I feel very confident about my final essay. I feel I raised a credible argument from Eileen Myles’ “Kids Show: 1991”. Finding a source for my research was harder that I anticipated. I found a source from the NY Times’ blog that I believe will suffice. With this essay being at least 5 pages in length, this essay obviously required more effort and time than the other ones and I feel that this is my best one yet. I analyzed the poem while including my sources and arguing my point.
The writing groups we had in class helped me a lot. Hearing feedback from my peers, whether it was positive or negative, allowed me to revise my essay with ease. My meeting with Professor Kaufman helped me as well. I gained an understanding of what I need to do in order to write a great essay.