Paper number two is really interesting. This assignment has made me think about many things surrounding our educational system. As I wrote my first and second draft, I thought about many ideas that could help our education system improve. Even though we are limited in this paper and I cannot write everything that came to my mind, it felt good to think about so many ways I could help improve education a classroom. As I have developed many interesting ideas, I’m stilling having trouble putting them in paper. I feel like my brain is just throwing so many different ideas onto the paper that it’s hard to get my ideas together.
I feel like a good strategy would be thinking about one type of technology and writing about how it would change a subject taught in school, but yet again if I choice to do that I feel like I would be very limited. Limited in the sense that I would not be able to fully express how feel and my ideas to how I think a 21st classroom should look like. This is a very interesting paper to write and it will be very interesting to see the outcome of this paper. I just need to get my ideas organized and develop a well-written thesis sentence.
Nilson–seems like you are on the right track! I would love to hear about the kind of technology & writing you settle on and how it turns into your thesis. EJK