Category Archives: Personal Entry #8

Jorunal #17

Orwell in his “Politics and the English Language” criticizes contemporary English style for its horrible and inaccurate use of language. He also points out some awful and just terrible writing that went on to be published. Orwell says people use … Continue reading

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Journal 20

Clockwork Orange definitely tops the list as one of the most strangest and eeriest movies I have seen, but it’s creepy overall effect is an effective way to grab attention and insight thematic ideas. Starting with the beginning scene, we … Continue reading

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Thackeray extra credit, Ryan Chow

The clock hits 6:30AM and the alarm goes off. I hit the snooze button a few times before having to get out of the warmth and comfort of my bed. I stumble into the bathroom to get ready for yet … Continue reading

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Journal #13

Throughout the paper, I discovered that I had plenty of weaknesses and strengths. I had the ideas set down and  structured, but I did not have the proper analysis needed for the paper. My weaknesses were basically the lack of … Continue reading

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Journal #14

Three Thoughts about Huck Finn: 1. It would be interesting to see the story play on, would Huck and Jim still be together or would Huck realize that Jim has other obligations. He needs his freedom so that he can … Continue reading

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Journal #13

Writing the Huck Finn paper was at first challenging. I couldn’t come up with a good idea, or thesis no matter how hard I tried. At last I came up with something I am happy with however it still wasn’t … Continue reading

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Journal #13

During the workshop, I realize my paper is not good at all. Before the due day, I did not think through my thesis, so I put some random sentence in the paper. When we doing the outline analyzation, I took … Continue reading

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Journal #13 Personal Entry #8

The reverse outline workshop made me think of my compare and contrast essay in ways I previously had not. Honestly, I do not think that my essay was that strong at all because it was only descriptive. It had the base … Continue reading

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Journal#13

The reverse outline workshop for compare and contract essay was very beneficial. Peers gave me many advices that could make my paper more cogent. When I was wring the paper, I had difficulty putting my ideas into one arguable thesis … Continue reading

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Journal 13

The in-class workshop was very beneficial in my opinion. It gave me insight of what the reader got out of my paper compared to having the opinion of my own. What I learned from peer was that my thesis was … Continue reading

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