After we had the in class writing groups and we looked at each other’s paper, I found that it is really important to find something that you are really interested in to do this paper. My peers read my paper and their comments helped me a lot because I was able to know if other people get my ideas after they read my paper. Also, I found that I have a lot of grammatical errors. I used the advices that they gave me to revise my paper.
The concerns that I have about this paper so far is that I am not sure if my idea is clear enough and if I used enough quotes to support my idea. Another problem that I have is that I don’t know if I connect my idea to the poem enough. When I started revising, I read the whole paper first. I found that I need more quotes from the poem to connect to my idea because I just used one quote from the poem in my rough draft. Besides, the paragraph that talks about my own experience was way too long, so I need to break them up into few paragraphs.