallo uses this to support his views (why its negative). Surveillance in competitive swimming for the youth is an argument that Gallo supports. The source he uses to back up his view is, “Swimming and conformity in competitive youth swimming” , which was written by Melanie Lang. He uses this to support one if his arguments, which focuses on surveillance in competitive youth swimming. Both of the source the Gallo used were good as they both supported the arguments that he was trying to make.