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I know I’m suppose to upload the video to the blog, but I’m having trouble at the moment so this is my backup, still trying though.

After having the individual conferences with Professor Kaufman. I realized that I have to focus more on the structure and how the author write what she writes. Even though her personal life would be interesting to know, I have to … Continue reading →

I have been looking over my paper and I realized that I have not been creative or specific enough. Going to the individual conference really helped. During that time, I wrote a whole different thesis and got it approved by … Continue reading →

For my first draft i did not have a thesis statement at all and neither was creating an argument.  I really wanted to work on ”The Raven” by Edgar Allen Poe.  At first, i thought it was going to be … Continue reading →

I finished recording today for my digital project. There was a lot of editing that had to be done. Overall, it was a pretty fun project to do. However, when I uploaded it to YouTube as an HD 720p file, … Continue reading →

After breaking my poem apart like I should have the first time I found my self with some what an argument still don’t think its very strong. I can work my way around it and back up my thesis with … Continue reading →

I’m trying something new with this paper, not sure how it will turn out yet, but I don’t think that is a bad thing. I really like the reading that I got from the individual conferences. I don’t know how … Continue reading →

I feel very confident about my final essay. I feel I raised a credible argument from Eileen Myles’ “Kids Show: 1991”. Finding a source for my research was harder that I anticipated. I found a source from the NY Times’ … Continue reading →

My rough draft of my essay was a great start, but going to my individual conference with professor gave me things in my paper I needed to fix. My paper lacked strong analysis. Although I made strong points the arguement … Continue reading →