Dear Ms. Jones,

I received a B- on my most recent English paper and I believe that I wrote an A paper. I spent so many hours and days researching and planning out my paper. I didn’t start the actual writing of my paper until I had a whole outline planned out and many resources backing up my paper. It then still took me a few days to even get my paper written down. I truly believe that it was an excellent paper, which had many arguments and sources backing it up. I would like to go over my paper with you so that I can see where my mistakes are and see if we can boost up my grade. Please let me know when you are available.

Thank you,

Etan Grosinger