Assignment 3 abstract

What is your research question/rhetorical situation?

My research question is what causes a person to lose a voice or be unable to speak?

What is your connection to rhetorical situations and why are you uniquely placed to write about it?

My connection to a rhetorical situation is I personally struggle with speaking up for what I want growing up.

Where do you imagine your writing “existing”? (newspaper, magazine, youtube, personal blog)

youtube

Who is your target audience?

it would have to be people who struggle with having a voice and being unable to speak what their minds

What form will your writing take? (Research paper, narrative, letter, script.)

narrative

Why is this form the most effective way to communicate to your target audience?

The reason for youtube is because instead of an article saying “oh I struggle with a voice and this is how I came through ”. There’s a person telling you how they felt during this experience and what their advice is. You’ll most likely listen since you’re going through the same thing which helps you connect with them.

What is the value you’re trying to impart on your audience?

Sometimes you may lose your voice for whatever the things but don’t give up finding it back step outside your comfort zone.

Calbo Dinnerware

The name of this artifact is called Calbo Dinnerware. This entire set was made in 1950. The name itself influenced me by telling me what the set actually is. If the name wasn’t there I actually wouldn’t have known this was dinner where I thought it would be a picnic item. The creator behind this artwork is named Colette Bocarra; what we can see through her pottery is one of the earliest versions of Calbo Dinnerware. Sure, we have seen how Colbo Dinnerware looks like before but have you seen a design that looks like that before. During the time the artist created her work there weren’t as many women who went into the architect field even though she graduated from her university of Buenos Aires even though she was only one of the 6 women who actually graduated from that school. 

I think the artist chose to create this set due to the lack of creativity a female can provide. During that Women weren’t allowed to get a job so designing was out of the question. I think she made this so she can prove to people that even females can design artwork and such. What she wants to get across to her female audience is there’s more out than being a housewife. I personally think the purpose of this artwork is to give you an idea of what it was like living in that era. It is pretty different compared to modern times. Not to mention the artwork shape and design can give us an idea on what the artist was thinking when making this in the process. By looking at it, a person is better than looking at it from a book or online. If it is from either one of these sources the most I would think of is “oh wow this is something I didn’t know about this artwork or cool I didn’t even know this artwork existed until now”. However if I look at it in person I would be amazed how the artist was able to construct the artwork. It gave you a whole new experience because you’re actually seeing it in front of you and it real. 

The message of this artifact would be directed to women because of what was happening at that time. I think the author wanted to say if they create work and make something out of their own two hands why can’t the rest of the women follow in her footsteps as well. The artwork does require some familiarity with what’s going on considering it was the 1950 it made sense why the dinnerware was made. It may not be an artwork fully but it does tell people women’s creative design is no less than a man’s back in the day. She wants women to get out of the house and start to think about what they want to do in life. The artifact itself gave me a calming feeling like I’m in the woods looking at the breeze the wind blows through my hair and feeling the cooling breeze nature provided for me but it’s mostly because of the color that give that type of feeling. 

Overall the author presents the argument of the piece could be why aren’t there more women in the architect field better yet any field with its design. This was the first time I saw a design like this back in the 1950 this just proves how little the industry lacks womens even if they think they don’t need it they actually do. This set of dinnerware is proof women can make something as amazing as this; they just weren’t given a chance to do it on their own yet. Colette Bocarra was one of the few that did so she decided to expand her ideas on the architect side and created these types of designs.

a voice assignment 2

Sometimes I look around me seeing all these people who could easily start a conversation. When people say it is very easy to speak what you want but have you thought of the consequences. Today I will be introducing you to two authors Mary Donovan Turner ,and Mary Lin Hudson from finding women’s voice in preaching and our other author who is Malcolm Hill from Children’s Voices on Ways of Having a Voice who will be telling us about the struggles of a person not voicing their opinion; it could be both young and adults. To understand how a person loses their voice some authors might use pathos, logos and personal experience on this matter. 

We’ll start with how both authors structured their work. The first one we’re going to take a look at is Malcolm Hill’s work. His topic was about Children’s voice on ways of having a voice. In this book he stated based on the research he did, kids can have their own opinion but compared to the adults they keep their mouth shut. It has a more of an informative tone where he talks about the outcome of his research and why children don’t have a voice sometimes. What he noticed is children only respond when an adult asks them to. The author had a structure where he first used logos to explain the way children communicate is a lot different than adults which is why at first it takes time to understand what they want. Malcom Hill also described “how difficult it was to obtain a children’s perspective since the pattern of a child speaking is different compared to an adult”(Malcom Hill). From reading this I realize we don’t really pay attention to what children really think. 

Let’s take a look at the second authors we’ll be reviewing Mary Donovan Turner ,and Mary Lin Hudson to be saved to silence. Unlike Malcolm’s work they talked about how a lost woman is when her voice is silent. The tone they gave is more of a serious tone. the topic itself isn’t lighthearted when they talk about how a woman loses themselves over time. In chapter 6 the author uses Pathos to pull people in by having us look at just how a women’s wings torn by the chains that held them. By the words they used “you feel like you saw that women felt being trapped in an isolated room forgetting who they once were” (Mary Donovan Turner ,and Mary Lin Hudson). What is similar about these to articles is how they both go into depth on how the atmosphere around them shapes them into having a voice. However this subject was different, one as children and the other as an adult. 

Why don’t we talk about the inventions of both authors? In Malcolm Hill’s book he said that a lot of the time the atmosphere around the children can give them a different perspective on having a voice. This has to due with personal experience here the children learned it best not to speak when this type of event has occurred. It proves my point “when they are faced with a group of strangers they would barely talk because they weren’t comfortable”.(Malcolm Hill) This is the cause and effect here. The cause of this is the child was being sat next to people they didn’t know. The outcome of this would  be they wouldn’t communicate with each other like they lost their voice because they weren’t comfortable to be the first one to do so. 

The second authors Mary Donovan Turner ,and Mary Lin Hudson idea of a voice is a lot more different. The main point of their book would be why a woman loses their voice which is the cause. This book is comparing modern times and the New testament . During that time women have already lost their voice for centuries because what they were taught, they used a metaphor in the book explaining people can’t find out women have their own thoughts. The effect of this would be how the author explains as a woman you should never abandon your voice, sure it might seem like nothing but the moment you throw it away you lose something to defend yourself. In this personal experience the author has told us many times the struggles of women thinking a voice is nothing but it the only thing a woman could use to fight back.

both of these books are link to my memory in different ways. For the first one about children’s finding a voice it has to do with the fact children will be affected by what’s around how they choose to use that voice when they have someone to agree with or an adult has given permission. That was me when I was younger. I always want to agree with my friends thinking this is the best way to fit in. or in saved from silence they said “There’s a struggle for lost of voice or to authorize”.(Mary Donovan Turner ,and Mary Lin Hudson). I would say it kind of does link to me as I grew older I realize losing a voice is a lot more serious than it looks. You can voice your own opinion on this matter.

Based on both books alone I can say each of them were both focusing on a voice but their main focus is completely different. Each author demonstrated that a voice can still be there, it is just that we need to learn how to use it properly with the correct guides, otherwise the person who is struggling might think it better to close the voice that helps them. The respective authors had a different way of telling their topic one is through analysis while the other look over at society and comparing it to before to see how much has it changed.

Rashomon

Give a brief outline of the plot (action) of the film?

a woodcutter went to the woods to cut some woods but find a men’s dead body instead. He answered those questions in court then came in the women who was raped the guy who raped her and the dead person. Each of their stories were different but had the ending of the men dying. 

What are the main symbols in the film, what do they represent?

The main symbol of this film is the rashomon gate. What the gate represents is how civilization began to fall apart the more you look at it. No matter who’s story we’re hearing there’s always a hint of a lie while mixing it with the truth. In the story no one is innocent.

How is the structure of the film important to the telling of this story?

I think the structure is important for the story. The way they laid out for us each story was different when out of a person’s mouth even if they were somewhat telling the truth they all lied. In this movie unlike the others there is no truth in this one each one of them had their own motive while doing this.

In what ways does social media exacerbate the Rashomon effect by allowing for the rapid spread of conflicting narratives and perspectives on current events? It exacerbates the Rashomon effect by telling us sometimes it doesn’t matter if what they said isn’t the truth, they just care about what they can gain from this. Like in Rashomon the women didn’t really tell us what happen but gave us a different story. if she told “yea I wanted my husband and Tajomaru to get into a fight and who wins gets to get me kill myself or take me away”. The consequences aren’t going to work in her favor. Or what Tajomaru said, he said he had a good fight with her husband but died he was impressed since he had 22 cross-sword match with him and people only survive 20 but in reality they were scared to attack each afraid they’ll if it wasn’t the fact the husband’s sword got stuck on a tree that wouldn’t have happened. Why didn’t he tell everyone what actually happened? It might be because of his memories. This is what actually happened which is there’s third eye that revealed the actual story.This is just like social media. There are many stories behind the incident but there is no truth because even though the crazy story might have come from the truth that doesn’t mean it is the truth. You could still say yes this happened today but it was a completely different story to what really happened. Not to mention there isn’t only one story so people might twist the story without even knowing because of perspective wise.

The Tempest

My favorite of the live plays would probably have to be when Ariel was singing. Her voice was very peaceful and calming despite the fact she only had a guitar with her. My least favorite part of the play would be how hard it is to follow along with the story because one second we are here but then we move on to this part so it is hard to keep up. The live reading helps me alter my perception by having a person there acting it for me. If it was just reading it I would have looked into myself and tried to figure what the character was thinking based on their lines alone. Since the lines can only tell me what the character is feeling I can’t really capture the exact emotion they felt. Basically you can’t connect with the character since you only get an idea. However if it’s an actor there’s someone who can project how the character actually felt in the situation it would give me a better idea and it helps dig deeper on why they did this instead of something else. Which is why with an actor you can feel the atmosphere they created like you’re there with them.

SQQ

story: A voice is important

situation: Understanding that losing a voice can losing something valuable, it takes a process to get it back and it might not fully recover.

Question 1: When losing a voice what are the struggles?

Question 2: What are some of the biggest reason that causes someone to not voice their opinion or not being able to say no

Question 3: Can the people around them shape how their voice is being used

The Reason why I care about this topic is because I personally struggled with having a voice I wanted to know what behind the reason people can’t speak up. I’m sure I’m not the only one who struggle with this type of issue. I want them to understand they might not fully get their voice back but you’re at least trying to step out your comfort zone. Most importantly I don’t want the reader to end up like who got into a toxic relationship and couldn’t do much about it,

The readers should care about this topic because you have to realize not having a voice doesn’t sound like much of a issue until you got pushover or the struggles of wanting to say something but is afraid. Sure to some people they think it easy for them to say anything they wanted but it not for certain people we would prefer to keep our mouths which is how we lost it, the more we choose to not to speak the harder it is for us to tell people what we want. I think it would be a good idea for the readers to get a glimpse of what’s it like struggling to say what you want.

Distraction/Attention worksheet

Describe your overall ability to pay attention when it comes to school work (<100 words)   On a scale of 1 – 10, indicate how addicted you are to you phones
I would say my overall ability to pay attention to school work would be a 9. It usually depends there are days where it very easy for me to focus but when I actually start focusing there a really good chance I won’t take my eyes off of it until I finished completing the work. However that doesn’t mean I don’t get distracted even when I’m focus unless I’m too focus on the work. On a scale of 1-10 when it comes to my phone I would have to say a ten I can’t stop using it everyday.    
While reading “My Distraction Sickness” please note how long it takes you to get through the piece (Google says it’s a 45 min read); also, count the number of times you get distracted (for whatever reason) and tally them at the end.
12  
Describe the tone of all three articles, how do they differ? (<100 words)
What’s different in these three articles is in My distraction sickness the author talks about how phone is a issue he’s using a argumentative tone saying how phone took away every aspect of our lives we’re slowly losing ourselves.While defense of distraction had a more defensive tone he explained distraction can be a bad thing but that doesn’t mean there isn’t a good side to it. He explained kids are becoming knowledge of things grandparents wouldn’t know thanks to technology. While the third tone is more of a informative tone it not positive or negative just states the effects distractions have on us  
What are Sam Anderson’s primary arguments in defense of distraction? (see part III of In Defense of Distraction) Do you find them convincing? Why or why not (<150 words)
His main argument for defense against distraction would be there’s positive sides of being distracted for example people with ADHD can see things we never noticed. Not to mention he also stated the fact our brain can’t stay focus on one thing for long periods of time we will get distracted no matter what. In his argument he also stated despite the fact technology is rapidly growing and can be distracting but that doesn’t mean the kids in this day and age aren’t smart there are several things we knew that the elders don’t. I do find them convincing because he’s right no matter what we are doing we will get distracted let say I’m copying notes even if I am paying attention to what I’m copying there is no doubt I may think of something else in the process and for the technology part I agree just because technology is distracting that doesn’t mean there isn’t a advantage towards this    
After reading all three articles, what are your thoughts on this “epidemic of distraction”? (<50 words)
I agree on the fact technology can make our minds more distracting then it has to be however that doesn’t mean it doesn’t have benefits of it own. Distraction might not always be a bad thing our mind gets distracted because it can’t handle being concentrated on a activity for too long the brain needs a break from it.    
Please annotate “My Distraction Sickness” – highlight at least three instances for each of the following rhetoric concepts: InventionStyle Memory Pathos Ethos
Invention “” You are where your attention is. If you’re watching a football game with your son while also texting a friend” Truly being with another person means being experientially with them, picking up countless tiny signals from the eyes and voice and body language and context, and reacting, often unconsciously, to every nuance” “s. For the subtle snare of this new technology is that it lulls us into the belief that there are no downsides”   Style “When we enter a coffee shop in which everyone is engrossed in their private online worlds, we respond by creating one of our own” “You need to build an ability to just be yourself and not be doing something. That’s what the phones are taking away,” “I suspect it has simply made us less unhappy, or rather less aware of our unhappiness, and that our phones are merely new and powerful antidepressants of a non-pharmaceutical variety”Memory ” I arrived at the meditation retreat center a few months after I’d quit the web, throwing my life and career up in the air. I figured it would be the ultimate detox. And I wasn’t wrong. After a few hours of silence, you tend to expect some kind of disturbance, some flurry to catch your interest. And then it never comes.” I’d spent the previous nine months honing my meditation practice, but, in this crowd, I was a novice and a tourist. (Everyone around me was attending six-week or three-month sessions.) The silence, it became apparent, was an integral part of these people’s lives — and their simple manner of movement, the way they glided rather than walked, the open expressions on their faces, all fascinated me.”  “, unexpectedly, on the third day, as I was walking through the forest, I became overwhelmed. I’m still not sure what triggered it, but my best guess is that the shady, quiet woodlands, with brooks trickling their way down hillsides and birds flitting through the moist air, summoned memories of my childhood.”Pathos “We hide our vulnerabilities, airbrushing our flaws and quirks; we project our fantasies onto the images before us. Rejection still stings — but less when a new virtual match beckons on the horizon.” “You never feel completely sad or completely happy, you just feel … kinda satisfied with your products. And then you die. So that’s why I don’t want to get a phone for my kids” “Yes, online and automated life is more efficient, it makes more economic sense, it ends monotony and “wasted” time in the achievement of practical goals. But it denies us the deep satisfaction and pride of workmanship that comes with accomplishing daily tasks well, a denial perhaps felt most acutely by those for whom such tasks are also a livelihood — and an identity.”  
Ethos “This changes us. It slowly removes — without our even noticing it — the very spaces where we can gain a footing in our minds and souls that is not captive to constant pressures or desires or duties. And the smartphone has all but banished them.” ” imagine if more secular places responded in kind: restaurants where smartphones must be surrendered upon entering, or coffee shops that marketed their non-Wi-Fi safe space?” “yet our need for quiet has never fully gone away, because our practical achievements, however spectacular, never quite fulfill us. They are always giving way to new wants and needs, always requiring updating or repairing, always falling short.”

your voice is important

Your voice is important 

I always remembered I’m that type of person who rarely speaks when meeting new people. Apart from being shy it has to do with the fact I’ve gotten used to not speaking and letting the orders take the show. This also caused me to be scared of voicing my opinion and what I want for this, as a matter of fact I was afraid of how they would look at me. It was like a wall in front of me that I wanted to cross but I couldn’t because I lost the courage to. If I’m going to be honest I don’t know when this began to happen but if I were to give a certain recap it was when I first started elementary school or where I first came to New york. I just know I lost something valuable for me and I need it back. 

 The first year in Kindergarten I was still the girl who was confident and didn’t care what people think, but I was hit with a brick in first grade. During kindergarten I had acquaintances so it wasn’t too bad because I had people to hangout with. However during first grade that felt really lonely for me I had no one to talk to. I think I slowly began to think if I followed them and didn’t object, I would be able to have people to play with me. That is when I began to lose my voice and I didn’t even realize how horrible it would be for me to lose that voice. I never even thought to realize I say no or being alone is happier than being forced to do something I didn’t want to do well guess what that was what third grade was like for me. I remember playing with a group of friends when they wanted to act out what they saw on the cartoon I just went along with what the character they assigned me to. I may not like the character but if I want to fit in that is what I have to do. 

I didn’t start to see the effects until middle to highschool. When I had to make my decision I started to realize how important a voice is. However there is one step back at this I can’t voice out my concerns because I lost that courage many years ago. I wouldn’t even be able to connect my young self with my certain self. She used to be full of ideas and wasn’t afraid of anything. I felt I lost that part of myself looking back. I want to go back to her. There are times my mom would bring it up to me that you’re younger self was never afraid to speak her opinion. She wants me to turn back to my younger self but it isn’t as easy as it sounds. Finding that self is a long process especially since stepping outside my comfort zone is something I haven’t done in years so it is difficult for someone who has been in her bubble for too long. 

Now that I sit and remember a few incidents that happened a lot of them were caused by me not voicing my opinion. One of them was when my friend created my character. This was back when I really liked making characters back in middle school. If I didn’t give in and let her do what she wanted, maybe things wouldn’t end so badly. A vivid memory is when we were at the gym during free time for me and my friends. While the rest of my friends were busy fooling around I was talking to her about our characters. She pulled out her phone to show me how she created my character and she changed my character’s bangs which was something I didn’t like. However I alway seem to let things slide and didn’t bother to argue. There were time where a voices in my head afterwards asking myself “why didn’t I just tell her I was uncomfortable with what she’s doing but then there’s going to be another set of voice telling me “what if she doesn’t want to hangout with you anymore”.which is why it made me think it would be easy for both of us if I just let it slide. I was wrong. I should have said I won’t budge. I only bothered to argue once and just didn’t talk about it. I didn’t want it to be tiring about that conversation although I was upset I didn’t argue about it any further. I learned later on if you felt you didn’t like how this is going you should speak and not just agree if only I learn that when all this happens maybe that way the relationship wouldn’t be so toxic. 

My mom has told me this several times “you have to have your own thoughts, don’t be dragged around instead”. That means I need to learn how to fight back or object to the things I didn’t like the fact I was struggling, I’ll admit that and I still struggle with it till this day. Having a voice is tough for me besides the fact I feel that people may not agree with me which makes me feel it is better to keep my mouth but it is also because what if someone doesn’t back me up. So this would lead me to rethink about the incident between my ex friend and I. It was like a replay that constantly pops in my head and thinking about it was a reminder to me that the second time this occurs it won’t follow the same path as the first one. I am learning to accept the fact that it will be a struggle being unafraid to speak or rejecting someone if I’m not comfortable but I now feel more comfortable when speaking towards people. There is one issue I hate to admit I still let it slide for my friends sometimes but I have a boundary I won’t let them cross this time. 

James Baldwin Vs William Buckley

February 26 2024

What is interesting between these two speeches is James Baldwin stated despite the fact they have citizenship they would never be able to receive the same treatment as whites. Kind of ironic isn’t it. In the first part of the speech it was stated that “you’re rooting for Gary but what shocking is he’s killing the Indians and the Indians are you”. I feel that that statement alone shows despite the face we’re rooting for Americans, they’re turning their backs on us. While William Buckley stated this is all false and that America has treated them like an American citizen and when James Baldwin claimed about the cheap labor and having to pick cotton to the market William Buckley responded with the fact that whites can also have the same wages as him. The Debate behind these two is James Baldwin stated it has been 100 years since the 15th amendment if civil rights isn’t honored then I don’t know how it’s honored now. While William Buckley said it was necessary and we are making this process faster for them. A Ethos that James Balwin had stated would be “by the time you see this happening in your daughter, your son, your niece or your nephew. You are 30 by now and nothing you have done has helped you to escape the trap”. Another Logos would be “One of the things the white world does not know is that black people are just like everybody else. We are also mercenaries, dictators and liars”. While for William Buckley a pathos would be “shall we descend on it and uproot all the literature that depends on the teachings of Pathos and Aristotle because they justified slavery”. The Pathos for him would be “What should James Baldwin be doing other than telling us to re announce our civilization he should be addressing his people and urging them to take advantage of those opportunities which do exist”.

A voice is important

I always remembered I’m that type of person who rarely speaks when meeting new people. Apart from being shy it has to do with the fact I’ve gotten used to not speaking and letting the orders take the show. This also caused me to be scared of voicing my opinion and what I want for this, as a matter of fact I was afraid of how they would look at me. It was like a wall in front of me that I wanted to cross but I couldn’t because I lost the courage to. If I’m going to be honest I don’t know when this began to happen but if I were to give a certain recap it was when I first started elementary where I first came to New york.

 The first year in Kindergarten I was still the girl who was confident and didn’t care what people think, but I was hit with a brick in first grade. During kindergarten I had acquaintances so it wasn’t too bad because I had people to hangout with. However during first grade that felt really lonely for me I had no one to talk to. I think I slowly began to think if I followed them and didn’t object, I would be able to have people to play with me. That is when I began to lose my voice and I didn’t even realize how horrible it would be for me to lose that voice. I never even thought to realize I say no or being alone is happier than being forced to do something I didn’t want to do well guess what that was what third grade was like for me. I remember playing with a group of friends when they wanted to act out what they saw on the cartoon I just went along with what the character they assigned me to. I may not like the character but if I want to fit in that is what I have to do. 

I didn’t start to see the affects until middle to highschool. Where I had to make my decision I start to realize how important a voice is. However there is one step back at this I can’t voice out my concerns because I lost that courage many years. I wouldn’t even be able to connect my young self with my certain self she used to be full of ideas and isn’t afraid of anything. I felt I lost that part of myself looking back. There will times my mom would bring it up to me that you’re younger self was never afraid to speak her opinion she wants me to turn back to my younger self but it isn’t as easy as it sounds. Finding that self is a long process especially since stepping outside my comfort zone is something I haven’t done in years so it is difficult for someone who has been in her bubble for too long. 

Now that I sit and remember a few incidents that happened a lot of them were caused by me not voicing my opinion. One of them was when my friend created my character. This was back when I really liked making characters back in middle school. If I didn’t give in and let her do what she wanted, maybe things wouldn’t end so badly. I alway seem to let things slide and didn’t bother to argue. I thought it would be easy for both of us if I just let it slide. I was wrong. I should have said I won’t budge. I only bothered to argue once and just didn’t talk about it. I didn’t want it to be tiring about that conversation although I was upset I didn’t argue about it any further. I learned later on if you felt you didn’t like how this is going you should speak and not just agree if only I learn that when all this happens maybe that way the relationship wouldn’t be so toxic. 

My mom has told me many times “you have to have your own thoughts, don’t be dragged around instead”. That means I need to learn how to fight back or object to the things I didn’t like. I was struggling I’ll admit that and I still struggle with it till this day. Having a voice is tough for me besides the fact I feel that people may not agree with me which makes me feel it is better to keep my mouth but it is also because what if someone doesn’t back me up. There were times I would rewind the incident and think about it gave me a lesson that I didn’t want the second incident to happen. I learn to accept the fact it will be a struggle being unafraid to speak whatever I want but I’m learning to voice my opinion more whenever I feel comfortable. 

teachable moment

A teachable moment for me I would say have to be when I learn how important having a voice is. You see when I was younger I always went with the flow. I didn’t really know what I wanted to do or had the ability to say the word no. This is due to me having the fear of classmates not wanting to hangout with me. I wanted to fit in. Which is why whatever my classmates did I went with their idea despite it not being what I want sometimes. I was scared to be alone. Next thing you know I was going from middle to highschool. I still struggle with having a voice. I know a lot of people would say it’s easy to reject something but you have to realize I lost my voice for a long time so it takes a while to get back up. Sometimes I also look at myself and ask why can’t you say no this isn’t something you wanted to look at her she could easily do it why can’t you. These events taught me that if I don’t have a voice this will happen where an imbalance relationship can occur.

Thoughts by me

By Amy Wang

January, 29,2023

My writing journey so far has taught me a lot. There are certain areas that the class taught which I never paid attention to for example, an argument looking back I learn if an argument wants to be successful not only would you need to back it up with evidence you also need a counter argument otherwise it is not debatable. Not to mention our writing views can be different if we look at painting we may think this is what the painting is telling us but the person next to us might think of it differently. My goals for this class would be trying to understand how deep I can dig into a writing piece. Sometimes I feel that if I was only able to dig on the surface would I be able to go into depths? There is something else I want to know in this class where I can gather more ideas to write on a certain project. This is something I struggle with finding more ideas on what to write because I feel that I already talk about everything I know about this paper, however the requirements aren’t met yet. Something that anxious me during writing is probably the structure of the writing I find it difficult to connect the paragraphs this connects back to my last struggle due to the fact I ran of ideas on what to write I want to move on to the next topic however what if the two paragraphs don’t connect to each other which can make the entire essay look unclear.