Journal post #13

In this workshop I noticed a few things about my paper, my thesis was one that could not be argued so in effect would not make for a good paper. While I was writing down the topic of every paragraph on the side I realized I began to sway away from the topic at hand. Most ideas were alright but didn’t really fit “dying every second to read this” category. I overlooked a few things that I caught on my own analysis and my peer helped me strengethen my main point and contributed to help my paper rid of the dreaded ” so what”