My biggest problem in writing my essay was “describing the classroom”. At first I thought that this meant that I had to describe its physical appearance, and I found it impossible to do that for 3-5 pages. I ended up only writing about a page. So then I realized that I could go much more in depth and I watched some videos about education that coincidentally related to the topic of chapter 3 exactly.
So I started over completely. I was concerned with whether or not starting over was a good idea. But I decided to go for it. My revision consisted of me sitting and writing ideas that would become the topic of my paragraphs, or main points. Then I would elaborate on them.
I’m also concerned with how much outside information we can use. Because I learned some things about education, and I’m not sure if it will be considered outside research.